speedy3471 10,655 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 5 minutes ago, spywareonya said: To be honest, I am still not gonna divulge if Nessie exists or not in the story Nor should you. Leave this up to OUR imaginations and thoughts. It deepens the plot this way 1 1 Link to post
chubbybirb999 1,560 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Wonderful as always, darling! Also, apologies for not being there. Crazy work stuff. Roll on summer holidays where I can be here all the time! 1 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 12 minutes ago, chubbybirb999 said: Wonderful as always, darling! Also, apologies for not being there. Crazy work stuff. Roll on summer holidays where I can be here all the time! Ok Darling first of all THANK YOU for being here, I ADORE your presence in the forum (and in this thread and you know why) Nobody pressures you but indeed, I breath when you are here Kisses... 2 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 23, 2019 Author Share Posted May 23, 2019 28 minutes ago, peeingone said: It is great that You are writing Your stories I might stories on My super hero The Magic soon and post it here. Well Darling, the fictional stories section is only for erotic stories... 1 1 Link to post
steve25805 126,015 Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 10 hours ago, spywareonya said: To be honest, I am still not gonna divulge if Nessie exists or not in the story In all honesty, I think that is the wisest and best course. Enough little hints and glimpses of something for her existence to be possible, without her actually appearing so readers can decide for themselves. Lends the whole story an air of mystery. And I love this latest instalment, especially the nonchalant way the ladies seem to squat and piss wherever they are without caring who sees. Thank you. 1 Link to post
Alfresco 11,629 Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 @spywareonya nice to see some new characters and relaxed attitudes to peeing - also good to see that Art was open in his appreciation of the German girls peeing like that. So often we view from afar and hide our appreciation of peeing from our friends. Great story and looking forward to more. 1 Link to post
nopjans 1,178 Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 This most recent chapter was tremendously entertaining and well written, @spywareonya. 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 26, 2019 Author Share Posted May 26, 2019 On 5/24/2019 at 8:05 AM, steve25805 said: Thank you Thank YOU for being here around!!! I loved to write it, and the next ones will come shortly and will take the plot further 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 26, 2019 Author Share Posted May 26, 2019 @Alfresco THANK YOU Yes, I was inspired by some images I have in my mind about almost comical situations, mixed with real life sexual chances of the past... 1 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 26, 2019 Author Share Posted May 26, 2019 On 5/24/2019 at 11:32 PM, nopjans said: This most recent chapter was tremendously entertaining and well written, @spywareonya. I tried to be funny and entertaining at the same time, and be realistic in building them... 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted May 28, 2019 Author Share Posted May 28, 2019 As soon as enough person will have read this chapter (I am still waiting for some lovely friends to check it) a new chapter will arrive I have found my inspiration again so it will be cool!!! 4 Link to post
steve25805 126,015 Posted June 17, 2019 Share Posted June 17, 2019 On 5/28/2019 at 4:10 PM, spywareonya said: As soon as enough person will have read this chapter (I am still waiting for some lovely friends to check it) a new chapter will arrive Come on guys, read the damned chapter, lol! We need @spywareonya to write the next one! 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted June 30, 2019 Author Share Posted June 30, 2019 On 6/17/2019 at 4:47 PM, steve25805 said: Come on guys, read the damned chapter, lol! We need @spywareonya to write the next one! Now that I am back new chapter will come!!! Likely Tomorrow or in 2 days! 4 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 @steve25805 @speedy3471 @Peefreak99 @Brutus @nopjans @chubbybirb999 @Paulypeeps @will64 @HitEmAll @mickymoist @polecat @Alfresco NEXT CHAPTER!!! 4 Link to post
Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Popular Post Share Posted July 2, 2019 (edited) “But why didn’t we all know anything about it?” Complained Kay. Her voice was distant, and Nancy had to make her best endevour to focus on it. The cold light of dawn was piercing the night from behind the mountains overwatching Drumnadrochit. “I knew!!” Scot joked about it, almost making the others furious as he obviously knew, being the other his brother. “Sorry guys, we didn’t want to hide it from you, we just wanted to have this last night without anything else in our minds” Bonnie wasn’t trying to put up pathetical excusation, they all can feel it in her voice, unwithstand the booze in their veins was so much that upon being checked up by police, the result would have been “Traces of blood among alcohol” rather than the reverse. “Well, at least let’s go with them to the airport in Inverness” suggested Kay, and Gwen bit her lip because she was embarassed at that… They were know in some kind of waiting hall, in the nearby town. “I would like to understand a bit better” she murmured, to which Bonnie blushed and replied: “We have an open relationship, and we are going to spend a month or two in Sweden, to be on our own and see if it got the qualities to evolve into something different”. “For example?” Kay was curious, and Bonnie continued: “We will never relinquish our life of casual sex and drink, but… we realized we are more “friends with benefits” rather than a true couple, open or not that it may be. We…” they looked each other and blushed, “… we feel something different than simple arousal… and maybe it’s time to explore it”. Nancy was emotioned by that moment, it was clear now that those two were madly in love with each other and just too afraid to admit it. She became as red as her hair, and lowered her glance, smiling romantically… They were interrupted by a splashing sound because Kay decided she did not want to wait for a toilet and gently allowed the floor behind a snack dispenser to receive the content of her bladder. She was wearing flat sandals and her droplets were