I dont read these stories sorry!

[F.W 5,734]

Sorry folks,i know you put a lot of effort into them,but im not word oriented.I very rarely read them.If they were illustrated or something i guess i would try.

But those that do,im sure you enjoy.

[steve25805 126,023]

13 minutes ago, F.W said:

Sorry folks,i know you put a lot of effort into them,but im not word oriented.I very rarely read them.If they were illustrated or something i guess i would try.

But those that do,im sure you enjoy.

It doesn't matter, FW. I only read them when I have lots of spare time. And you contribute to the forum in many other ways so it's all cool

[gldenwetgoose 21,488]

This is such an awesome forum with something for (almost) everyone. 

I have to be in the right mood for written fiction, and then there are some writing styles that make me click back on the first line. I do like the short wet carpet magazine letters though - can’t beat a first person confession. 

[gldenwetgoose 21,488]

Just a follow on thought - my phone gives the option to read text out loud - sometimes in the mood while I’m driving home I’ll have my phone read me a wet bedtime story.

(On the iPhone it’s under general > settings > accessibility > speech. You can choose the voice too, Serena is my favourite to be whispering naughtiness in my ear). 

Edited May 27, 2019 by gldenwetgoose

[mickymoist 3,513]

5 hours ago, gldenwetgoose said:

Just a follow on thought - my phone gives the option to read text out loud - sometimes in the mood while I’m driving home I’ll have my phone read me a wet bedtime story.

(On the iPhone it’s under general > settings > accessibility > speech. You can choose the voice too, Serena is my favourite to be whispering naughtiness in my ear). 

what a good idea, I never thought of that!

edit: this works pretty well 😁

Edited May 27, 2019 by mickymoist

[spywareonya 37,961]

I agree with @steve25805

 

@F.W contributions to the forum, above all with his own character and personality (and indeed Fanny when you log in less your absence IS FELT) is enough not to need excusations for lack of interest over some niches of this forum

 

Indeed the idea summoned by @gldenwetgoose is adorable, and @mickymoist immediately recognized it ihihihihhi

 

I, personally, started reading them out of curiosity and found some great stories (@nopjans PissEmpire is what brought me here on Peefans, from Literotica), but I fully understand the lack of focus about exceedingly long stories, though I love them nonetheless if written by people that REALLY know how to write like him, or also @Brutus and @polecat

 

From me, I had this inspiration to write my most recent installment, LOCH kinkiNESS, with a new attitude, which is mixing actual fiction with piss voyeurism, more a real story with piss moments rather than an erotic tale, and more than anything very, VERY short chapters, for people who got less time or interest in fiction

Results until now had been very positive and encouraging!!!

[Blackinksoul30 1,246]

I'll have to check it out Spy!! 

[spywareonya 37,961]

16 minutes ago, Blackinksoul30 said:

I'll have to check it out Spy!! 

The appreciation of another writer would be awsome!!!

You know I ABSOLUTELY NOT endorse your choice to to keep your stories to yourself, they are SURELY MASTERPIECES and you are damning us all to be deprived of the privilege to read them!!!!

Kisses!!!

[Peefreak99 3,722]

There's no obligation to read stories you should do whatever you feel like remember this site is for YOUR pleassure so nobody should feel forced to do anything and you contribute in many other ways so don't worry 

[Blackinksoul30 1,246]

1 hour ago, spywareonya said:

The appreciation of another writer would be awsome!!!

You know I ABSOLUTELY NOT endorse your choice to to keep your stories to yourself, they are SURELY MASTERPIECES and you are damning us all to be deprived of the privilege to read them!!!!

Kisses!!!

Hugs and kisses!! I do kinda wish i had the guts, courage, strength to share.. Maybe someday i'd be less scared..... but with the track record i have...of having the writing jokingly be told that it will be 'used against me' or having people rip it to shreds. 'This is horrible. you  need to fix this, change this. you need to delete this sentence. this sentence isn't write. this grammar is horrible. you're a horrible writer. this is disgusting dirty smut. you have issues why would you write this!' it wouldn't be anytime soon.

