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  1. This one was a collaboration between myself and @miniskirtpisser. She provided great insight and ideas that I incorporated after asking her via PM. Thank you MSP! Becky's Story I'd been at the hospital comforting Anne and her kids for a few hours. Her mother had just suffered a stroke and it wasn't looking good. She asked me to go to their house and get the iPad from her bedroom so little Nicole could distract herself. She was the youngest at nine years old and wasn't dealing with the news well, so I was happy to help. This simple task proved anything but simple. Isn't
  2. Hi everyone, I have two new stories here, with the second one posted as a reply below. William's Story My coworker Melissa and I have become good friends over the past three years and have a good working relationship. I've always felt there's attraction between us. Aaron from IT jokes that she just flirts with me to stroke her ego and doesn't respect me but he says a lot of dumb things. Anyway, she was promoted to supervisor last month due to department expansion and everyone at work was happy for her. We even threw a little office party that I planned as celebration. O
  3. @miniskirtpisser I appreciate your mentioning of my story as inspiration, that was unexpected and very humbling. Thank you. I think it's worth mentioning also, how endearing you are. Not taking constructive criticism personal, and always conducting yourself with such a joyous attitude, it's very pleasant. It's something I noticed years ago actually.
  4. It's subtle but does drill it in more than needed but that being said it's such a minor thing and probably doesn't get under most readers' skin. Non emphasis can indeed be powerful as you said but it's a very fine art. Overall great story that gets right to the good stuff and wastes no words.
  5. Hey. Nothing much. I just fell out of logging in since my primary reason is usually to post or discuss fiction and I've sort of lost interest. Sometimes I browse the forum without logging in and if I see something that interests me, I resurface for a bit.
  6. @Love2seeherpee I read something years ago that said that women evolved from ancient times to pee very fast as a survival trait. The faster they could eliminate, the less chance a predator had to pounce while they were stuck in position. It seems that they have bigger and more elastic urethra's as well, which allow much more volume to pass at a time. I know for a fact that I've never heard a man pee as hard as women often do. We can regularly take roughly a minute, whereas women can often be done in 8 seconds with a high power gush that's ten times as forceful. As for bladder size, I've
  7. You may be right about her interest in me, at least to a degree. I was actually understating her age though and recently found out that she is 60 years old, literally twice my age. I was shocked as she doesn't look it. She still flirts with me to this day, subtly. But nothing will happen even if she were to become more assertive because she is married and I won't cross that line. But as you said, two people being so similar is rare and precious.
  8. Thanks again to all who have spoken. I didn't expect this many replies and really do appreciate it. @spywareonya, thank you for sharing such personal details about your unpleasant childhood. And as a side note, I don't expect to change your mind about university regrets but I can tell you from personal experience it's mostly full of morons. Many of my professors were dumb ideologues, and most of the classes were a painful waste of time, useless for my major. Add in mostly immature overgrown children, insane tuition costs that land you in a lifetime of debt, and then the true picture emerg
  9. I've always valued input and wisdom from elders. I have two questions for anyone past their mid-thirties, particularly those who are into their 50's and beyond (such as @steve25805, or @Dr.P for example.) 1. What do you regret doing or not doing in your youth? 2. What do you currently see young people in their 20's doing or not doing that you now know from life experience is a terrible waste of precious time? Thanks in advance to all who weigh in.
  10. This is an older post and I can't recall at this point if she moaned, but I'm sure if I'd heard such, I would've made damn sure to mention it. Audible moans are gold, not easy to hear from public restrooms! That was about the only thing missing that would've made this about as good as it gets.
  11. Something a bit unrelated but I get slightly annoyed at dumb comments on the video. I check them sometimes and for example, there was one on a video of Tam Tam South masturbating and peeing in a hotel room, some guy commented how it was hot til she started peeing. Another was a hot woman peeing a huge stream outside. Scroll down and this guy says "why the fuck would you even film this stupid shit, what kind of retard gets turned on by pee" One vid had the models name on screen for some 20 seconds. Dumbass comments "what's her name, anyone please!" Not worth hating since it does
  12. Haha, love it. Dammit though, I had plans to write a story about a woman having her man help with a urine sample and things getting hot and you took it right out of my head! Lol Awesome as usual. Thanks!
  13. MJ's Story When I was nineteen, I joined a group of mercenaries for hire to take down a diplomat, whose name I won't mention, but who was rising in the ranks and shaping up to become the nation's new dictator and continue a reign of terror on our people. In my country there is not much to do and this job was good money that my family needed. The mercs had taken an abandoned farm to use as their base of operations but it was still vulnerable and needed patrolled since they had enemies. There was this one woman there, Grace, Middle-Eastern looking with a French accent. She was a high
