Pee Vandalism with Nina and Katie - Vacation (3)

[rann 686]

This story is a direct continuation of Part 2 with my characters Nina and Katie. This time, Michael is also along for the ride... I hope it is a fun read. Thank you so much for your continued feedback and criticism -- you all have been very welcoming and accepting of my stories. You encourage me to continue writing!

This story contains content that may be objectionable to some, namely themes of pee vandalism and general malice. All characters and events are works of fiction.

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Pee Vandalism with Nina and Katie - Vacation (3)

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"Best coffee shop in town!" Michael beamed proudly. The blonde Katie and the bookish, black-haired Nina stood with their new travel companion in front of a little building that still managed to give out an air of coziness despite looking a bit worn. Having taken to showing the girls around town, Michael had decided to bring them to an authentic Parisian café to start the day like the locals, and he knew that the small family-owned Le Cheval Blanc would provide an unforgettable start to the day.

In all honesty, "unforgettable" was certainly an accurate way to describe Michael's day thus far; by chance, his day had started with a clear view of the raven-haired girl's genitals. Completely unabashed, Nina had made a show of publicly and messily urinating over a pallet of newspapers intended to be delivered. Then, as if such casual vandalism was absolutely nothing out of the ordinary, both she and her blonde friend somehow befriended him as an impromptu tour guide.

"You certainly weren't kidding!" Nina smiled, snapping Michael out of his reverie. "The croissants are so fluffy and the coffee has such a rich taste to it! I can't say anything comes close back home." The trio had seated themselves at a little booth towards the back of the café. Although it was busy, it wasn't crowded and most customers had opted to sit at the counter for convenient seconds.

"Yeah! It's real good!" Katie grinned as she placed her cup on the table. Delighted by her coffee, the blonde had wasted no time in downing it and was pouring herself more from the pot.

Michael returned a friendly smile, gratified by their enjoyment. Watching Nina and Katie sitting across from him excitedly sampling their baked goods, he couldn't help but notice how cute the two were. In fact, both were rather good-looking; on more than one occasion Michael had to keep himself from staring at Katie's posterior and the way her underwear band was visible from beneath her tight denim shorts as she moved about. Nina was a similar story -- despite her comparatively plainclothes attire, Michael had been struggling to look her in the eye without blushing all morning. Now however, the mood had changed and the girls in front of him seemed completely different from the ones he first met. Everyone was relaxed and enjoying the atmosphere.

"Whaaat? You're kidding!" Katie laughed as she gulped down a piece of croissant. "They seriously make you pay to use public bathrooms here??"

"Uh yeah," Michael replied cautiously. "They do it in a few of the countries here in Europe. It's kind of nice, you know? The money goes towards keeping them clean."

"I see," Nina mused. She had noticed a sign advertising one such facility outside the shop window, and had asked Michael about it. "I guess we wouldn't have realized..."

The remark got a crude laugh out of Katie while Michael winced slightly, sipping his coffee awkwardly to try and think of a way to change the subject.

Before he could however, Katie continued. "Ya know, a toilet actually sounds good right about now. The coffee is just too damn good! Ya mind?"

For a moment Michael was confused -- at the booth, Nina was sitting on the outer seat while Katie was seated towards the wall across from him. Although she shifted like she was about to get up, there were no toilets in the café.

But then, he heard the unmistakable sound of her unzipping her shorts and he knew exactly what she was about to do.

His face showed his alarm as he hissed at the blonde. "What? Here?? Just hold it! The toilets are right outside!" Michael simply couldn't believe her -- nonchalantly as asking for a refill, Katie had asked her present company if they would mind if she took a moment to empty her bladder on the café floor. Worse was the fact that he absolutely knew she would do it too, and his heart pounded in panic.

Thankfully, she stopped as she caught his eye.

Katie chuckled a moment as she watched Michael's terse expression. "Ohh Mike..." she muttered in mock-exasperation. Very slowly, like a cat stretching out under the sun, Katie extended her legs under the table to rest her feet in Michael's lap. At this, the boy tensed up further, unsure how to respond. Sliding her shorts and thong down to her knees, Katie's voice dropped to a seductive murmur, "now Mike... tell me, why should I go and tinkle in the toilet like a good girl... when I could just piss on the floor like a bad one?"

