Short-Form Porn.

[hentaixt 1,580]

So, I'd an idea for some people that might want to get into writing but don't think they're good enough. The concept's to use 3 to 5 sentences to make a short adult scene. Hopefully concise and descriptive without being over-burdened. Folks can work on these, since they're very simple, then when they improve move on to the Wet Carpet Thread, and eventually to full length stories.

 

My example here's an old joke to start, but it serves the purpose well:

Two nuns are riding bicycles through an old town.

They turn down an avenue and continue on their trip.

"I've never come this way before sister."
"Oh yes, it's the cobblestones."

 

I've 2 of my own stories that I'll add as the 1st replies... Hopefully the concept'll catch on and be popular.

[hentaixt 1,580]

As a young girl I was taught a puddle was easier than wet clothes.

As a teen I learned discretion meant freedom.

In college they said, "Challenge The Social Norms!"

Now as an adult, I pee openly in crowded spaces, without fear of consequence.

[hentaixt 1,580]

"Forgive me father for I must sin."
"I am sorry my child, sin is never required."
"Unfortunately the ladies room is full and so am IIIiiiaaahhhh~"
"Your meaning is now as clear as your stream, my child."

Edited February 19, 2021 by hentaixt

[hentaixt 1,580]

I passed by it everyday.

It was part of my memories of youth.

I squatted and peed in every room of the abandoned house on my street.

Now it is being torn down for a strip mall.

I hope to pee in a lot of the rooms there too.

Edited February 16, 2021 by hentaixt

[hentaixt 1,580]

I never knew how exciting relieving myself could be.

I also never knew I could show my slit and pee in front of a crowd.

You learn new things about yourself in strange ways.

[holyknight3 159]

Those short form stories are awesome, but for me, trying to get a concept out in only 3-5 lines is the hardest thing, without resorting to poetry. Excellent work there, and if it helps people get into writing, all the better.

[Alfresco 11,615]

I've never tried this, but willing to give it a go.....  My sentences are a bit longer, but hopefully still meets the requirements of a short story in 3 to 5 sentences.

The two striking young ladies were waiting at the bus stop to return home after a night of indulgence at their local bar. 
They had just missed a bus, the next one was not due for 30 minutes and they knew from the building feeling in their bladders that they were not going to survive the wait followed by the 45 minute ride home.
Jenny bobbed down to dispel the sudden surge of desperation bearing down on her sphincter and on getting under control she dashed over to a nearby phone box.
Opening the door, she rushed in, ripped down her jeans and knickers as she lowered into a deep squat and let loose a torrent onto the concrete floor as two men passed by and enjoyed the view through the glass panels.
The sight was too much for Fiona and she stepped back into the bus shelter where she pulled up her skirt, perched on the front of the seat with her feet apart and let loose her own stream to flow across the pavement and tumble into the gutter as she sighed with relief.

[nopjans 1,178]

The are like little pee haiku fictional stories. Interesting and a fun exercise.

[kalle2020 925]

On 2/16/2021 at 1:27 AM, hentaixt said:

So, I'd an idea for some people that might want to get into writing but don't think they're good enough. The concept's to use 3 to 5 sentences to make a short adult scene. Hopefully concise and descriptive without being over-burdened. Folks can work on these, since they're very simple, then when they improve move on to the Wet Carpet Thread, and eventually to full length stories.

 

My example here's an old joke to start, but it serves the purpose well:

Two nuns are riding bicycles through an old town.

They turn down an avenue and continue on their trip.

"I've never come this way before sister."
"Oh yes, it's the cobblestones."

 

I've 2 of my own stories that I'll add as the 1st replies... Hopefully the concept'll catch on and be popular.

It's a great idea, and I love all the examples you provided. Little masterpieces!

[hentaixt 1,580]

To all the comments so far:

Thank You.

 

I wasn't sure if the concept was going to catch on, but it looks like we've interest at least. As for @Alfresco, I expected that to be an intermediary style story. Learning it be concise and still interesting, would evolve into more complex sentences a descriptive situations, and eventually to shorter stories that could go into Wet Carpet. So what you'd is fine. I also thought it might be a fun challenge for those like us who're already accomplished, to see if we can make super simple stories like I made for the examples. It actually takes effort make something that short still be exciting to read in some fashion.

I also thought these were easy enough to reuse concepts from other stories in new ways. Regardless, I hope this thread has a long and fun life. ^_^

[hentaixt 1,580]

"Wow, I knew I needed to pee, but not this bad."

"Sandra, you're going to turn the whole Jacuzzi yellow..."
"You think I actually can, Becky?"

"Never know unless we try, seeing you go has me needing relief too!"

[hentaixt 1,580]

I was so drunk that night, I stumbled out into the street, leaning on every wall just to stay vertical.

Unfortunately, that wall ended abruptly into an alley.

Fortunately, she was there squatting and pissing a river, fully exposed and facing the street.

You better believe that got my senses awakened and so did the blowjob she gave me.

[kalle2020 925]

OK, I'll give it a try. Please forgive me any mistakes; English is not my native language:

 

You did not even take your coat off before you rushed to the toilet.

"I had to pee so bad for the last 15 km of the bike ride", you sighed with relief and smiled.

I walked up to you and kissed you on the forehead. You were still peeing.

