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Darkguy

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  • Birthday 07/19/1989

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  1. Contains Pee Vandalism. A fairly short story compared to my usual. Last weekend I had an unforgettable experience. It started out like any other day. I was bringing the last of my belongings from my parent's house to the apartment I would be staying at while I attended university. I had a few boxes in the trunk and one box of comic books in the back seat which I didn’t want to take my eyes off. It was a cold, snowy day, but I was making good progress. Then I saw two young women on the side of the road. One of them saw me coming and started waving my car down. I’m not immune to the ch
  2. I'd love for you to write more of this, I love the tone of the story. If I had one piece of constructive criticism, I'd love if you described the pees a bit more instead of just where they peed and how long. For example; Instead of saying; Finally, at last the party was ending as I see the Redhead beauty Madeline walking into my room, and she walks over next to my PC and begins peeing on my Pc “oh no my life is over” as I cry. You could say; At last the party was drawing to a close. The redheaded, beauty, Madeline, entered my room. She looked around, before settling her eyes on my pc
  3. Good story, you planning a sequel?
  4. Looking forward to the next part. I enjoy Sina's mother.
  5. Another great chapter. Hope the series continues.
  6. Absolutely loved it. Hope you put out part two with the mustang soon.
  7. Another great addition. Looking forward to seeing what they target next.
  8. Looking forward to seeing what they get up to at the farm house.
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