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Pee Vandalism with Nina and Katie - Vacation (3)


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This is first-rate writing, as always @rann. I am very interested in what further misdeeds these three commit in Paris and elsewhere. Maybe a they will find themselves in a fine arts gallery or a museum?

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Great work. I hope you write more about them. Maybe they can get Mike to pee somewhere naughty the next day. Also maybe they will all get turned on and be naughty with each other too.

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Thank you all very much! I am the type of person who hates what they have written pretty much immediately after writing it so I am very happy you like it.

@p1ssputz those are some wonderful ideas. I love how we can pool (!) ideas about naughty peeing. I'll keep a look out if you are inspired to write some stories as well!!

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Actually friends, I wanted to ask -- I know that I am quite slow at writing between installments (I apologize for this) but I would like to know what things specifically did you enjoy about this segment. You all probably have a good idea about what I like by now, but I am curious what you guys are liking so that I can continue doing it or make a few tweaks here or there as I write. Thank you as always for reading! 🙏

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On 4/19/2021 at 12:29 PM, rann said:

Actually friends, I wanted to ask -- I know that I am quite slow at writing between installments (I apologize for this) but I would like to know what things specifically did you enjoy about this segment. You all probably have a good idea about what I like by now, but I am curious what you guys are liking so that I can continue doing it or make a few tweaks here or there as I write. Thank you as always for reading! 🙏

I realize I'm late getting to this message, but you deserve some feedback. You really, really do. This is gorgeous work.

As always, the overtly destructive acts are great fun. To me, there's never been anything quite to top the part in the first installment when Nina and Katie were just rifling through luggage and stealing or breaking whatever they felt like, because that was personal property already owned by other people, but it's always fun. Even when it's elevator carpeting, for example.

I'm also enjoying seeing the characters deliberately fully relieving themselves. Not just a squirt here and there, but emptying their bladders as much as if they were really using toilets. That's just super satisfying. You have a knack for writing that kind of behavior.

On a more nuanced note, I'm very curious about the role of Michael. He's a spectator overall so far, but not quite a submissive plaything for the vacationers. Seeing him get slowly dragged into the mix is really fun. What's going to happen? Is he going to end up being the most thoroughly destroyed mark of all, or is he going to join in as a perpetrator? There's some suspense there.

Also, the thought just occurred to me of Nina and Katie waking up the next morning, and discovering that with both elevators out of commission, they have to take the stairs down. 😛 What's that they say about not making certain messes where you eat?

Overall, I just want to say, please keep at this. I love it, and I know I'm not even close to alone. It's not easy to give detailed feedback when we're just here for our kicks, but the readership is there.

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Great job on them. Sorry I missed your post asking for feedback. I love how they fully relieve themselves too. I hope Michael does end up getting involved in the naughty pissing and ends up fucking the girls. I do like having a third character along with them. 

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