miniskirtpisser

This is very interesting. I can’t wait to read about the training itself. 

On 1/14/2020 at 7:53 PM, Lutab said:

Fun story. I like the different perspective 

Thank you 😊

2 hours ago, wetwulf said:

A very unique perspective @miniskirtpisser. I commend you for trying something different from most of the other stories posted here. 

Thank you for your compliment, @wetwulf. 

@Brutus and @Dr.P, thank you for the insight regarding sounds of women peeing. May I know whether it is more exciting to hear only the sound of the stream or to hear the hissing sound interspersed with some sighs and moans? I’m asking because when I pee after long time of holding, I tend to sigh and moan as well. It felt more erotic that way for me. 

@Brutus If you feel that you’d like me to post that other question somewhere else, please let me know. I don’t want to accidentally “hijack” the comments thread on your story. 

- MSP -

Thank you for the two awesome stories, Brutus!! I love the changes that you made with the second one. I felt that it was much much better than the original draft that you sent to me. I love the first one as well. I never know that simply listening to a woman peeing can be that sexy. I thought you’d always need the visual aspect as well. Thanks for changing my mind 😊

@Darkguy @Peefreak99 @steve25805

Thank you very much for your inputs. I will continue to work on the story then. I will post it here when it’s all done. 

Hey all, I am thinking of writing a story of an adult woman (older than 18) who peed on a teddy bear that she loved as a child but has now discarded. The story will be told from the point of view of the teddy bear. There will be no erotic actions done by a minor (e.g. I will not describe a child peeing on the teddy bear). However, I will mention that the teddy bear was a treasured possession of her when she is younger (e.g. I will mention that she cuddled, played house with it, took it to her bed when she was a kid). What do you think about it? Would it be considered too taboo or borderline child exploitation? If it is, thank you for letting me know and I definitely will NOT write the story. 

Thank you in advance for your feedback. 

9 hours ago, Brutus said:

@miniskirtpisser I appreciate your mentioning of my story as inspiration, that was unexpected and very humbling. Thank you. 

I think it's worth mentioning also, how endearing you are. Not taking constructive criticism personal, and always conducting yourself with such a joyous attitude, it's very pleasant. It's something I noticed years ago actually.

Thank you very much for your kind words, Brutus. I love most of your stories and I do get inspired by them. I hope you’ll write more of them 😊

On 10/26/2019 at 3:28 PM, rann said:

Yes! Sometimes I like keeping certain details ambiguous for exactly the reason you stated.

As for the protagonist, well, I like to think that they're love for history left them so dumbfounded as to what the girl was about to do that they weren't thinking straight; they could barely even fathom the idea of pissing on history until the girl was busy doing it 😉

I don't think the protagonist would tattle however -- I have a feeling that they are the sort to try and get some answers themselves, say, by observing further and/or confronting the girl

 

On another note, I am very happy you enjoyed it. Your stories were some of the ones that inspired me to try writing in the first place so I am kind of star-struck that you liked my writing.

Thank you very much for your explanation. I am hoping that you’d write more naughty peeing stories. I love the third person narrative of the story and the bewilderment of the protagonist. 

Thank you also for your kind words about my writings. I am glad that you enjoyed my story. 😊

12 hours ago, nopjans said:

Yes, naughty wiping is a whole other aspect of this fetishized that I would love to explore. I hadn’t even considered it as a thing until seeing the term you coined here. 

Thank you!! I’m not sure if naughty wiping is a term that has been used before or not. Feel free to use and spread it though. I’d love to read more stories involving naughty wiping. 

16 hours ago, nopjans said:

Absolutely fabulous story, @miniskirtpisser  

Thank you very much 😊

21 hours ago, Starks2010 said:

If you offered me the bottle, I would’ve drank some warm pee. Is the shewee reusable or do you dispose of it? I’m a fan of squatting. A big part of the turn on for me is panties and pants down, all exposed, ass spread from squatting. The medium to high squats are the best. Splattered mess on the ground with littered napkins/tissue. 

Me too. I also love squatting. Shewee is reusable & quite easy to clean too. I recommend it. 

On 10/22/2019 at 12:43 AM, pee01 said:

Great story thanks for posting it. 

Most welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. 

On 10/22/2019 at 12:42 AM, pee01 said:

Thanks for this story and good information you posted here. You do have a big bladder that impressed. That must be hard first time needing to pee bad and using a shewee. Stop the flow and get the aim right must be hard a first. I like hear about you using this device more. Are you going to use it on a everyday basics ? I is this quicker then squat or going in mens room urinal ? its been know for years harder for women who need to pee bad when outside. 