Despite having uttered such a filthy intention, she wore a demure expression and placed a finger to her lips. Yet sure enough, a quiet hissing sound could soon be heard under the table to announce the fact that blonde was, in fact, peeing on the café floor. Michael was paralyzed, but couldn't deny his curiosity. However, as if Katie could read his thoughts, the blonde playfully whispered, "no peeking~" as her friend simply grinned at the boy's discomfort.

Innocent as she appeared above the table, below the table was a far different story. Both the floor and the table's legs were built from elegant mahogany, though they may have been better served if they had been built of porcelain instead -- at the moment, both were being treated to the blonde's sudden whim of urinating on them as if they were no different than a common toilet. Without a hint of reticence, her stream of pee splattered against the solid surfaces as if it were their sole purpose -- to Katie, it was. Thus, she couldn't care less as she continued to piss all over floor, causing it to spray back messily against the wall and table legs. In fact, she was quite enjoying the sound it was making, and she knew that both Nina and Michael could hear her naughty misbehavior quite clearly.

"Hey!" Michael protested indignantly as Katie laughed.

For a moment, she had pushed her stream forward to spray onto the boy's legs. She was simply having too much fun! Although she couldn't see it under the table, she relished in what would soon be the aftermath of her actions. Certainly the wood might end up stained or smelling unpleasant, but her bladder would be empty and any damage left behind would be someone else's problem. With zero remorse for what she was doing, how could she not enjoy the sheer convenience of peeing all over her arbitrary toilet? And indeed, Katie made full use of this convenience as her stream reduced to a trickle; with a shake of her hips, the blonde ensured that the last droplets of her pee ended up on the floor rather than in her thong, before letting out a gentle contented sigh.

"You sure did have to go!" Nina chuckled as the blonde pulled her shorts back on and resituated herself in her seat. "You peed so much that our shoes will be splashing around for a bit!"

Sure enough, Michael looked down towards his feet to see a reflection of himself in a newly-made puddle glistening atop the mahogany floor. For better or worse, the blonde's urine had largely managed to avoid flowing too far from underneath the table, but there was indeed a little splash as he lifted his feet up. She had absolutely coated the wood with her piss.

Before Michael could open his mouth to speak however, Nina spoke up, clearly inspired by her friend's misdeed. "You know what? I could go for a piss right now myself." Naturally she looked directly at Michael as she announced this.

Knowing better than to try and dissuade the girl who was clearly comfortable with casual nudity, Michael simply sighed in resignation. "C'mon... the floor is soaked..."

"You should do it!" Katie prodded with a grin. "It felt great, and now I can drink some more coffee!"

At this, Nina eyed her own coffee mug. With a hint of amusement in her voice, she turned to Michael and shrugged, "fine. I won't pee on the floor then." She then grabbed the mug and lowered it beneath the table, grinning. "This will do!"

It dawned on Michael that Nina never seemed to have put her underwear back on after her morning relief and wondered if this was an intentional decision. Although he couldn't see it happening, without any cloth to get in the way, the girl had effortlessly positioned the mug below her genitals and was now taking pleasure in expelling into it what was once the very coffee it had contained.

Nina peed slowly, allowing her pussy to rest on the lip of the mug. There was something immensely satisfying about placing such a dirty part of her body on the very place that people would sip. Even more satisfying was the fact that she was defiling it with urine. As she continued to relieve herself in such a pleasurable fashion, she kept true to her word and ensured that none landed on the floor.

Alas, the mug was quickly filled to the brim, and Nina neatly placed it back onto the table without spilling a drop. Michael couldn't help but feel somewhat relieved -- although unsanitary, at the very least her urine was contained instead of landing all over the floor like her friend's. Still, Michael was appalled at how disrespectful the girls were, casually relieving themselves in the café!

Yet Michael's train of thought was abruptly broken again as he caught Nina's eye. Looking at him, the girl smirked, and Michael instantly knew that she was going to do something vile.

