Jump to content

On the naughty train home


Recommended Posts

I loved this! Quite often I picture myself there in the story, watching the characters and the plot unfold but in this case I pictured I was Holly. I could see myself sat on the train wearing a little uniform and peeing myself right there. I actually want to recreate the scene in my mind using Blender or maybe even a drawing but I am not talented enough.

Thank you for this!

  • Love 3
Link to post
  • 2 weeks later...
  • 2 months later...
On 2/26/2021 at 10:24 PM, Sophie said:

Magnificent update to the series! As Kupar said, Holly seems like a lot of fun!  I wish my nights out were like that.  M and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this together. So much so he gave me a little request.

"Do you think you could do that for me Soph?"
"What, wet myself on the train?"
"No, walk around with wet knickers underneath your skirt."

I think I might be doing something once it gets a little warmer!

Thank you for writing this. I'm looking forward to the next installment (If you write one, no pressure of course!)

I just glanced back at the story and comments...  and this made me smile.

  • Love 1
Link to post

Well this is progressing very nicely indeed Goose - thank you for writing such a hot chapter! You write natural dialogue better than anyone on this site, and I strongly believe that the hottest stories are the ones with the most relatable, credible scenarios - so this does it for me. Thanks again! 

  • Love 1
Link to post
  • 1 month later...
  • 2 weeks later...

Tremendously erotic, and beautifully plausible, which makes it so arousing 🙂. Altogether a productive use of your indoor time for the delight of us all. Thank you! 

  • Love 1
Link to post

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...