Thank you for your comment, pee01. I don’t think using will be my regular peeing method. I don’t really like having to really regulate my pee pressure. As I do need to ensure that I don’t pee too much and accidentally overfill the Shewee, peeing with shewee is also slower than peeing by squatting. 

On 10/21/2019 at 9:29 PM, Alfresco said:

@miniskirtpisser, That sounds like you've got it really mastered now.   You have a very large and impressive bladder capacity and it must have taken quite some confidence to make the first actual pee with the device to be inside your car, before you had confirmed that it wouldn't leak and that you were able to stop the flow in time to avoid overflowing the bottle.   Now you have an easy solution if you are stuck in traffic or simply don't want to get out of the car.   In some ways it is a good job your husband doesn't have a pee fetish.  If my wife did that next to me in the car I wouldn't be able to stop myself looking and I think I might risk crashing the car!

All in all, I prefer girls to pee outside without the aid of a device, but if it gives you more freedom and options then that is great.

Thank you for your comment, Alfresco. I think Shewee is really just a novelty & a last resort thing for me. Squatting outside is definitely preferable. Another downside with is that I don’t feel I can completely empty my bladder. There’s always something left behind and I don’t particularly enjoy that feeling.

On 10/21/2019 at 3:10 AM, BlindListener said:

miniskirtpisser,

 

 

 

 

Thank you for sharing your Shewee Flexi Experiences with details.  Hopefully using it will get easier for you.

Most welcome. Thank you for the well wishes. 

On 10/22/2019 at 2:17 AM, ButterflyGod said:

I've got a few naughty pee ideas, relating to graves/desecration/etc, if that might help get the stories flowing?
No pun intended lol

Thank you!! Please share your idea with me if you want.

I loved this story. I enjoyed fantasizing about the thorough defilement of the fictional historic landmark. I also somewhat adored the naïveté of the protagonist of this story. It’s amazing that they still don’t know that she is about to pee when she is exposing her pussy in such a way. What else would she do 😜😜?? I am not sure if it is intentional or not but I enjoyed the fact that you keep the the protagonist’s gender ambiguous. If feels easier to relate to them. 

By the way, if you don’t mind, may I know whether the protagonist choose to tattle about the girl peeing to the authority or the tour guide? Just curious. Feel free not to answer if you really want to keep it that way. 

12 hours ago, daemoniak said:

Loved the story!

I just wonder if I am the odd one, as for some reason I find it naughtier NOT to emphasize the naughtiness.

Specifically, I find the story better without those two sentences:

 

For some reason, I find that emphasizing the naughtiness is a turn-off. I feel like the author is trying too hard to dictate my feelings/reactions. It feels like railroading... maybe because I am bit of a contrarian.

Or maybe it is because NOT emphasizing the naughtiness makes it look like this is a perfectly normal and routine happening. She needed to pee, there was a convenient tombstone to use as a toilet, no need to make a fuss about it!

Hey Daemoniak, thank you for the constructive criticism. I agree with your comment regarding the first sentence (i.e. “Not caring one bit ...”). After re-reading the story, this sentence does seems superfluous.  It feels like I am telling the reader what she feels instead of allowing the audience to make their own conclusion. 

Having said the above, I feel that the second sentence (i.e. If grieving family member, ....) should stay. I was inspired by @Brutus story (

) in which I really enjoyed the description about how sad Mrs Russo was when the two girls pretty much destroy her favorite daffodils. I was trying to get that kind of effect in this particular story. If you have better idea on how to get that effect without being dictating the readers’ feeling/reactions, I would really appreciate your suggestions. 

22 hours ago, Chicklover99 said:

Great story thanks for sharing 

Most welcome 😊

23 hours ago, guy00 said:

This story is awesome! Girls pissing on graves are a major turn-on for me!

Thank you very much!! I am glad you enjoyed it. 

On 9/2/2016 at 11:14 PM, nopjans said:

Fabulous story. I love that she just wipes with dish towel and puts it back.

Thank you very much!! I like that part as well. In addition to naughty peeing, I love naughty wiping. Peeing without wiping just doesn’t feel as comfortable for me. 

On 9/1/2016 at 11:41 PM, pisslover84 said:

I love the story. I came really hard to it can't whit to see more of your work

Thank you very much!!