Edited May 27, 2019 by Blackinksoul30

[spywareonya 37,961]

21 minutes ago, Blackinksoul30 said:

Hugs and kisses!! I do kinda wish i had the guts, courage, strength to share.. Maybe someday i'd be less scared..... but with the track record i have...of having the writing jokingly be told that it will be 'used against me' or having people rip it to shreds. 'This is horrible. you  need to fix this, change this. you need to delete this sentence. this sentence isn't write. this grammar is horrible. you're a horrible writer. this is disgusting dirty smut. you have issues why would you write this!' it wouldn't be anytime soon.

Sorry I can't help laughing

Anybody doing it will have Admin kicking him out of the forum, my hacker friends finding his true identity and sending piss emails to all his working collegue and superiors, and a curse on his head placed by me

I had a motherfucker fired last week by cursing him: he said he had awful nightmares that night (quite funny, they had images and happenings he confessed, ahahah which I personally wrote like a psychic email) and was very distracted, and ended up having an anger-crisis telling all his bosses they were scumbags ahahahah and he got politely asked to find another place where to work HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

 

 

NOBODY would treat you like that

BUT IT'S YOUR CALL

Edited May 27, 2019 by spywareonya

[Peefreak99 3,722]

39 minutes ago, Blackinksoul30 said:

Hugs and kisses!! I do kinda wish i had the guts, courage, strength to share.. Maybe someday i'd be less scared..... but with the track record i have...of having the writing jokingly be told that it will be 'used against me' or having people rip it to shreds. 'This is horrible. you  need to fix this, change this. you need to delete this sentence. this sentence isn't write. this grammar is horrible. you're a horrible writer. this is disgusting dirty smut. you have issues why would you write this!' it wouldn't be anytime soon.

If anyone would act like that i promisse every member would go crazy on that motherfucker but i know nobody would write anything bad just look at my grammar and spelling etc i can't write perfect english nobody has ever said anything you are a part of our community and we will never allow you to be bullied here but it's your call don't write if you don't want to☺

[spywareonya 37,961]

Blackie, Peefreak is SO fucking right

[Brutus 2,206]

2 hours ago, Blackinksoul30 said:

Hugs and kisses!! I do kinda wish i had the guts, courage, strength to share.. Maybe someday i'd be less scared..... but with the track record i have...of having the writing jokingly be told that it will be 'used against me' or having people rip it to shreds. 'This is horrible. you  need to fix this, change this. you need to delete this sentence. this sentence isn't write. this grammar is horrible. you're a horrible writer. this is disgusting dirty smut. you have issues why would you write this!' it wouldn't be anytime soon.

You have to remember that no one here is a troll or jaded professional writing critic looking to pick your work apart, so you're not going to get the harsh reactions you're afraid of. Those people aren't here. I'd recommend staying off of something like Literotica until your more confident because that crowd WILL destroy your work in no uncertain terms if it's not top quality. The worst you'll get here is simply no reactions at all, or very few.

If you ever want to post here, I'd also recommend you start small, not something that you put 20 or 30 hours into. Maybe a one page short at first. And hard as it is, try to not be focused on being validated by reactions. I've worked on some fictional stories here harder and longer than anyone should for no pay, and then posted them and often gotten so little views and reactions compared to other writers that I thought maybe I should just focus on other things. Still, I wrote the story I wanted to and that's all that mattered. Telling the story YOU want to tell is when you'll be at your best in any case. But I think that given how loved and respected you are here, you will get plentiful encouragement so don't be afraid. You in particular are unique here in that we all know you write, but you haven't presented anything to us, so there is an aura of mystery and anticipation for you to make your entrance into our fictional league. Just remember, you'll won't be attacked and ridiculed.

[spywareonya 37,961]

12 minutes ago, Brutus said:

If you ever want to post here, I'd also recommend you start small, not something that you put 20 or 30 hours into

Yes, positive

It would gave @Blackinksoul30 CONTROL

 

 

Paradoxically, I personally would love to read something which she put MONTHS into, something of the like of her most private novels, even beside erotica or piss, maybe even in the general chat

 

13 minutes ago, Brutus said:

Just remember, you'll won't be attacked and ridicule

ABSOLUTELY AGREE!!!!!!!

