
Darkguy
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- Birthday 07/19/1989
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Can't wait for the next part.
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I'd like a part 4
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I'd like to hear about the backpacks.
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I'd be down to roleplay 3.
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Contains Pee Vandalism. A fairly short story compared to my usual. Last weekend I had an unforgettable experience. It started out like any other day. I was bringing the last of my belongings from my parent's house to the apartment I would be staying at while I attended university. I had a few boxes in the trunk and one box of comic books in the back seat which I didn’t want to take my eyes off. It was a cold, snowy day, but I was making good progress. Then I saw two young women on the side of the road. One of them saw me coming and started waving my car down. I’m not immune to the ch
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I'd love for you to write more of this, I love the tone of the story. If I had one piece of constructive criticism, I'd love if you described the pees a bit more instead of just where they peed and how long. For example; Instead of saying; Finally, at last the party was ending as I see the Redhead beauty Madeline walking into my room, and she walks over next to my PC and begins peeing on my Pc “oh no my life is over” as I cry. You could say; At last the party was drawing to a close. The redheaded, beauty, Madeline, entered my room. She looked around, before settling her eyes on my pc
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Good story, you planning a sequel?
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Looking forward to the baby shower.
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Looking forward to the next part. I enjoy Sina's mother.
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Really good chapter.
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Where did you pee in the library?
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Another great chapter. Hope the series continues.
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Absolutely loved it. Hope you put out part two with the mustang soon.
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Another great addition. Looking forward to seeing what they target next.
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Looking forward to seeing what they get up to at the farm house.