Nina picked up the mug and held it next to her. Without breaking eye contact, very slowly and deliberately, she tipped the mug over to pour its acrid contents all over the floor beneath them. She didn't stop until the mug was completely inverted and its contents were all over the floor. Then, as if to punctuate her enjoyment of the act, she flashed a wicked grin and let go of the mug, causing it to shatter against the wooden (and now, quite messy) floor.

"Run!" Katie hissed, and in a flash the girls were out of the shop, having grabbed their new friend by the wrist to keep him in tow. They continued to run until they were far from the shop, having ducked into a winding network of alleyways and shops. Finally slowing to a walk, the girls burst into a fit of laughter.

"Wha-what the hell is wrong with you?!" Michael panted in bewilderment. "You didn't even pay!"

"Wasn't going to." Katie merely grinned before turning to her partner in crime. "Fuck, Nina! You just had to get creative, huh?"

Nina laughed. "What are you talking about? Rather than piss all over the floor like your dirty ass, I made a neat little pee in the coffee mug! Not my fault it got knocked over!"

"Knocked over my ass!" the blonde retorted, laughing once again.

He could scarcely believe it, but he was starting to catch on to the fact that these girls truly did not care about the consequences of their perverse enjoyment. Depravity, peeing wherever is most convenient, and the casual vandalism resulting from such... these were nothing more than day to day indulgences for these girls. There was no sign of any morals at all, much less any guilt or remorse to be felt from, say, repaying the hospitality of a family-owned café by deliberately pissing all over their floor without so much as a Euro spared.

"C'mon, you can't say you didn't enjoy that!" Katie grinned at Michael.

The beautiful blonde stood in front of him, pleased with their outing thus far. Michael couldn't help but eye her up and down -- sleek and fashionable. No one would guess that just moments earlier she had slid down her shorts without a second thought in the middle of a public café.

A splattering sound caught their attention, and Michael turned to see Nina standing in a recessed alcove denoting an entryway for one of the many shops in the alley. She had bunched up her skirt around her waist and had her butt pressed against the glass front door of a closed shop that hadn't yet opened for the day. What they had just heard was the girl noisily beginning to pee on the welcome mat in front of it.

"I guess she still had some left," Katie chuckled as she watched her friend. Absent-mindedly holding the front of her skirt so as to hide most of her naughty bits, the gesture did nothing to hide the fact that the rude girl was urinating in broad daylight. Yet, Nina had been completely nonchalant about it; after messily peeing over the mat, the girl simply stepped away from the entryway without a glance back at neither her puddle nor the faint butt-print that now adorned the pee-streaked front door.

She did however catch Michael's gaze and grinned. "Kind of sucks when you have to stop mid-piss, you know? That cup wasn't big enough!"

Dirty as she was, Nina's pragmatism was somewhat charming in its own way and Michael found himself agreeing that a part of him was enjoying himself. He hesitated for a moment, but he couldn't help but grin back.

"Good thing you broke it then" Michael shrugged.

"Fuck! That's what I'm talking about!" Katie laughed, pleased that their new friend was finally loosening up. "Alright, so what's next, Mike?"

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Their decision hadn't been too difficult given that they had managed to find themselves in a shopping district. The trio spent the afternoon browsing a number of department stores promising the latest in Parisian fashion, and had eventually led themselves to a shopping mall bustling with high-end stores. Impish as usual, the girls seemed to enjoy picking out what would often be the skimpiest outfit in the shop and asking Michael if they should try it on... only to put the outfit back with a self-satisfied giggle. It was only when Nina and Katie had reached a store offering beachwear that they finally looked interested enough to buy something.

"Check out this one!" Katie motioned over to Nina. Lifting a hanger from the rack, she held out a black two-piece swimsuit for inspection.

"Hmm, is it a swimsuit or a lingerie set?" Nina grinned, noticing that the bikini didn't leave much to the imagination. "What do you think, Mike? Think Katie will look good in this?"

Michael's face was red, but he had also become accustomed to the provocations of the girls throughout the day. "Uh, sure. You should get it."

"Sweet! I'll get you a matching one too, Nina!" Katie grinned.