backsplashing onto her feet, but she seemed not to care, she only cared for her high squat, her pussy showing the total absence of pubic hair, a real deluge pushed forth with a hissing sound and a splattering all over the floor. “Sorry” she laughed, “Did not want to interrupt goodbye hugs”. When she was done, she bounced up and down to shake droplets from her pussy, and let her skirt to fall back in place. Nancy was breathless, while others just exploded in laughter. “We will miss this!” giggled Bonnie, and Kay just replied: “Then do it yourself!!! Ahahah!!!” The next moments were filled with sincere tears and heartfelt glances, among true friends. The airplane then roared in the sky, and Nancy couldn’t help to think at the strange sounds he heard his first day, when something hit the boat from beneath… Now, the day was spent… after they reached the airport in the nearby town, nobody could restrain tears, as they farewelled their friends… Nancy too was overwhelmed regardless she had known them for only a day. Now, they were only four: the lovely Gwen, the silly Scot, and the obnoxiously hot Kay. “Whic plans you have for tonight?” Gwen asked the other two, and they shook their heads: “Recover from hangover” they muttered, “And you?”. Gwen blushed because she was a bit afraid that they could josh about their self-appointed mission, but Nancy was more full-frontal: “We met online, it took a bit to become real friends but in the end it happened, and now… I am here to look for Nessie”. Scot almost fell from his chair, and Kay too was a bit shocked: “You mean you really believe in it?”. Nancy nodded defiantly. The following hours were spent with the red-haired girl explaining to them all what she came up with in her years of researches, and at the end of it, they were all silent. She was puzzled as she could not understand such a cap of immobility, but things were not the way they looked like. Kay looked toward Scot, and they exhanged a glance full of meanings. Then it was her that spoke, with low voice. But this time there was nothing sexy in her tone. She was sincere, and almost respectful: “There is a person I can make you to meet”. Nobody said anything. She took her iphone and went outside, on a little balcony. Nancy was curious and headed there to listen, but what she saw was simply that marvellous lady, sitting on the ledge of the balcony, talking vigorously to somebody while her ass hovered out of the very edge while a hissing sound was produced by her brazen act. She was amazed at that girl, and really starting to lose the capability to refrain from something stupid. Suddenly, she closed the comunication, and jumped down from the ledge. Scot and Gewn were getting out too, and the small balcony was now overpopulated… She faced them all and explained: “In two days, a person I know will be here. And he will help you”. Nancy lifted an eyebrow, and looked toward Gewn. Again, silence was falling down from the endless nightsky… Edited July 2, 2019 by spywareonya 1 7 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 Next chapter will come very soon so please read this one and appreciate it, as the subsequent adventure will arrive shortly!!! 1 2 Link to post
Peefreak99 3,722 Posted July 2, 2019 Share Posted July 2, 2019 GHAAAA CLIFFHANGER xd i loved it keep them coming:) 2 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 1 hour ago, Peefreak99 said: GHAAAA CLIFFHANGER xd i loved it keep them coming:) Likely VERY soon, as I perfectly know what to write, I just do not want to downwash the Worth of this chapter, so I will wait for friends to read and reply to it, and then post the new chapter. Things will start to get big and heavy in the next chapters... 1 1 1 Link to post
steve25805 126,015 Posted July 2, 2019 Share Posted July 2, 2019 6 hours ago, spywareonya said: NEXT CHAPTER!!! Sadly have overslept so will have to wait until I get home this evening to read it or else I will be rushing it. Something to look forward to, lol 2 1 Link to post
chubbybirb999 1,560 Posted July 2, 2019 Share Posted July 2, 2019 Excellent writing as always, darling! Thank you for sharing with us. I plan to go and read through it all again! 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 3 hours ago, steve25805 said: Sadly have overslept so will have to wait until I get home this evening to read it or else I will be rushing it. Something to look forward to, lol No problem Steve, it's ok!!! I am sure this will intrigue you, it's short but intense!! 3 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 13 minutes ago, chubbybirb999 said: Excellent writing as always, darling! Thank you for sharing with us. I plan to go and read through it all again! Sometimes I do too to be sure I am keeping up the right pace and the correct feelings I plan to make people feel. You cannot understand how happy I am that you like it, and as long as people will keep appreciating this, I will keep writing. I have some kind of a real story to be written, with a plot and actual happenings, and I plan to start making things to happen... 2 1 Link to post
chubbybirb999 1,560 Posted July 2, 2019 Share Posted July 2, 2019 15 minutes ago, spywareonya said: Sometimes I do too to be sure I am keeping up the right pace and the correct feelings I plan to make people feel. You cannot understand how happy I am that you like it, and as long as people will keep appreciating this, I will keep writing. I have some kind of a real story to be written, with a plot and actual happenings, and I plan to start making things to happen... You’re doing great! I teach creative writing so I know all about pacing, and you’re honestly doing just great! You’re building up the story and the characters really well, keep doing what you’re doing! 2 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted July 2, 2019 Author Share Posted July 2, 2019 1 hour ago, chubbybirb999 said: You’re doing great! I teach creative writing so I know all about pacing, and you’re honestly doing just great! You’re building up the story and the characters really well, keep doing what you’re doing! Awwwwwwwwwww thank you!!! I remember you teach creative writing, you told somewhere else, and I never forget a feature that concerns you!!!!!!!!!! Kisses without limits!!! 2 1 Link to post
nopjans 1,178 Posted July 2, 2019 Share Posted July 2, 2019 Well done, Nancy. I was engaged in this interlude and am quite interested to see what happens next. 1 1 Link to post
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