Hot summer night in the city

[Kupar 13,339]

 

This story is a male view counterpoint to the first part of 'Summer filled with pee' - a real-life experience from @Ppgirl  (link at the bottom of this story). [Voyeurism, mild desperation, F outdoor peeing, male masturbation, implied male peeing] . Mods please move if you think it's in the wrong place. Thank you.

I don’t normally follow young women around and I wouldn’t describe myself as a voyeur, though like all young men I’ll have a second or third look if I see a babe walking by. But that Friday night something happened, and I couldn’t help myself.

I’d stayed late at work; the creative team in the ad agency I work for had a pitch coming up the following Monday, and we knew we had to finish up the ideas for the campaign. I’m a junior copywriter, but the creative director likes me, and I’d been working hard on storylines. We’re old school – a few drinks in the afternoon to help the creative juices flow. But now it was 9.30pm, we were done, and it was time to head home.

I set off across the park, my head buzzing from the pressure of creating, and the beers, and then I saw them. Two young women – they looked around 19, maybe 20 – sitting on a bench about 50 yards along the path in front of me, guiltily drinking what was clearly not just orange juice, judging from the way they were laughing and talking. Short skirts, bare legs, thin tees – sexy summer evening wear.

I remember thinking the scene would make a great opening shot for a TV commercial: the light fading fast, the streetlights glowing, the summer heat of the city becoming more bearable. The camera would start wide, showing crowds of people relaxing at the end of the working week, then zoom in fast and close to the girls’ smiling faces. I didn’t know what my TV commercial was going to advertise, but I was already thinking about a possible script when I saw them get up and walk quickly away.

I had to follow. I had an idea starting to form and I wanted it to develop. That’s how it happens for me: I’m a creative person, but all ideas need to be helped along. Keeping far enough back to be unseen I watched them turn down a couple of streets. It became obvious pretty quickly from the way they were walking that they needed to pee and were looking for somewhere away from the crowds.

To be honest with you, Friday night in the city you see lots of sights, and it wouldn’t be the first time I’d seen girls peeing. I’d generally just walk on by, but this was different – I’d never followed two sexy young women who were clearly about to burst. Anyway, it was too late to turn back now, and I was starting to look forward to it.

They reached a school and were looking pretty uncomfortable as they hurried through a passageway to the parking lot. Occasionally the blonde would squeeze her thighs tight together, and double over a little, revealing more of her long legs than she realised as she rested her hand on her brunette companion for support. She really, really needed to go.

And then the lights went out! I almost swore out loud but stifled it – I didn’t want to give myself away. And then – praise the Lord – the brunette switched on her phone flashlight, and I watched as the blonde squatted against a fence, reached under her skirt to yank her panties to one side and let go. The look on her face as her stream hit the concrete was priceless: relief etched into her expression, head tipped back, eyes half closed, mouth half open. I could hear the hiss from 50 yards. The scene was lit by wavering light from the brunette’s phone – wavering because I could dimly make out that she too was bursting and was dancing and hopping while she watched her friend.

Finally the stream stopped and the blonde stood up and took the phone from her friend, who stood with her legs apart and placed her hands on her hips, a smile playing across her face. In the pale light I could see what a stunning figure she had: firm breasts pushing out the fabric of her tee shirt, and her skirt stretched beautifully over a backside to die for. She must have stood like that for 15 seconds, as if she could sense someone was watching and admiring her (at least that’s how it seemed to me). And then she peed … slowly at first, then with rapidly increasing force. Either she wasn’t wearing any panties or she was peeing straight through them. Even from a distance I could see her pee splashing from the ground, her friend watching, wide-eyed, as the puddle joined her own,  spreading into an ever-widening circle. As the waterfall slowed, I heard a moan – almost orgasmic in intensity – and felt a tell-tale twitch in my pants.

Hey – don’t judge! It’s natural, and I couldn’t help it. I was so turned on, watching from round a corner, wishing I was closer. I closed my eyes, imagining my hand between the brunette’s legs, feeling the warm pee coating my fingers. I closed my eyes, lent back against a wall, and my hand moved instinctively to my crotch, unzipping my fly. Seconds later and I was lost in the moment, the familiar rhythmic routine, the building tension, the few seconds on the edge ... before the wave of euphoria and the spattering sound of sticky fluid hitting concrete brought me back to the real world.

When I opened my eyes the girls were gone. I have no idea whether they came past where I was standing in the shadows – if they did, they were very quiet. I zipped myself up and walked over to where they’d peed. The puddle was already starting to dry on the hot ground. It looked like it needed topping up.

 

 

[Ppgirl 559]

This was so hot. 😏 Well written. 

[Kupar 13,339]

Just now, Ppgirl said:

This was so hot. 😏 Well written. 

Thank you! That is the first piece of pee fiction I have written (apart from getting carried away in my dream holiday description in another thread), so if you have any suggestions for improvement please let me know! 

[gldenwetgoose 21,488]

Excellent - perfect build up of the tension and a great read.  Let's hope it's the first of many.

[Kupar 13,339]

1 minute ago, gldenwetgoose said:

Excellent - perfect build up of the tension and a great read.  Let's hope it's the first of many.

That's a great compliment, especially coming from a master. Thanks - it means a lot.

[kalle2020 926]

Excellent. Also leaving some room for the reader's imagination ("Either she wasn’t wearing any panties or she was peeing straight through them."). I'm already looking forward to your next story, @Kupar!

[Kupar 13,339]

11 minutes ago, kalle2020 said:

Excellent. Also leaving some room for the reader's imagination ("Either she wasn’t wearing any panties or she was peeing straight through them."). I'm already looking forward to your next story, @Kupar!

Thanks! @Ppgirl's original wasn't clear on the detail of whether she was wearing panties, or peed through them or pulled them aside, and of course in the near dark from 50 yards away I couldn't really tell 🙂 

[oliver2 4,418]

Huh, I followed the exhibitionist aspect, and @Kupar the voyeur... 🤔

[Kupar 13,339]

12 minutes ago, oliver2 said:

Huh, I followed the exhibitionist aspect, and @Kupar the voyeur... 🤔

We're all different 🙂 and that's one thing that makes this such a great place!

[speedy3471 10,655]

Very well written sir, very descriptive and easy flowing storyline. Well done. Hope there are many more stories to read

[oliver2 4,418]

38 minutes ago, speedy3471 said:

Very well written sir, very descriptive and easy flowing storyline.

Easy flowing many things, really...

[speedy3471 10,655]

24 minutes ago, oliver2 said:

Easy flowing many things, really...

You picked up on my pun I see lol

[LovesToWet 3,800]

Brilliant read, well done @Kupar

[MidoriLemonade85 2,366]

Sorry, Sir Kupar, I am late to the party on this story, but I am catching up on my pee stories homework! 😆 God I love this!  💖I adore  the way you describe their beautiful bodies. The gorgeous, though brief! cock-rubbing while leaning against the wall gave me tingles. So, so good. You have such an eloquent way of describing erotic feelings and female bodies. Beautiful! 🔥💜

[Kupar 13,339]

38 minutes ago, MidoriLemonade85 said:

Sorry, Sir Kupar, I am late to the party on this story, but I am catching up on my pee stories homework! 😆 God I love this!  💖I adore  the way you describe their beautiful bodies. The gorgeous, though brief! cock-rubbing while leaning against the wall gave me tingles. So, so good. You have such an eloquent way of describing erotic feelings and female bodies. Beautiful! 🔥💜

Thank you Midori! I'm glad I can make you all tingly 🙂