Although she said this, she merely placed the hanger back on the rack. Michael thought it another bust, but then the blonde deftly slipped the garments off the hanger and neatly folded them. With a quick glance around, she slipped the bikini into her bag with the cashier on the other side of the room none the wiser. Delighted, she thumbed through the rack for another set, presumably for Nina, and similarly concealed it; she had behaved no differently from an innocent girl going shopping, yet Katie clearly was planning on stealing them instead.

"Shoplifting??" Michael hissed at her, once again shocked at her behavior that day.

"Aww, I thought you loosened up..." Nina pouted.

Katie merely stuck out her tongue. "Calm down, we do it all the time. Fuck this place for being too expensive anyways."

As she turned to stare the boy down, her expression instead softened a bit as her voice dropped to a conspiratorial whisper. "We've been walking for hours now and in a few minutes I'm going to be bursting for a piss. Let me finish up and swipe a couple of their little dolphin shorts and then we can look for a nice spot to satisfy that urge, hm?"

The blonde had punctuated her suggestion with a playful wink, but Michael already knew that she was planning on relieving herself at the expense of someone else. Nevertheless, he had to admit that the thought of her doing so was enough to occupy himself until the girls finished with their shoplifting and he was snapped out of his daydream with a nudge from Nina.

"Ahh Fuck," Katie was muttering under her breath. "I took too long and I'm pretty much at my limit."

Nina laughed. "I could tell you were getting there! You were doing a little pee-pee dance while deciding on that last pair."

"Good thing this place is fucking empty," Katie sighed. "Mind keeping an eye out, Nina? I'll just squat behind this shelf and try to do it quietly."

"Nah," Nina waved dismissively. "That's no fun to do when you're bursting. Come on, I saw there were some changing rooms in the back."

As the raven-haired girl led the way, Michael's heart began to race. With no regard for the damage they would cause, Nina and Katie were casually discussing which spot would best serve for the blonde to relieve herself. Never mind the fact that they were in a high-end clothing store in a public mall -- the blonde clearly had no qualms about discreetly urinating on the carpet in order to satisfy her need. Yet, the way Nina had suggested the fitting rooms also made it clear that the girls not only had done this before, but also that they had preferences when it came to peeing in clothing stores. Michael couldn't help but wonder where else the girls might have considered marking if the changing rooms weren't present.

Prior to today, Michael wouldn't even have considered the thought, but he could see that the changing rooms would serve Katie's purposes perfectly. The rooms were located away from the rest of the store in a little hallway. Although the rooms themselves were only covered with curtains extending about 14 cm off the ground, the hallway offered privacy enough given that no one else was in the vicinity.

Sure enough, as soon as the trio reached the changing room furthest back in the hallway, Katie hurriedly began to unzip her denim shorts. The blonde paid no mind to Michael as she squeezed her posterior out of the shorts and handed them to Nina. As the beautiful girl stood in front of him with only a thong to cover her nethers, Michael could feel his face begin to redden.

However, as Katie stepped into the changing room, she smirked at the boy and closed the curtain.

Wrong as it was, Michael was disappointed not to see the deed performed.

"Aww, disappointed?" Nina teased as if she read his mind. "You can still see her under the curtain though~" she consoled as she crouched down and pointed towards the changing room.

Hesitantly, Michael did as his friend insisted, and it was true. He could tell by her feet that Katie was facing the wall away from them, and after a moment the girl adopted a squatting position most unusual for a typical fitting room patron. Because of the curtain he still couldn't see much, but through the gap Michael could just see the base of Katie's ass cheeks hovering above the carpet. Watching as the blonde wiggled her butt slightly (presumably as she reached to move her thong out of the way) it was only a moment before a pale yellow liquid began to fall onto the carpet between her legs.

Katie was pleased with her personal toilet and made no effort to pee quietly or discreetly. The hallway filled with the sound of naughty liquids accompanied by a distinct hiss as the girl peed a jet across the carpet, spraying against the back wall in the process. To anyone who might have entered, it was clear as day that the blonde was unabashedly pissing in the changing room, and was enjoying every moment of it.

Michael was transfixed on Katie's ass, now glistening a bit with stray droplets from her stream. He could tell that the girl wasn't simply content with making a neat little puddle in the corner of the room as she was gleefully swaying her hips around. Although he could only see a fraction of the mess, he could tell that Katie was intentionally making sure she pissed all over the carpet and as much of the wall that she could. There was no reason for her to do this, but she was simply taking too much pleasure in ruining the little room as she attained her relief. Clean up was someone else's problem, and she was damned sure that she was going to take full advantage of it.

