spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 2, 2019 Author Share Posted May 2, 2019 (edited) 5 hours ago, steve25805 said: I have finally gotten around to reading it. You have crafted an excellent story. Can't wait for the next instalment. And apologies for my tardiness. I have been extremely busy in real life and often don't look at the stories until I have plenty of spare time. I never realised until I saw your PM that you'd written another instalment. I would never ignore anything by you. No problem at all, you said two weeks ago your life would have been terribly busy for a month or so, so I suppose you won't be that free until next week to say the least!!! But yes I missed you ihihihih and I am so happy you like this story, the next installment may be a bit late cannot deny this, because I am getting through a very busy moment myself in the next week, so I am not sure when I'll write it, but the plot is already made and it will be worthy the waiting, believe me Thank you for being here!!! Edited May 2, 2019 by spywareonya 2 2 Link to post
polecat 247 Posted May 2, 2019 Share Posted May 2, 2019 2 hours ago, spywareonya said: No problem at all, you said two weeks ago your life would have been terribly busy for a month or so, so I suppose you won't be that free until next week to say the least!!! But yes I missed you ihihihih and I am so happy you like this story, the next installment may be a bit late cannot deny this, because I am getting through a very busy moment myself in the next week, so I am not sure when I'll write it, but the plot is already made and it will be worthy the waiting, believe me Thank you for being here!!! Waiting eagerly 2 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 2, 2019 Author Share Posted May 2, 2019 7 minutes ago, polecat said: Waiting eagerly Chapter 5 for sure (and maybe even chapter 6 could) will be about the party Imagine a highland town of 1000 inhabitants, on the shores of the Loch, with girls and boys used to live in a such a wild and tough place, and now imagine them completely and derangedly DRUNK The Loch will double its fluid volume HAHAHAHAHAH But it will be also important because other people will be introduced and they will be standard characters from that moment on, the Story is far from being finished believe me, I will REFRAIN from creating "pointlessly porn-like" situations, but humans have bodily needs and also they have emotions, and these would be explored in details, along with their entwinings and consequences and maybe, MAYBE, there is also SOMETHING out there... 3 Link to post
steve25805 126,015 Posted May 2, 2019 Share Posted May 2, 2019 Nancy pissing on the Loch. Nice one. Wonder if that roused Nessie's interest. Lol 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 2, 2019 Author Share Posted May 2, 2019 26 minutes ago, steve25805 said: Nancy pissing on the Loch. Nice one. Wonder if that roused Nessie's interest. Lol I cannot divulge anything about if Nessie in this story will be present or not!!! ihihihihihihi!!! 1 1 1 Link to post
Brutus 2,205 Posted May 3, 2019 Share Posted May 3, 2019 Very exciting spin on something so widely divisive, but still well known regardless. Fetish meeting horror is such a potent formula for stories. So many directions this can go in! 1 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 3, 2019 Share Posted May 3, 2019 On 5/2/2019 at 8:27 AM, spywareonya said: Chapter 5 for sure (and maybe even chapter 6 could) will be about the party Imagine a highland town of 1000 inhabitants, on the shores of the Loch, with girls and boys used to live in a such a wild and tough place, and now imagine them completely and derangedly DRUNK The Loch will double its fluid volume HAHAHAHAHAH But it will be also important because other people will be introduced and they will be standard characters from that moment on, the Story is far from being finished believe me, I will REFRAIN from creating "pointlessly porn-like" situations, but humans have bodily needs and also they have emotions, and these would be explored in details, along with their entwinings and consequences and maybe, MAYBE, there is also SOMETHING out there... Iam waiting eagerly just like the rest of us hahaha. Awesome story, I cannot wait to read the coming chapters 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 21, 2019 Author Share Posted May 21, 2019 On 5/4/2019 at 12:55 AM, Brutus said: Very exciting spin on something so widely divisive, but still well known regardless. Fetish meeting horror is such a potent formula for stories. So many directions this can go in! Indeed I am adding a spiritual darkness coming from personal reflections about the transcendental purity of absolute night THANK YOU so much for being here!!! 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 21, 2019 Author Share Posted May 21, 2019 On 5/4/2019 at 1:54 AM, speedy3471 said: Iam waiting eagerly just like the rest of us hahaha. Awesome story, I cannot wait to read the coming chapters Finally coming shortly!!! 3 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 6 hours ago, spywareonya said: Finally coming shortly!!! I cannot wait hahaha 1 1 Link to post
