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Pee Vandalism with Nina and Katie - Vacation (4)


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Hello,

thanks for writing your stories, I enjoy reading them. I figured the girls wouldn't *really* care about Michael and would not cover him in case he was caught. But I didn't expect them to dispose of him just like that. That's cruel and in my imagination it does not really fit to their style. However the stories are your imagination and so they are your characters.

Again, thanks for the entertainment

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On 1/12/2022 at 4:36 PM, nopjans said:

@rann this is extraordinary. It really hits all the things I love about your writing and might be the best naughty pee story I've read in a long time. I hope Nina and Katie have more adventures together down the line.

I am happy you liked it and you encourage me to keep making new installments! Do not worry, there is already a next adventure planned. They will have Paris to themselves, after all.

 

8 hours ago, imaginepeeing said:

Hello,

thanks for writing your stories, I enjoy reading them. I figured the girls wouldn't *really* care about Michael and would not cover him in case he was caught. But I didn't expect them to dispose of him just like that. That's cruel and in my imagination it does not really fit to their style. However the stories are your imagination and so they are your characters.

Again, thanks for the entertainment

No worries, and thank you for sharing. I knew that would be a bit of a divisive move to do such a thing. The girls are troublemakers for sure but I also kind of think of the two more as lone wolves that kind of do their own thing but also won't hesitate to trap prey either. Thank you for your feedback though and I might tweak how they interact with others in the future. Glad that it was at least able to entertain.

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Huge series! Love them, I missed they needed to go to Michael’s place (pick something up or whatever reason) before the trip and “innocently” trash it (or maybe some spoiling I in his car)

 

anyway, anyhow, amazing story!

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1 hour ago, MBP said:

Huge series! Love them, I missed they needed to go to Michael’s place (pick something up or whatever reason) before the trip and “innocently” trash it (or maybe some spoiling I in his car)

 

anyway, anyhow, amazing story!

I am happy that you like my stories! Thank you, it is very encouraging. Despite what happened to Michael, I definitely enjoyed having a "third party" around for the girls to interact with. Who knows, in the future, what you suggest definitely seem like things they might do given the opportunity.

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10 hours ago, naught said:

i know this would probably be out of character, but it would be kinda exciting and funny if the consequences caught up with them in one of the installments.

I actually would like for them to face some sort of consequences sometime, but I have not decided how to do it yet.

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On 1/15/2022 at 3:02 AM, rann said:

I am happy that you like my stories! Thank you, it is very encouraging. Despite what happened to Michael, I definitely enjoyed having a "third party" around for the girls to interact with. Who knows, in the future, what you suggest definitely seem like things they might do given the opportunity.

Thinking it again, maybe Mike could have “forgot or lost” his car keys and the girls can get them, with a spare house keys on the car 😈.

 

keep up the good work 

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On 1/17/2022 at 2:33 PM, MBP said:

Thinking it again, maybe Mike could have “forgot or lost” his car keys and the girls can get them, with a spare house keys on the car 😈.

 

keep up the good work 

Yesss adding in the detail of the girls taking his car and trashing it and his house would be a great addition for the next story

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On 1/17/2022 at 8:33 AM, MBP said:

Thinking it again, maybe Mike could have “forgot or lost” his car keys and the girls can get them, with a spare house keys on the car 😈.

 

keep up the good work 

Do these two seem like the type that would let something like "keys" stop them? 😉

44 minutes ago, 88mphArtist said:

Yesss adding in the detail of the girls taking his car and trashing it and his house would be a great addition for the next story

Don't worry, the next part actually starts out with Michael very much fresh on their minds.

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@rann great series, thank you so much.

Extreme vandalism isn't normally my favorite, and the scene with the Maserati was too much for my taste. But the series is well-written and truly communicates the spirit of two girls doing what they please for the sole purpose of their pleasure. And as it is only a fantasy, I'm totally ok with it. To be honest, I was throbbing from start to finish of the four chapters and can't wait for a continuation.

To me, the fate of Michael was totally in line with the general character of the protagonists who use and abuse until they get tired of something (or someone). Even if it hurts to read about such meanness - that's just what to expect of this type of girl (that's why I don't like 'em in real life 😉 ).

Just wanted to say thank you - looking forward to what you come up with next 🙂

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3 hours ago, Wetseat said:

I was kinda hoping they would go use his car as their toilet after he got arrested. I thought I remembered reading that but I could be confused with a different article. 

I think you will like the next part a lot then! It will be up shortly 😁

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