Popular Post Riley 13,064 Posted December 2, 2019 Popular Post Share Posted December 2, 2019 (edited) I am really busy right now so im sorry if the writing isn't as good in each chapter as normal but i just really don't have the time right now. I also really love this story though and sometimes it's nice to just sit down and write for a while, so that's what these current chapters are. Usually its me sitting on the floor or in my bed cross legged with my laptop typing, sipping a cup of tea xD I hope they are still ok! sorry!! Also The bold button won't let me unbold the text at the minute so unless that fixes itself the story will just be bolded. Im really sorry i have no idea whats going on with it. I click it and nothing happens so im really sorry. Also I promise there will be more ice skating in the next chapter 🙂 The sound of sizzling filled the room as I let the oil cook and prepare the boiling vegetables. The smell of carrots, peppers, and other foods filled the air as we prepared our meal. I looked over and saw Emily checking on the rice we were cooking and smile at me. This didn't feel real. I felt almost in a trance. Emily came up to me with a grin and a very large glass of water and handed it to me. I silently drank both a little scared of what was to come from that and also really excited for the feelings I was going to start experiencing soon. I saw a similar empty glass next to her and knew exactly what she was up too. It was getting to be evening now, and the sky was turning into a brilliant arrangement of colors shining through the atmosphere. We had yet to turn on a light in Emily's place and so the golden glow of the sun filled the room with brilliant glowing light. The vegetables browned and looked done, so I turned off the burner and took out two bowls for us to eat from. Emily was taking the rice off and setting it on the counter next to the vegetables and sauce and got spoons for both of us to eat with. "Wow, we are a really good team." Emily said laughing at how efficiently we cooked. "I think it helps if you are really hungry." I told her about to take my first bite As soon as I took the first bite the flavours filled my mouth and it was... amazing. Turns out we were a pretty good team. * * * "Do you want to go for a walk?" Emily told me with that usually excited sparkle in her eyes. "Sure!" I said excitedly before feeling a twinge in my bladder, "actually, let me use the restroom first, sorry." "Wait, do you want to maybe wait until we get back? If that's ok," Emily said a little nervously but getting even more excited. "Ok, I'll try." I said with a smile, finishing my water and slipping my converse onto my feet. Emily grabbed my hand and let me out the door into the cooler evening air. The sky was beginning to darken as the sun sank lower and lower below the horizon. I looked over at her and saw her sparkling eyes. She was excited and happy, and that was all that mattered. The wind softly blew and made her hair gently flow with the wind. I was starting to feel my need to pee grow worse and was a little worried about it but Emily knew I needed to go so she wouldn't take me too far right? I started to notice that she was slightly squirming as well and glancing around looking for something. I was intrigued but decided to not say anything and trust that she knew what she was doing. It was getting slightly colder and a little bit darker as the light started to fade. Our footsteps seemed to echo out into the distance as the rest of the world was silent. My bladder was starting to get really desperate. I was feeling the pressure just trying to leak out and I was starting to get worried I was going to wet myself soon if we didn’t stop. “There!” Emily said pointing to a public bathroom. It was a single stall bathroom by the side of a park and was actually surprisingly nice one we went inside. It was small, with a concrete floor and a white light in the ceiling that filled the room with harsh light. The floor was sloping towards a drain placed in the middle and the toilet and sink were placed on opposite sides of the back wall. “If you want to use the toilet, I won’t stop you, but if you decided not to…..,” Emily said excitedly. “I mean I don’t have to if you don’t want to?” I said back starting to get really red. Emily got closer to me and was trying to make sure it was ok before going any further. I nodded to let her know everything was ok and she smiled back at me. I felt like my bladder was bursting and I was worried about peeing before we could do very much. I felt Emily’s hand slowly touch my body from my waist and slowly trail into my crotch. I was trying desperately not to pee but with her hand resting on my slit the pressure was too much and I felt a large spurt escape and saw the crotch of my jeans slightly darken at the new introduction of moisture. I saw Emily blush a bit and smile a bit and soon she applied a little more pressure and I could feel her hand pushing against my slit. I felt another spurt coming and I tried to stop it but another big spurt shot out of me and I saw the wet spot on my jeans spread a little further. I started to undo my jeans before I wet myself completely in them and then saw Emily doing the same. When she pulled her jeans fully down I saw that she had a tiny wet spot already on her panties too. For some reason just seeing this made me feel ... excited. I grabbed Emily’s hand so I could feel it against my slit from the other side, and relaxed a little bit, feeling a long spurt of pee pool in her hand before leaking onto the concrete floor. I looked over and saw her wet spot grow a bit on her white panties as we wet mine. Before I knew it, she suddenly looked panicked and grabbed my hand, forcing it into my crotch as a huge spurt of pee burst