The hiss eventually quieted as Katie's stream waned to a trickle. Finished peeing, the blonde bounced up and a down a couple times to make sure any stray drops of piss would end up on the floor before standing up and using the curtain to wipe her pussy. Content in sullying the room for her own convenience, Katie readjusted her thong back into place and opened the curtain to present the aftermath of her deed.

Katie coolly, walked up to Nina and began to put her shorts back on while Michael was left agape looking at the mess she made. The girl had peed so much that the carpet couldn't handle it -- in fact, a small trickle of amber liquid could be seen flowing out of the room and into the hallway. The carpet was soaked, the walls had streaks of piss running down them, and the humid stench of warm urine hung over the entire hallway. There was no doubt about what had transpired here.

Unfortunately, watching Katie so thoroughly relieve herself made Michael aware of a need of his own that he had been ignoring for some time. He found the need to be surprisingly urgent, and this did not escape the notice of Katie.

Katie grinned. "What, you have to go now too? It's alright, we can wait."

Michael furiously shook his head, feeling incredibly lame in comparison.

"Whaat?" Nina smirked. "Don't tell me you've never peed in public before!"

"Knowing him, he probably hasn't," Katie laughed. "C'mon! You have a dick! Just whip it out and do it on the wall over here. No one will know!"

For a split-second, the offer was tempting to Michael. However, there was no way he could expose himself in public the way the girls were used to. Thankfully his protest was received well enough. "I saw... some bathrooms out by elevators..."

Although the suggestion was met with laughter, the girls agreed and followed Michael to the public restrooms.

"Hey! I thought you said you have to pay for the bathrooms here!" Nina exclaimed upon seeing no indication of an entry fee.

"Uh, well some places like in commercial areas are still free," Michael offered. "I'll just be a minute!"

With the boy out of earshot, Katie laughed. "You really like him, huh?"

Nina grinned. "He's fun! Today is a blast so far, don't you think?"

"Poor guy. He hasn't pissed at all today, has he?" Katie mused.

Meanwhile, Michael had found the restroom to be deserted. Positioning himself in front of a urinal, Michael lowered the waistband of his shorts and began his long awaited relief. As he sighed, he heard the door open and idly turned to glance at it.

"Nina?!" Michael exclaimed, making a futile attempt to cover himself as the girl entered the bathroom. "What are you doing in the men's room?!"

"There's no point trying to cover up your dick if you already started peeing," Nina said with a laugh, making it patently obvious that she was staring. "And to answer your question, I'm here to do the same as you, alright?"

Michael merely sighed again, knowing that Nina probably found herself inspired just as he had after watching Katie empty herself.

"Alright, it's been a while since I've used a urinal!" Nina grinned as she approached the one right next to Michael's and hiked up her skirt to stand bottomless in front of it. "Perfect height!"

Michael didn't think so, as the urinal seemed a bit high for Nina, but knowing these girls they probably had practice.

Nina certainly showed that she was more than capable of using it... albeit not in a manner that would make the janitor very happy. Rather than starting immediately, the girl surprised Michael by instead turning around and placing her bare ass on the urinal. It was only when she had settled into a comfortable perch that she began to pee, arcing directly onto the tiled floor.

"Ahh~" Nina let out a satisfied sigh of contentment as an audible hiss filled the bathroom.

It was an incredibly erotic sight -- Nina had walked in, exposed herself to him for the second time that day, and then, instead of using the urinal right in front of her she instead opted for the far naughtier option of pissing directly onto the floor in front of it. She did not seem to care that her genitals were on full display and instead reveled in her sinful horniness by pulling her shirt up above her breasts as she played with her nipples. It was pure sexual depravity, and as the girl continued to unapologetically splatter the tiles with her piss, she was in pure bliss.