[steve25805 126,023]

3 hours ago, Blackinksoul30 said:

or having people rip it to shreds

Let me reiterate as a mod, that if anyone here ripped one of your stories to shreds or tried in anyway to be negatively judgemental or to make you feel bad, we would come down on him or her like a ton of bricks. Such behaviour for one thing is actually against forum rules. Anyone doing that would be running the severe risk of some kind of ban. We don't want people on this forum trying to make those who contribute feel bad.

This forum is a safe space for you to post your stories. Trust me on that.

If you are unsure, might I suggest a very short one first just to dip your toe in? If you want to, that is, because it is your call. No pressure at all.

[spywareonya 37,961]

@Blackinksoul30, I know what Steve can do if he spots a troll

I have a friendship on him based on love and not fear, but I would NEVER want him as a foe

 

If he stated you are protected, you could walk on fire

 

Anyway, as he said

10 minutes ago, steve25805 said:

No pressure at all

 

Really, we are NOT pressuring you uh, just cuddling and encouraging!!

[oliver2 4,418]

(Oh for fucks sake, I’m about to say something ridiculously highbrow on a porn community)

Umberto Eco apparently wrote:

Pornographic movies are full of people who climb into cars and drive for miles and miles, couples who waste incredible amounts of time signing in at hotel desks, gentlemen who spend many minutes in elevators before reaching their rooms, girls who sip various drinks and who fiddle interminably with laces and blouses before confessing to each other that they prefer Sappho to Don Juan.

To paraphrase: the sexy bit is sexier if it’s surrounded by normal mundane stuff. (Obtains $1 bonus for bathos, will spend it on beer or coffee).

Also, editing is HARD. Editing may easily remove all the good bits. In my opinion, you should write your smutty piss fiction at whatever length pleases you!

[spywareonya 37,961]

1 hour ago, oliver2 said:

Umberto Eco

A quote for connoisseurs

Bravo

 

And I so fucking agree with all the rest

[speedy3471 10,655]

@Blackinksoul30

This is a safe place. Like everyone said before, no one will tolerate bullying here. I do hope you post your stories here someday. I would love to read them 

[spywareonya 37,961]

1 hour ago, speedy3471 said:

I would love to read them

@Blackinksoul30 just gave us a small bit of teaser in the chat, it's romantic and erotic, I was speechless, usually I find excessive romanticism to be… excessive!!!

But she was so real.. it gave me shivers

I hadn't even felt well afterward… like it unleashed stuff in the unconscious… and sincerely I crave for more

[nopjans 1,178]

This thread is why I love this site and community. At first I thought that there was no need to apologize, or say anything at all - if someone doesn't want to read these stories, there's certainly no requirement to do so. Yet, this thread has generated a lot of wonderful thoughts on writing, creativity, and community. There's even been a visit by the ghost of one of my favorite authors, Umberto Eco. 😁 

I try to target my stories for around 2000 words. That's what feels like the right length for me, but I enjoy works by other authors that are much longer and much shorter. I'm delighted that this community enjoys my stories to the degree that it does, but if they did not, I'd still imagine the same things.

@Blackinksoul30, I know you work very hard on your writing, and I hope you share some of it here. I think you'll find a very receptive and supportive audience.

 

Edited May 28, 2019 by nopjans

[wetwulf 3,324]

After all this discussion, I may need to get another story up soon. 😄

[spywareonya 37,961]

11 hours ago, nopjans said:

Yet, this thread has generated a lot of wonderful thoughts on writing, creativity, and community

My thought EXACTLY!!!!!

 

 

11 hours ago, nopjans said:

There's even been a visit by the ghost of one of my favorite authors, Umberto Eco.

Eh, Greatness is Greatness...

 

11 hours ago, nopjans said:

I try to target my stories for around 2000 words

Ok then target them to be 2000 words ANEW because I am gasping for air without new pissexploits by my alter-ego Liliana!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Peefreak99 3,722]

11 hours ago, wetwulf said:

After all this discussion, I may need to get another story up soon. 😄

I have read some of your old stories and the relief parts are SOOOO FUCKING GOOD so i hope you will post a new one soon