Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 16, 2019 Popular Post Share Posted April 16, 2019 (edited) This is multichapter story, all of them are here in this thread, just scroll it!!! New chapters will be added from time to time, so if you liked it, just check it sometimes and see if something new had been posted!!! “Why don’t you believe in it anymore?” puffing a cloud of smoke, the lovely girl from Drumnadrochit asked her internet friend. Nancy weaved her hair in the wind, accepting the pipe and inhaling the dense, honey flavoured tobacco fragrance. “It’s not that I don’t believe in it anymore, but my most recent reflections put me down” On the higher side of the boat, a rugged old man, scarred with a life of adventures, was manning the helm: “All fine, down there?” Gwyneth shouted upward: “Yes, keep going” No answers were uttered, and the two girls went back to their chitchat She was a bit plump, but beautiful and lovely, and welcomed her new web red haired friend with jollyness upon discovering her love for mysteries… “My biggest concern is about the passing down of generations. I know what happened in the Marianne Trench, they fished a Latimaera Caelumnaei, that was considered extinct 350 millions of years ago, it means almost 150 millions of years before the dinosaurs appeared ” she made a pause, inhaled smoke from the pipe, and passed it again to her friend, “so an elasmosaurus could have survived, yes… furthermore, they were known for needing only little amounts of fishes…” “So?” “So it’s not impossible… furthermore if really there are deep-crust tunnels that links the Loch to the sea… but I still think that 200 millions of years are too much to keep a race intact” For a while nobody said anything, then all of a sudden the captain shouted down at them: “Gotta get back, Seamus fell from the pier and broke his ankle, aye. I’m leaving you on the Gazer” “Ok!!!” Gwen’s voice was a bit anxious, and Nancy asked for explainations. “The Gazer is a boat for touristical trips around the Loch, and for people with a IQ that they hope to catch Nessie on camera while drinking a Martini. The Captain is a hired man, but the boat owner is young and arrogant… he’s not that ugly…” she lowered her eyes and blushed, something that did not escaped Nancy’s inquisitive glance, “…but he doesn’t believe in anything… he’s one of those men that illuse themselves to be mightier through refusal of what they cannot understand” The red haired one made a disgusted face, she pitied those kind of people, she had some headlong materilistic friends but at least they were simply skeptical, not frontally unpolite Fifteen minutes later, they were welcomed on the much bigger boat, and sorrounded by tourists of the worst kind, with sunglasses and ridiculous pois shirts. They all got a hand-camera firmly gripped, turning around all over the ink like waters of the terrifying abyss. Gwen and Nancy looked each other, and all of sudden the first one lowered her eyes, much to Nancy’s dismay, as a young blonde handsome guy walked toward them… “Hi Mimi, who’s this sexy senorita with you?” “Ehm, she’s Nancy” muttered, as the red haired one shook his hand with very little sincerity. “Still looking for monsters instead of boyfriends, Mimi, aren’t you?” and then he laughed at his own joke, believing himself to be terrificly funny, and walked away Nancy was horrified: “Who is that mentally aborted creature?!”, to which her friend blushed even more, “My ex” “Ahahah, I can guess why you dumped him” whispered the guest playfully, but her friend shook her head: “I could have forgave his awful character… but he wasn’t… exactly into all kind of… bedroom adventures I dig… hey what the fuck was THAT?!” The two rushed to the board and lookd down in the pitch black water, while a huge mass of fluid had been moved by something… with amazed eyes, the two exchanged a glance… all around, the noise produced by the chitchat of tourists… but they barely noticed… They had been still for half and hour, staring at the surface, broken only by the small waves produced by the boat itself. “If I was an animal, I would never got near something that makes this noise”. Nancy listened to her friend, considering her words: indeed, a boat of that size was the worst way possible to hope for some sightings… Gwen was lost in herself: she was cursing the moment when she almost revealed her secret to this lovely new friend… She was brought back to reality by a pattering noise that for a while surpassed the engines roar… instinctively she looked between Nancy’s legs to see a yellow stream expelled from under her very short red dress unto the floor of the boat. Mesmerized, she stared at the girl, who was faced toward the waters, not caring at all, just flooding the place with her relieving emission, like nothing, not even looking around… She was shocked, she never behold something so brazen… she needed to go so bad but she was wearing trousers, and couldn’t simply do her business like that… her shoes were now touched by the rivulets of piss spreading around, and deep shivers were running from her wet pussy up to her stoned mind… Was she into that… herself…?! Could she ask…? The red haired lady never tried to hide she was into girls too, during their chitchat online… but now… The boat rocked violently, and screams filled the air. “Mind that fucking helm!!!” somebody shouted, and all rushed to the board, to see another huge sign of something enormous plunging in the depths again, after surfacing… just for a while… nothing but the darkness covered the now once again tranquil abyss… …and the Earth was without form, and void… and Darkness was upon the face of the Abyss… -Genesis- Edited April 18, 2019 by spywareonya 4 1 6 3 Link to post