Unfortunately for the bathroom, its only drain was situated next to the handicap stall -- a somewhat logical choice under normal circumstances. At the present however, the lack of drain was causing Nina's pee to spread across the middle of the floor in a messy puddle of pale yellow. This did not escape Nina's notice either, and seemed to encourage the girl to wiggle her hips a bit to ensure that she left behind quite a task for the cleaning crew. She kept this up even as she finished emptying her bladder, shaking herself dry before stepping down from the urinal.

Michael couldn't help but notice that Nina's urinal glistened a clean white in comparison.

Nina didn't say a word, but merely winked at the boy. Allowing her skirt to settle onto her waist again, she neatly smoothed it out behind her. Then, as if to punctuate her rudeness, she spit on the urinal before pulling her shirt back over her breasts to finish re-clothing herself. Primly walking out of the restroom, no one would guess that this very same girl had, on a whim, pulled her clothes aside to pleasure herself as she peed all over the public bathroom floor -- fully aware that her naughty fun would soon be ruining someone else's day.

That didn't matter though.

Katie laughed as her friends reemerged from the bathroom. Not only had Nina's dirty happenings been audible from the entryway, but a quick glance below Michael's belt showed that peeing must have gotten quite difficult for the boy partway through. "Admit it, Mike! You thought Nina wouldn't use a proper restroom!"

Though it seemed to Michael that Nina hadn't so much used the restroom as she had used the floor, he couldn't help but laugh. Katie was probably no better and certainly was one to talk after surreptitiously using the carpet of a changing room. Teasing as they were, the pair of minxes were a lot of fun to be around and the trio spent the rest of the afternoon wandering the mall complex. From time to time they would still catch Michael off guard, such as the instance when Katie expressed her displeasure at a latte she had ordered by taking a few idle sips before pouring it out underneath a bench in the food court, but everyone was in high spirits; the girls were relaxed, playful, and quite often obscene in their conversations, but they seemed to be genuinely enjoying themselves.

"We had so much fun today!" Nina exclaimed as the Hôtel Plaza Athénée appeared around the street corner. With the sun setting, Nina and Katie's first day in Paris was at an end, but not before they made Michael promise that he would pick them up tomorrow as well.

"Thanks a bunch, Mike!" Katie smiled. "We really did have a lot of fun! Now you better come back tomorrow, alright?"

"Hopefully we didn't scare you away!" Nina laughed.

Michael shook his head, smiling. These girls were trouble for sure, but there was something intoxicating about their playful disregard for anything getting in the way of their fun. There was no way he would ditch them. "You got it! And tomorrow I'll bring my car so we can explore some of South France, alright?"

"Sounds good!" waved Nina as she and Katie set off for the hotel.

"I promise I won't pee in it!" Katie yelled back with a crude laugh.

Michael had to pause to think about that one -- but smiled as he headed home.

---

As Nina and Katie entered the Hôtel Plaza Athénée, the doorman reverently welcomed them with a bow. As Katie pressed the button to summon the elevator, Nina nudged her friend and motioned with her head.

To their right, the only other elevator had a sign affixed to its doors apologizing for the inconvenience. As its lack of running lights indicated, it was so written that the elevator was closed for repairs, with no estimated time of absence available. Apparently it would require extensive service before it could be returned to use.

Katie smirked. "That's too bad~" she whispered disinterestedly to Nina as the functioning elevator finally opened to let them in.

The girls enjoyed a fragrant, gentle ride up to the eighth floor as the luxurious elevator dutifully returned them to their suite. As the speaker proudly emitted a chime to indicate that they had arrived at their destination, the girls looked at each other.

When the doors opened, the only things to emerge were three articles of clothing: Nina's skirt, Katie's shorts, and the shiny black thong that had a penchant for poking out from underneath. The doors then closed -- after all, the "Door Close" button was being held.

It was fortunate that the girls' suite was the only unit on the eighth floor, because the elevator's doors did little to muffle the rambunctious laughter from within. Were the doors to open, one would have found themselves face to face with Katie's ass, legs apart, and in a high squat as she peed forcefully all over the springy plush carpet lining the floor. Presenting her ass in such an unladylike manner, Katie shrieked with laugher as she wiggled her butt, soaking every inch of the fabric.