Peefreak99 3,722 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 This is really good im late because i don't get notifications when you post a topic i like they way you write your text has a good and steady flow and it dosen't get boring like many stories do between actions keep up the good work:) 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 21, 2019 Author Share Posted May 21, 2019 12 minutes ago, Peefreak99 said: your text has a good and steady flow and it dosen't get boring like many stories do between actions This is one of the best compliments I ever received!!! I had this inspiration to write very short and intimate chapters... 1 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 9 minutes ago, spywareonya said: This is one of the best compliments I ever received!!! I had this inspiration to write very short and intimate chapters... The key word is intimate. Your storyline and chapters are filled with it. I can feel that you out your while heart into writing 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 21, 2019 Author Share Posted May 21, 2019 9 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: The key word is intimate. Your storyline and chapters are filled with it. I can feel that you out your while heart into writing THANK YOU for these words Yes, I enter a peculiar mood when I write, my favourite chapter paradoxically is the one in the house, when the two girls wake up and start their day together, and pee is visceral (on the toilet for the first pee of the morning, with uncombed hair and no make up) yet more or less only hinted about It's the atmosphere I wanted to create, HUMAN Next chapter is in the process of writing, I need to do it carefully because I want to maximize the fun THOUGH KEEPING IT SHORT, yet I have to also introduce the next characters as the story aims at becoming a TRUE novel, published here in chapters 2 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 5 minutes ago, spywareonya said: THANK YOU for these words Yes, I enter a peculiar mood when I write, my favourite chapter paradoxically is the one in the house, when the two girls wake up and start their day together, and pee is visceral (on the toilet for the first pee of the morning, with uncombed hair and no make up) yet more or less only hinted about It's the atmosphere I wanted to create, HUMAN Next chapter is in the process of writing, I need to do it carefully because I want to maximize the fun THOUGH KEEPING IT SHORT, yet I have to also introduce the next characters as the story aims at becoming a TRUE novel, published here in chapters Your welcome. Writing is a art form, it can't be rushed and the artist/author must be in the right frame of mind 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 21, 2019 Author Share Posted May 21, 2019 8 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: must be in the right frame of mind I am But it needs polishing... 1 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 1 minute ago, spywareonya said: I am But it needs polishing... No worries. We everyone here has the patience to wait for your next chapter 2 Link to post
Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Popular Post Share Posted May 23, 2019 I have been without posting here for long so I suppose you rightfully stopped to check, I will be more constant it its updates, by now I nominate you all who loved it… enjoy!!! This is chapter FIVE, it is slightly longer than other (1 + 1/2) chapters, next ones will be back to normality as I noticed they are appreciated as swift, but if you missed one I strongly suggest you to check previous ones, in first two pages!!! Love you all!!! Enjoy!!! @steve25805 @speedy3471 @Peefreak99 @peeingone @Brutus @nopjans @chubbybirb999 @Paulypeeps @will64 @HitEmAll @Rich7 @mickymoist @polecat @Alfresco @pickle313 5 Link to post
Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Popular Post Share Posted May 23, 2019 (edited) “I’m coming!!!” Shouted Nancy toward her friend, then, to herself, “As soon as this damn bladder gets empty, ahahahah!!!” She looked between her legs, and almost lost balance when curling her head too much, laughing drunkly. A terrific stream was exploding from between her tighs, pattering violently on the flowers in a pot she was hovering upon on, next to a door. She didn’t meant to do harm, but she wanted to avoid splashes on her shoes, and could look a bit selfish in her focused attitude, sometimes… When finally relief arrived, she stopped pushing and sighed, that sincere, automatical sigh of when you stop holding breath in order to strain with your muscles… Eventually, she shook her ass up and down a bit, then ran to Gwen. Her tall and curvy friend was very busy chatting with a mixed group of people, and when the red haired one reached them, she made all the due presentations “Darling, this is my Old Party, we’ve grow up together since I can remember…” pointing all around in a circle, first to a blonde girl in black clothes, tights liquid leggins and a white shirt with curls on the bra-zone, and a black thin jacket, indeed quite elegant. She had a ponytail, her blonde straight hair were carefully held by a lovely red ribbon. “She’s… ehm…” the two laughed, and