mickymoist 3,513 Posted April 16, 2019 Share Posted April 16, 2019 Well done Nancy!! Love it 🙂 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 16, 2019 Author Share Posted April 16, 2019 10 minutes ago, mickymoist said: Well done Nancy!! Love it 🙂 Thank you!!! Short and personal... 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 As soon as I'll be less clogged with work, I'll write another chapter!!! 2 Link to post
nopjans 1,178 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 (edited) I enjoyed this! What a fun combination of elements. Edited April 17, 2019 by nopjans 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 1 hour ago, nopjans said: I enjoyed this! What a fun combination of elements. Thank you for this Said by you, more than anything... Thank you... I really think to write more chapters… it could be funny!!! 2 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 Great erotic story. Hopefully it's only the 1st chapter 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 14 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: Great erotic story. Hopefully it's only the 1st chapter By night no boats strides the Loch… the only thing two single ladies can do is drinking in the only pub in Drumnadrochit... 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 2 minutes ago, spywareonya said: By night no boats strides the Loch… the only thing two single ladies can do is drinking in the only pub in Drumnadrochit... I for one cannot wait hahaha 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 8 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: I for one cannot wait hahaha Maybe this very night 1 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 4 minutes ago, spywareonya said: Maybe this very night Whenever you have the time 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 8 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: Whenever you have the time I love this subject and won't rush thing The Loch Ness monster had been something touching my heart since a little girl I have always been convinced it was real, not that I ever believed in any of the fake pics or online hoaxes, describing him as a serpent or as able to get out of the water too No, to me is a pack of elasmosaurus The body wasn't even 10 feet, and the total lenght (40 feet) was almost completely based on the neck They couldn't raise it too much up high, keeping it usually horizontal, using it to catch fishes, of which they never needed too much If really the Loch possesses underground tunnels leading to and from the sea, the monster could simply consider the Loch as a place to lay eggs, like a lagoon, it's not its home, thus is highly unlikely for it to be ever caught I cannot claim it is real for sure (never asked the Witchcraft lore about it and never will, I want to keep my dreams!!!) but I love to believe it!!! 2 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 18 minutes ago, spywareonya said: I love this subject and won't rush thing The Loch Ness monster had been something touching my heart since a little girl I have always been convinced it was real, not that I ever believed in any of the fake pics or online hoaxes, describing him as a serpent or as able to get out of the water too No, to me is a pack of elasmosaurus The body wasn't even 10 feet, and the total lenght (40 feet) was almost completely based on the neck They couldn't raise it too much up high, keeping it usually horizontal, using it to catch fishes, of which they never needed too much If really the Loch possesses underground tunnels leading to and from the sea, the monster could simply consider the Loch as a place to lay eggs, like a lagoon, it's not its home, thus is highly unlikely for it to be ever caught I cannot claim it is real for sure (never asked the Witchcraft lore about it and never will, I want to keep my dreams!!!) but I love to believe it!!! It's the one 'monster story' that always fascinates me, even now. Especially as a kid Haha. I keep an open mind about these things. I also believe it could be real 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 20 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: It's the one 'monster story' that always fascinates me, even now. Especially as a kid Haha. I keep an open mind about these things. I also believe it could be real I think tonight I'll write again... 1 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 5 minutes ago, spywareonya said: I think tonight I'll write again... Please do. Only if you want to. I've been working on an idea for a story for a little while. When I have the time I will post it here 1 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 17, 2019 Author Share Posted April 17, 2019 28 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: Please do. Only if you want to. I've been working on an idea for a story for a little while. When I have the time I will post it here A fictional story by YOU??? THis would be AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 1 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 8 minutes ago, spywareonya said: A fictional story by YOU??? THis would be AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I sure am hoping so hahah 1 Link to post
Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 18, 2019 Author Popular Post Share Posted April 18, 2019 (edited) Nancy burped loud and happily, making Gwen to blush a bit. From her side, the local girl was amazed at the beauty and the boldness of her friend, temporarily sleeping at her house… “Tomorrow we may try again” she suggested, while the red haired lady was calling the waitress for another pint of beer. “Uh?” Nancy got her face out of the big tankard, and replied, with that lovely, bothering high pitch the voice reaches when the speaker is completely drunk: “But this time I want the Scath na deithe once again, the Gazer is ridiculous… ouch…!!!” and she burped again. This time it was really loud, and a couple of tourists turned their heads to look at her with a bad glance. She got up, making the table to tremble, muttering “Gotta piss” and heading for the main door. Along the stride, she crossed path with the waitress, that smiled at her with a bit of embarass and then pointed eyes at the very glass of beer she was bringing to the table, like asking for Nancy’s intentions as she seemed to be leaving, just after ordering another pint. “Eh?” she did not caught it immeditaly, then all of a sudden she realized, and laughed cheerfully yet a bit histerically: “Just need to get empty, then I’ll drink it, take it to the table…” “Toilets are right th… ouh… got it…” The waitress did not even completed her words, as Gwen reached her: “Take it to the table, I’m getting her back… she’s a bit drunk” The other laughed: “The only human I ever saw drinking that much was my granpa, and he killed nazis barehanded”. Gwen blushed once again, and headed for the door. She needed not to look so much once outside: in the lightless main street of the little lovely village, Nancy was squatting on the other side of the road, facing a flight of stairs leading from the path down to a trail alongside a little river, its water bubbling and fumbling heading down to the Loch Gwen took courage and walked toward the figure crouching in the dark… Nancy was laughing like a silly little girl, moaning and cheering while a peculiarly strong pattering noise was spreading all around: looking at her from behind, Gwen could see the arc of urine catching reflexes of light from the very pub, sprinkling with a marvellous precision, not messy and squandered, but thick and neat, exploding from between her legs, shamelessly spread, and flying in the air until landing on the steps much below. Noticing a movement in the utter darkness of the trail, Gwen could focus to notice a couple in the shadows, who stopped kissing to witness in dismay the obscene liberation of her guest… Nancy farted, all of a sudden and very loud, and her friend, caught guard down, couldn’t help but laughing, and thus the red haired lady turned her head and saw her, and exploded in laughter herself: “Gweeeeeeeeeeen” cheered, still completely drunk, “Help me out here, lift me up” Shaking her head with a gleeful smile, Gwyneth grabbed the other around her chest and lifted her the best she could, Nancy at least was collaborative and wasn’t playing the dead-body part, so it wasn’t impossible to make her stand up: “Darling… maybe that last pint could be left where it is…” “What?! No way, we paid for that…!” the slutty red was perentory, and started to walk toward the pub once again. “Well, to be honest, we’re not paying…” the tall one whispered. Nancy stopped all of a sudden and turned her head toward her. How the fuck did she heard? Yet she did, and was throwing and inquisitive glance her way, so she explained: “You remember my ex? Well, he’s the one who provides the beer… and I had a free account here when we were together…” “Why didn’t he cancel it when you broke up?” asked the other one, and Gwen confessed, blushing yet made brave by the power of alcohol: “He is lazy in bed… always wanted his cock sucked and stuff like that… but he is not that good at giving women some pleasure… I promised him I would have kept this to myself if he left the beer-deal on…” Nancy laughed hard, almost cruelly: “So I’m drinking HIS beer… for FREE?!”, and Gwen nodded. “Ahahaha now more than ever I wanna drink it all! Let’s go!” When they entered again, the pint was at the table, waiting for them. They sit and the red haired one immediately began to drink again. “Feel better?” asked smiling the waitress, almost popping out of thin air, to which the two girls almost scare-jumped on their own seat; Nancy was playfully drunk, and replied as best as she could: “Oh, yes, that’s amazing, so empty by now…” Embarassed at that degree of openess by another girl, likely used to those eveniences yet not that brazenly, the waitress blushed and lowered her eyes, and walked away… When the glass was completely empty, the two of them stood up, and headed for the door, leaving the lovely chaos of the pub behind their backs… Edited April 18, 2019 by spywareonya 3 2 5 Link to post