Nina was no better behaved, as the raven-haired girl had lifted a leg and spread her pussy to piss into the elevator speaker that had moments earlier so happily announced its job well done. Naturally, like Katie had in the morning, Nina took pleasure in also pattering all over the elevator buttons, which were now starting to wink out one by one. "FFFFUUUCK YES!" Nina moaned in ecstasy.

The elevator was not very large, and for two dirty bottomless girls with two very full bladders? It did not stand a chance. Nina and Katie took turns directing their piss all over the elevator, from the metal panel to the velvet walls to the once-springy carpet. Quite satisfied in the damage they caused, both girls' streams began to wane; Katie was bent over, having been pissing backwards onto a wall while Nina was merely leant against an adjacent wall with her legs wide open. With nothing in the elevator untouched, both girls were content in letting their streams drip to a halt before shaking off.

"HELL YEAH!" Katie whooped as Nina pulled out some tissues from her shirt pocket. The duo wasn't exactly frugal in the amount of tissues they used, and wiped thoroughly before discarding each one onto the soggy, marsh-like carpet. Knowing that their room was still off-limits, after an entire day of bad behavior, it felt GOOD to have it culminate in the form of wanton vandalism inside the innocent little elevator. Pleased with urinating all over it, Nina and Katie shrieked with glee as they tore at the (now soaked) velvet lining and shattered some of the lights illuminating the car. As the doors finally re-opened, Katie spat on the controls before the disrespectful girls stepped back into the hallway.

"Ahh~ That felt good~" Nina murmured contentedly. There was not a shred of remorse as the two picked up their clothes and unlocked the door to their suite. The girls had finished pleasuring themselves, and it had all been at the expense of the poor elevator. Defiled, damaged, and smelling rankly of piss, all the elevator could manage was a pathetic crackle from its speaker as its doors closed and it limped back to the lobby.

Edited April 13, 2021 by rann

[nopjans 1,178]

This is first-rate writing, as always @rann. I am very interested in what further misdeeds these three commit in Paris and elsewhere. Maybe a they will find themselves in a fine arts gallery or a museum?

[Valenta 50]

It was a lovely part to read. Hope there will be more parts

[Lutab 1,052]

Great work. I hope you write more about them. Maybe they can get Mike to pee somewhere naughty the next day. Also maybe they will all get turned on and be naughty with each other too.

[Lutab 1,052]

Some hot ideas 🙂

[rann 686]

Thank you all very much! I am the type of person who hates what they have written pretty much immediately after writing it so I am very happy you like it.

@p1ssputz those are some wonderful ideas. I love how we can pool (!) ideas about naughty peeing. I'll keep a look out if you are inspired to write some stories as well!!

Edited April 16, 2021 by rann

[rann 686]

Actually friends, I wanted to ask -- I know that I am quite slow at writing between installments (I apologize for this) but I would like to know what things specifically did you enjoy about this segment. You all probably have a good idea about what I like by now, but I am curious what you guys are liking so that I can continue doing it or make a few tweaks here or there as I write. Thank you as always for reading! 🙏

[Spectacle 215]

On 4/19/2021 at 12:29 PM, rann said:

Actually friends, I wanted to ask -- I know that I am quite slow at writing between installments (I apologize for this) but I would like to know what things specifically did you enjoy about this segment. You all probably have a good idea about what I like by now, but I am curious what you guys are liking so that I can continue doing it or make a few tweaks here or there as I write. Thank you as always for reading! 🙏

I realize I'm late getting to this message, but you deserve some feedback. You really, really do. This is gorgeous work.

As always, the overtly destructive acts are great fun. To me, there's never been anything quite to top the part in the first installment when Nina and Katie were just rifling through luggage and stealing or breaking whatever they felt like, because that was personal property already owned by other people, but it's always fun. Even when it's elevator carpeting, for example.

I'm also enjoying seeing the characters deliberately fully relieving themselves. Not just a squirt here and there, but emptying their bladders as much as if they were really using toilets. That's just super satisfying. You have a knack for writing that kind of behavior.

On a more nuanced note, I'm very curious about the role of Michael. He's a spectator overall so far, but not quite a submissive plaything for the vacationers. Seeing him get slowly dragged into the mix is really fun. What's going to happen? Is he going to end up being the most thoroughly destroyed mark of all, or is he going to join in as a perpetrator? There's some suspense there.

