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I loved all the explanations contained within Chapter 4, @spywareonya.

You have created a world which at one and the same time sounds both plausible and extraordinary.

And it all makes sense.

And I love Nancy the vampire. She is so you in so many ways.

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9 hours ago, Sweets said:

Sorry finally got sometime to read your last chapter.  Work gets in the way of my fun

Is the same with me. Only got around to reading it today.

In my real life I am active politically and we have a national election campaign under way, so an especially busy time for me.

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18 hours ago, Brutus said:

Peeing down from the roof without a care of who is below and the way the mother flat out told her son she just came. Savagely hot.

Reading this from one of my favourite Writers (not only of erotic fiction, not only on peefans) makes me blush

 

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The Oracle. Interesting. An entity even more powerful than the vampire.

Am looking forward to this meeting.

You have created a world I can easily lose myself in. It is a bit like a much darker Terry Pratchett novel, with veins of horror and a lot of pissing thrown in, yet also a very pleasing alternate reality.

I can tell that Nancy the vampire is a reflection of yourself, an alter ego that is an expression of you.

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@spywareonya, Nancy the vampire now going to the moon with a nymphomaniac Prinsex who just wants to piss in her mouth from time to time? I love this and hope later to discover what the crystal is capable of.

And nice touch calling the Oracle Alexander the even greater, aka Alex.

This is an awesome reflection of real life where you bow to no one, except perhaps your even more dominant man, Alex.

Nancy and Alex in real life and Nancy the vampire and Alex the oracle here. I adore the reflection and imagination here. 

And a uniporn. I love it!

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@steve25805

Thank you, thank you a thousand times for your heart-touching analisys

It proves why you have such a spot in my heart

 

Alex is cute but also mysterious, and I LOVEEEEEEE it!!! The Butterflight Flowerduck!!!

While the Prinsex is not a positive character

She was part of my purge, never forget this book was written as a therapy book

She will be the chance for Nancy to display her darkest side

The crystal is gonna be a problem… it will be the pivot of the book...

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23 hours ago, Chicklover99 said:

This is great , can’t wait for the next chapter 

Fuck, missed to mention you with the @ function

I tought I mentioned you first 'cause your post was just above mine, but I didn't

Well, chapter 7 posted just above

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6 hours ago, steve25805 said:

 

And nice touch calling the Oracle Alexander the even greater, aka Alex.

This is an awesome reflection of real life where you bow to no one, except perhaps your even more dominant man, Alex.

Nancy and Alex in real life and Nancy the vampire and Alex the oracle here. I adore the reflection and imagination here. 

And a uniporn. I love it!

I was thinking along the same lines as you lol. I really enjoyed this chapter 

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2 hours ago, spywareonya said:

Fuck, missed to mention you with the @ function

I tought I mentioned you first 'cause your post was just above mine, but I didn't

Well, chapter 7 posted just above

I really enjoyed chapter 7 as all the others, very hot

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