Popular Post spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 18, 2019 Author Popular Post Share Posted April 18, 2019 (edited) @nopjans @mickymoist @polecat @Paulypeeps I am mentioning you here, sorry for this bother, because I just decided to post new chapters in this very thread instead of opening a new one, and since you were the ones who read it until now, I thought to advice you, since when you read it, I hadn't decided yet to make it multi-chapter, so I feared you could have missed new chapters, believing new posts would have just been comments by people, and instead they are also new chapters indeed #2 is just up this post, from now on I won't bother you mentioning, check it from time to time if you want as I will keep going for many chapters onward after this one, but at least new Readers will know it is a multi-chapter story from the start as I edited the very first post and added it in the very beginning, I summoned you here just because you did not know!!! Kisses, and thanks for appreciating!!! Edited April 18, 2019 by spywareonya 3 1 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 (edited) 16 hours ago, spywareonya said: Hot as hell. Iam Invision a lesbian pissing orgy in chapter 3 haha Edited April 18, 2019 by speedy3471 2 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 18, 2019 Author Share Posted April 18, 2019 10 minutes ago, speedy3471 said: Hot as hell. Iam Invision a lesbian pissing orgy in chapter 3 haha Gwen is more shy than that I am not saying it won't happen, but won't be that easy I have no control on this story, I had completely different plans for the chapter I just wrote, but I was ordered to craft it the way you are reading… 1 2 Link to post
speedy3471 10,655 Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 Either way I cannot wait to read the next chapter haha 1 1 Link to post
steve25805 126,021 Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 Wow, @spywareonya, I absolutely love the originality of this story. The Loch Ness monster is very much something I have an open mind about, but would love it to be real. 2 1 Link to post
spywareonya 37,961 Posted April 18, 2019 Author Share Posted April 18, 2019 13 hours ago, steve25805 said: Wow, @spywareonya, I absolutely love the originality of this story. The Loch Ness monster is very much something I have an open mind about, but would love it to be real. During last weeks, not to say months, fantasies were popping up in my mind, when I finger I usually use imagination to craft situations and lose myself in day-dreaming, almost to self-hypnosys But I never realized they could have been all drawn together under the common ground of a Scottish touristical little village It all entwined in my mind after I started to care again for the Monster, recently, because a woman reported a sighting last summer and a Scientist developed a technique to study the Loch animal population according to DNA filtering from the water It is a gargantuan operation, he says he loved to believe the monster is real and would love to find proofs of the presence of extrange DNA in the Loch (it would definitely prove something unknown to modern Science lives there) but the reason why he is making this study is obviously NOT catching Nessie, is something for the World Science Consortium or what the fuck is called, to catalogue bacteria in various places of the world He said that upon failing to find any extrange DNA this wouldn't doom the myth, because Nessie could live in the ocean and just get there for a while sometimes, so the Mystery will never die!!!!!!! Ihihihihih!!!! But upon finding anything strange, it would PROVE that Nessie is real Maybe not a dinosaur, but something unknown to Science All of this intermixed to unleash my passion for it, and I loved the thought of two girls too busy to bother looking for places to piss because they were focused on a very important quest All other characters developed on themselves, I am doing bad shit of a work to find correct nautical terms and gaelish words ahahahaha All together it became the thread linking all my squandered single fantasies, crafting them into chapters of a story... 2 1 Link to post
chubbybirb999 1,560 Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 (edited) Lovely story! As someone who grew up visiting Loch Ness on the very few family holidays I had, I appreciated this massively! Love the Gaelic language too! :) Keep writing! Edited April 18, 2019 by chubbybirb999 2 1 1 Link to post
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