out of her and onto the concrete floor. I could feel her slit through the thin fabric of her panties and feel her wet pee pooling in my palm. Her spurt turned into a stream and then a violent flood as she lost control and peed onto the hard concrete floor. Her stream made a loud hissing noise that echoed in the concrete structure that we both were losing control of our bladders in. When her stream finally ended she had this amazing look of relief on her face as she sat there in completely soaked panties. Seeing all this pee around me was starting to make my bladder explode again, even after leaking so much. I felt a spurt leak out and then another and then I felt Emily’s hand against my slit, inside my panties as my bladder exploded in front of her. I could feel her fingers against my as my body filled with relief and a hissing sound echoed around me. I felt I was in heaven, it just felt so…. Amazing. Eventually my stream died down and I just sat there, stupidly smiling from pure joy as my panties were soaked and my contributions to the lake of pee were clearly visible as it slowly drained away into the drain. “I know this is really weird and we really don’t have to, but do you want to switch panties?” I said quietly super embarrassed to even suggest it. “I think that sounds amazing!” Emily said back, somehow even more red then we were before. I slipped off my wet panties and saw Emily doing the same next to me. As we traded panties I felt happy but I couldn't explain why wearing them made me feel that way. * * * “Let me take your clothes and I can start a little bit of laundry.” Emily said obviously trying to be conscientious of the fact that she kind of made me wet myself. “Thank you!” I said trying to make sure she knew I really enjoyed it. “Do you mind if I take a shower?” “You don’t have to ask me!” Emily said laughing a little I pulled the curtain back and stepped into the shower bathtub combination. I turned the shower on and adjusted the temperature before turning the shower head on and feeling the warm spray of water against my skin. I started to clean up when I heard from in the bathroom, “Do you mind If I join you?”. I was already blushing thinking about it and tried to make sure I looked ok, even though I was nude, in a shower, before telling her, “You can join” realising how weird of an answer that was but being too late to change it. As she stepped in I saw her beautiful red hair drape behind her as she stood in front of me. She looked perfect, I was almost just like nervous I would do something wrong or displease her somehow. I always thought I would be too weird for someone, yet there she was, standing in front of me. We leaned towards each other and I felt her soft lips embrace mine. I felt my body fill with happiness and my muscles begin to relax. Like everything was fine in the world. Nothing else mattered at that moment Only Her. Edited December 2, 2019 by Riley 3 3 8 Link to post
Riley 13,064 Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 (edited) also just to let people know a new chapter was released 🙂 @Alfresco @wetwulf @arg08 @gldenwetgoose @Dr.P @appletree_man @speedy3471 @12345 @ZooeyGlass @Kylenut2 @mickymoist @Pissdrinker @wetwulf @PeeBurach Edited December 2, 2019 by Riley 1 1 Link to post
Riley 13,064 Posted December 2, 2019 Author Share Posted December 2, 2019 I really want to add more description into the next chapter because tbh I'm not super proud of this chapter's writing like at all. I think I could've used a lot more descriptive writing so I just wanted to say that I will definitely try to do that more in the future. I am so so sorry about that. 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 I really enjoyed this part. I really enjoyed the cooking part lol, I love to cook. More details of the meal would of been great, but overall very well written again. Thanks for writing this new chapter 1 Link to post
Dr.P 1,473 Posted December 2, 2019 Share Posted December 2, 2019 Riley, You have absolutely nothing to apologize for! I think your writing in this chapter is outstanding. It "flows" very well (pun intended), and there is plenty of detail, to make the story very erotic. Thanks very much for posting. Looking forward to more, when your life is less hectic, and you have more time. By the way, the "bold" text didn't come through on the PF screen, and it was not objectionable, at all. Dr.P 3 Link to post
appletree_man 28 Posted December 3, 2019 Share Posted December 3, 2019 wonderful as ever Riley 🙂 In fact, might I be so bold to say as getting better with each chapter. 2 Link to post
Alfresco 11,630 Posted December 4, 2019 Share Posted December 4, 2019 Another excellent instalment @Riley, The level of description is just right to keep the story flowing but provide relevant details to allow the reader to imagine the setting. You have a good way with words as well. 1 Link to post
mickymoist 3,513 Posted December 4, 2019 Share Posted December 4, 2019 (edited) @Riley lovely, so hot! The wetting was beautifully described. Edited December 4, 2019 by mickymoist 1 Link to post
Pissdrinker 874 Posted December 4, 2019 Share Posted December 4, 2019 @Riley Firstly thanks for another instalment. I loved the description of you sittling.cross-legged in the floor writing - you obviously enjoy it! This was probably my favourite do far. It was wonderfully romantic AND hot - and the panty switching summed it up perfectly. You are brilliant at describing things and I love the little details and scene-setting. Already looking forward to the next part but now I’m going to reread this 😀 1 Link to post
gldenwetgoose 21,487 Posted December 5, 2019 Share Posted December 5, 2019 Loved it @Riley - very stimulating. Link to post
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