  14. @spywareonya I do like crafting cruel women and getting down into the guts of human feelings. With this one, I was thinking of something about a guy being a reluctant fetishist due to something emotionally traumatic from the one person he never imagined would cause it, still denying how it's affected him. And the mother having just a brief moment of imperfection due to her own unexplained past, that affected her young son in ways she failed to foresee. So this one was intentionally less "hot" because I came at it with a focus on emotions, with peeing on the periphery. I'm not alway
  15. Johnny's Story I remember in my teens fully realizing that my mom is a very attractive woman. No incest urges or anything like that, just acknowledging that she's quite a head-turner. Think of the actress Julianne Moore with blue eyes and a more curvy build and you pretty much know what my mom looks like. She's close to fifty now and still gets plenty of looks from guys of all ages so you can imagine when she was in her prime. I used to wonder if all those guys would still be so attracted to her if they'd heard her loud peeing every day and had the misfortune of walking into the ba
  16. @Dr.P Your experience/age allows you to craft some of the most mature and heartfelt stories I've read. I love this backstory of lost lovers reuniting after many years, changed physically by the realities of aging and evolving their love and admiration of each other in response to it. Only you could write a hot pee romance story that involves hip surgeries and walkers!
  17. @spywareonya Thank you. And yes I've been focused on short stories for many reasons. They are much easier to write, I have 4 more ready to be posted right now. They are also much easier for readers since long stories can get tiresome, especially fetish stories. Another thing is that they allow me to actually touch all the ideas I have. I've got about 30 ideas written down and my typical long writing style would never allow me to cover all of them, since it takes so long to plot, write, and edit those. I will return to long ones on occasion, like with my Urine of the Goddesses stories whi
  18. A lot of school restrooms for staff just have a sign that says staff only but it isn't locked or anything. We had these in my high school, so any student could just go in, even though they are not supposed to. So Andrew just waited for her to be out of sight, no one else saw him and he just walked in. But on second thought, since designated restrooms often are locked, I edited it just now to avoid confusing anyone else, saying that she just never locked it after using it. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.
  19. Andrew's Story In my senior year of high school, I had this hottie, Mrs. Lewis for art class. From day one, while she was taking roll call for the first time, many eyes were glued to her. I loved how her long black hair contrasted with her rather pale skin. It gave her a bold look. At the time she was around thirty years old and let me tell you, this woman had the sexiest damn legs ever. They were incredible, exquisite and she showed them off in short skirts and high heels proudly during the warm months. I also loved when she stood at her canvas to demonstrate, showing her big soli
  20. I vividly remember my first pee porn video. It was around 2003 and I was on a site called wicked whizzers. It was just images back then but one day I got redirected to a site that had a short 40 second or so video of a hidden cam on the floor behind the toilet in someone's house. I couldn't believe it was an actual video and I waited 2 hours for it to buffer on the crippling slow dial up connection back then. A hot brunette woman came in wearing just a long t shirt with nothing on her legs, and there was music in the background. She lifted her shirt and pulled a tiny thong down and bent o
  21. I would never consider myself the most calm or smart person here, but I appreciate your kind words. My post was definitely stern and I expected it might ruffle some feathers but that's part of discourse sometimes. I read the entire thread and felt that the best way I could offer something here is to unpack the disagreements she was getting, and explain them to the best of my ability. Emotions got tense prior to me seeing the conversation and it seemed like the core of the dissent wasn't fully articulated among the arguing. So it may have felt harsh and judgmental to some, but I just felt
  22. Brutus

    Goodbye

    Riley, seeing you still here brightened my evening just now. I was thinking about you. I sent you a pm earlier and hope we can talk more. And I hope you'll stick around and let us all help you see in yourself what we see in you.
  23. Brutus

    Goodbye

    @Riley I hope you are still there reading replies. What you believe about yourself is WRONG. I've had problems with believing myself to be a burden to people as well and I realized that it was my own negative mind. Whatever hell you are going through right now is temporary. It will pass. The people around you that are making you feel this way are not seeing what a gift you are. Listen to everyone here. You are an intelligent and wonderful person and the beauty of who you are shines when you post here. You are the kind of woman that most men want to love, but can't find. You can overcome your i
  24. @Dr.P Great story! I would love to have this happen to me.
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