Nancy smiled herself, preparing for some lovely joke: “She’s Bonnie”. Raising an eyebrow, the red haired girl cannot prevent from showing her playful confusion, and the blondie answered, while all others laughed: “My true name is Boudibiua”. Out of instinct fueled by alcohol, the girl from abroad tried to shape her lips in order to pronounce it, and the subsequent explosion of laughter from everybody around here was a testament to how ridiculous she must have looked. “It means “She who is victorious”, my parents chose it willingly, but everybody calls me Bonnie, you can too”. Nancy smiled, and they all pointed to another girl, this time really tall and with beautiful features and natural, incredibly long curly brown hair. She had been startled by her beauty since the beginning, and was waiting for her to introduce herself. She was wearing a long skirt decorated with flowers, and a shirt with no jacket, beige and with embroidments all over, likely handcrafted. Gwen spoke for her: “She is Kaily”; “It’s a bit easier this time” she laughed, unvoluntarily interrupting Nancy’s first friend, and her voice was a bit deep, but melodious. The foreign felt a powerful, sudden hormonal rush down there. “Her name means “Social Celebration”, in the past these things were of absolute importance”. Gwen explained, again interrupted by a short but very muscular boy, his hair were straight but short, jet black, and hie eyes were smart and curious, but also playful: “Hey, what do you mean? Parties are STILL of absolute importance ahahahahahah!!!” They all laughed, and she concluded “You can call me Kay, they all do that”. Again the voice like a song, again warmth where it’s embarassing. “I’m Bryok Coeinnach Medleigh” he offered his hand to a puzzled Nancy, which shook it shyly, and he suddenly exploded in a huge laughter, “I’m joshing ahahahah” at which she raised her eyebrow even more and remained silent, “I’m Scot!!! Just Scot, no other names ahahahahah!!!” Nancy smiled, and he kept going “And this is my brother Arthur, but we all call him Art”. The guy he was now hugging was very slender, much taller and with less muscles, yet athlethic, quite different for bodily shape indeed, and yet they shared the same facial features, very similar brown eyes and black hair. Gewn took word once again: “Now all the due presentations are made, and it’s time to DRINK!!!” “Why?” jokes Scot, “Have we been doing anything else until now?” new laughter, until Art pinched his brother on the free portion of the chest, as they were both wearing black leather clothes, boots and trousers and bikers gilet. Scot looked at him, and he was pointing at two girls, wearing sandals and microscopicule skirts, both speaking german and laughing cheerfully among themselves, that went their way and surpassed them, with a glass of beer each, and then reached a dark corner of the town square near where the small group had been chatting, and casually popped a squat while still confabulating among themselves of something Nancy did not understand, as deutsch language was not among her curriculum. But she spied Kay’s reactions to that happening, both puzzled and admiring at the same time, and they all for some reasons remained silent as the two girls both put panties to one side and started to produce a visible sprinkler that formed a puddle on the pavement just a foot away from their pussies. The streams were powerful and thick, but also well defined, and they were gushing out from the secret regions of those stunning bodies, landing on the ground. Too bad that the absurd noise of the party covered the hiss and the pattering… In the dark it wasn’t possible to distinguish if they were natural or shaved, nor the colour of their undies, but the streams catched light from alla round and were almost silvery in the night. One of them kept drinking while she was urinating, and at that sight Art murmured “I must marry her”, making his brother to explode in laughter again: “Then go, what are you waiting for? Offer her a napkin ahahah!!!” He did as told. Under the staring eyes of his friends. A chorus of “Oh no he’s doing for real, he’s going he’s going” rose up from the little party while the tall raven haired boy walked nonchalantly toward them, ending up in the immediate nearby, and started to fluently converse with them in their native language. Scot was radiant and with an evil grin, they were all close friends but nobody knew they had been secretely studying deutsch, in sight of a potential expansion of their employement as websites builders. Nobody spoke, all were stunned, and when he really offered them a tissue, the party held its breath. Before their unblinking eyes, they two blondies considered the offer almost with a serious attitude, and then shook their head, just asking him something and offering him both their tankards. He took them and held them in his hands as they bounced up and down to shake their asses, then put their undies back and retrieved the big glasses of beer, taking another sip, and inviting him to join them. The group remained breathless as Art indicated them and said something to the girls, who smiled and laughed and approved. A few instant later, he was