 

[hentaixt 1,580]

Have I been here for days or just hours, chained, blindfolded, naked in this corner?

I know someone will come, this is not my fate... is that footsteps?

The gag is removed from my mouth, I stretch to relax my jaw, as a warm stream pelts my face.

I know it is urine, but may be the only thing I get for days, I drink it greedily trying not to waste any as the stream wanes.

I feel a bite on my breast enough to leave a mark, as the knot on the blindfold comes loose, she kisses me.

Now it is my turn to tie her up!

 

(I know this 1 is 6 lines... but I needed it for the payoff ^__^)

Edited May 12, 2021 by hentaixt

[hentaixt 1,580]

That's a start Kalle!

You can use this to help refine your English too. ^_^ Let us know if you want grammar feedback on your stories.

[kalle2020 925]

3 minutes ago, hentaixt said:

You can use this to help refine your English too. ^_^ Let us know if you want grammar feedback on your stories.

Sure! If you have any grammar feedback, I'd love to hear it.

[hentaixt 1,580]

On 2/19/2021 at 6:29 PM, kalle2020 said:

OK, I'll give it a try. Please forgive me any mistakes; English is not my native language:

 

You did not even take your coat off before you rushed to the toilet.

"I had to pee so bad for the last 15 km of the bike ride", you sighed with relief and smiled.

I walked up to you and kissed you on the forehead. You were still peeing.

 

Mostly it's just a bit of structure... which's often a struggle even for some of the people who use only English. ^<^

I'm going to re-write it the way I think you intended, so you can compare.

"You rushed straight to the toilet and did not even bother removing your jacket."

"I had to pee at least the last 15km of the bike ride." She said, sighing with relief and a smile.

While she was still peeing I walked forward and kissed on the forehead.


Just some basic changes. I hope you can see the difference. I did change the "you" to "she"... that's the only major difference. You were writing as it as a couple, "You and I," it's fine... but that can be difficult to understand sometimes.

Hope that helps.

[weequeen 1,982]

what a great idea! I’ll have one to try

 

She was at a house party and she didn’t know anyone but the guy she had been talking to all night was fun and he kept looking at her as she wiggled in desperation.

”I need another drink but want something different. Fresh from the tap,” he said and he put his plastic cup up to her. She smiled, knowing what she wanted; she lifted her skirt and moved her panties to the side and began to pee into the cup. The stream was fast and warm, he felt the heat through the cup as she filled it up.

When her stream stopped after a dribble he lifted the cup to his mouth and drank it down. 

[weequeen 1,982]

I was riding the bus with my friend and it was caught in traffic and I knew I should have peed before I left work! I felt like I was going to burst!

”I can’t wait anymore,” I said and this isn’t the first time I’ve had an “accident” with my friend with me. I covered my lap with my jacket and moved my pants and panties down and pissed directly into the seat until it started to drip onto the floor.

And this time to my surprise my friend said “my turn” and she did the same, flooding the seat with her pee. I must have finally convinced her to run you can have with pee. 

[wetwulf 3,324]

"How much... further? I really... need to pee."

"Just about... two miles. We need to keep pace or we won't... get out PR."

"I don't even care anymore. I need to pee so badly."

"Well you can't just squat and pee right here. Someone will see you. Let's keep running and hopefully you'll make it."

"Okay, I'll try."

"We're getting closer."

"I can't... I can't hold it. Ahhhhh. Ohhhh."

"Oh my god, you're just pissing in your shorts and you're still running."

"Mmm hmm, and it feels... so much better. You should do it, too."

"I guess I could. Ohhhhh. Ohhh, wow, you're right. That does feel good. Mmm."

"And we didn't even have to mess up our pace by stopping."

"Well, we're here now. I need to finish. Ohhhhh, yes, that's much better."

"How did we do?"

"Two minutes faster than last time!"

[gldenwetgoose 21,471]

On 2/22/2021 at 6:09 PM, wetwulf said:

"How much... further? I really... need to pee."

"Just about... two miles. We need to keep pace or we won't... get out PR."

"I don't even care anymore. I need to pee so badly."

 

Sorry to break the topic flow...   the first pic here sprang immediately to mind. --->

 

[hentaixt 1,580]

"Mom, I'm home!"

"Mom?"
"Oh, there you are... why are you always peeing in my room when I get home?"

"Might as well join you, I needed to get these wet panties off anyway."

Edited May 12, 2021 by hentaixt

[hentaixt 1,580]

I love going shopping with my Mom and Aunt.

They let me try on all the pretty clothes at the expensive stores.

Then when we read the price tags... we all go to the changing room together and soak the over-priced trash with our shared piss!

[hentaixt 1,580]

"Hey Cidney?"

"Yes, Lainey?"

"Do you remember the last time we went out to eat and I DIDN'T pee under the table?"
"No, not really... but with your stream hitting my shin this isn't it either."

"Well, what's your excuse? My pumps are getting flooded with your piss too right now..."

[hentaixt 1,580]

Good thing this theater is always empty in the middle of the day, I can pull my skirt up my legs and pee anywhere.

OH NO! Is that the usher?

There is no way I can stop right now, I am going to get busted...

What are the odds? She stopped next to me, shrugged, and started to unbuckle her pants too.