back, explaining they were all invited to stay together. “Don’t we wait for Lars?” asked Bonnie, at whose mention Gwen’s look became shadowy for an instant, but Kay exclaimed: “Lars is perfectly able to make us all wait here until down, you know him. He’s our friend, but he’s never in time”. Scot unvoluntarily showed his muscles like straining them, and replied: “Friend is a big word. I will never forget how rude he was to Gwen”. Both the curvy friend of Nancy, and Kay, lowered their eyes, and while the first one remained silent, the other one whispered “Cheating can happen… unless you are really in love… sex is too tempting” At those words, the red haired one felt she was completely melting in her privates. She felt her head veeeery light, and started breathing a bit heavy. She was brought back to normality by the angry reply of Scot himself, speaking like Gwen wasn’t there at all: “I was there, Kay. They were a serious couple and you don’t say, if caught red-handed, how did he said? “What? Do you think I could ever be satisfied with you alone? Get lost and let me finish”. Here, that’s what he said. He’s lucky he is rich, unless I would have kicked his ass there and then. And I would have fucked that girl too, sorry Gwen, ih ih”. Gwen smiled at him with good heart: “She was beautiful, and I’m sure you would have made her enjoy it much more”. Nancy remained silent, she remembered her friend’s confession about Lars being very mild among bedpans. “Ouch, why nobody ever told me this?” commented the same Kay, now a bit angered, “Nobody talks that way to my Ginny” and she hugged Gwyneth and kissed her on a cheek, “Screw Lars, let’s go with those two devils!!! But first…” Without other words, Kaw started to grip the back of her long skirt in order to raise it enough to free her bum, which exploded in full sight of Nancy’s stunned eyes, round and tight, before being lowered to the ground, producing a splashing sound and a little river of piss on the ground on her direction, all foamy, which gave her shivers. The tall girl was pissing with intensitiy, and all others were just smiling and looking distractedly all around, except for Art who was looking at the two girls to ensure they weren’t leaving, bored with waiting. It was when they shouted something at him with happy and frivolous voices, that he explained that his friend just needed a “break”, at which they both laughed. Nancy was hypnotized by that scene, and when Kay farted loudly, starting to laugh immediately after, she felt the moist of her tighs, and made her best to remain calm. She moved in order not to have her shoes in the river of piss crawling on the ground, but was amazed at discovering that her new friend had no panties under the long, flowery skirt, and was completely shaved. She shook her ass a bit, giving her a full view of that spectacle, and the let the long dress fall down again in place, before a foreign girl devoid of speech. “Aahhhh… are we going?” she smiled, and all other complied. “Nancy… come on!” Gwen called her, but she almost couldn’t move… it took all the villpower in her to step ahead and reply… “Yes… yes… I come…” Edited May 23, 2019 by spywareonya 1 3 4 Link to post
Peefreak99 3,722 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 great chapter you could make some good money on book writing you know😉 1 2 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 2 hours ago, Peefreak99 said: great chapter you could make some good money on book writing you know😉 Thank you!!! This one will be published here for free… my salary is the amusement of my friends!!! By now I introduced new characters, the story will unfold from now on... 1 3 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Wow, great story. It's nice to see the introducing of new character's looking forward to the next chapter 2 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 12 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: Wow, great story. It's nice to see the introducing of new character's looking forward to the next chapter I tried to make them realistic and cool, also because from now on the plot will begin to be manifest I promise you all next chapters things will start to get hot Let's never forget they are looking for a monster!! 2 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Just now, spywareonya said: I tried to make them realistic and cool, also because from now on the plot will begin to be manifest I promise you all next chapters things will start to get hot Let's never forget they are looking for a monster!! I have no dought they will find one lol. Awesome job 3 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 8 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: I have no dought they will find one lol. Awesome job To be honest, I am still not gonna divulge if Nessie exists or not in the story People will have psychological room for their hopes and preferencies… but things will happen And not only among people I would love to ask all my friends here some comments about the characters introduce until now Their personal preferences and opinions Nothing serious, just for talking!!! 2 2 Link to post
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