Also, the thought just occurred to me of Nina and Katie waking up the next morning, and discovering that with both elevators out of commission, they have to take the stairs down. 😛 What's that they say about not making certain messes where you eat?

Overall, I just want to say, please keep at this. I love it, and I know I'm not even close to alone. It's not easy to give detailed feedback when we're just here for our kicks, but the readership is there.

[Lutab 1,052]

Great job on them. Sorry I missed your post asking for feedback. I love how they fully relieve themselves too. I hope Michael does end up getting involved in the naughty pissing and ends up fucking the girls. I do like having a third character along with them. 

[rann 686]

@Spectacle Thank you so much for taking the time to give feedback! I really want to write things people will enjoy so I like knowing what gets people going as they read about Nina and Katie's mischief. For example, though I might not be able to guarantee it for the next installment, I will make note of why you enjoyed the first installment so much! I had to also laugh about what you said about the elevators -- in the incomplete draft of the next installment, that's exactly what they were faced with in the morning 😛. But yes, thank you for your kind input and encouragement. I have the personality where I'm not very confident about my writing and start to dislike what I write if I dwell too much on it, so I am happy to know people enjoy this.

@Lutab No problem, friend! My request for feedback kind of came as an afterthought anyways so it was easy to escape notice. And yes, you can bet they'll continue to empty their bladders fully. As Nina kind of said it one point, it kinda sucks when you still have a bit left!

[Alfresco 11,630]

On 4/19/2021 at 5:29 PM, rann said:

Actually friends, I wanted to ask -- I know that I am quite slow at writing between installments (I apologize for this) but I would like to know what things specifically did you enjoy about this segment. You all probably have a good idea about what I like by now, but I am curious what you guys are liking so that I can continue doing it or make a few tweaks here or there as I write. Thank you as always for reading! 🙏

For me, apart from the obvious storyline, the reason I like your writing is that you give lots of details which allow the mind to conjure an image of what is going on and it describes the lead up to the actual peeing so that the reader understands what the girls are thinking.  You also paint a picture of the type of person that the two girls are - it is not just peeing that is their kink, but they are girls who really don't care what how any of their actions impact others and have no respect for rules or social convention.   I liked the fact that you had Mike pee in the toilet as a lot of these stories tend to ignore the fact that the innocent accomplice would actually also need to pee.  You recognised that need but held back the temptation for him to pee in a naughty manner as that was clearly not who he is or what he would have done at that stage.  Maybe as things develop he might eventually realise that it is a pain to have to find a toilet when the girls are just peeing wherever is convenient and maybe that will lead him to pee somewhere other than a toilet - even if it is somewhere quite mild.  Alternatively he may hold onto his morals and continue to insist on using the toilets.

I also assumed that now that both lifts have been decommissioned, the girls will actually only realise the detrimental affect it has on them when they come out of their rooms the next day and they have to use the stairs - that may mean that they think a bit more about where they decide to pee that could cause themselves a problem.  In the mean time, they will no doubt have left their rooms with full bladders and won't make it downstairs without wetting the carpet in the stairwell.

 

[rann 686]

6 hours ago, Alfresco said:

For me, apart from the obvious storyline, the reason I like your writing is that you give lots of details which allow the mind to conjure an image of what is going on and it describes the lead up to the actual peeing so that the reader understands what the girls are thinking.  You also paint a picture of the type of person that the two girls are - it is not just peeing that is their kink, but they are girls who really don't care what how any of their actions impact others and have no respect for rules or social convention. 

Thank you Alfresco! I'm glad you said that actually because there have been many times when I am thinking while writing, "am I just making things long-winded for no reason? Am I boring people with this extra stuff?" I personally like to know the little details and implications, but I've wondered if I should just have them pee and be done with it, since that's obviously the whole reason we are here!

[nopjans 1,178]

1 minute ago, rann said:

Thank you Alfresco! I'm glad you said that actually because there have been many times when I am thinking while writing, "am I just making things long-winded for no reason? Am I boring people with this extra stuff?" I personally like to know the little details and implications, but I've wondered if I should just have them pee and be done with it, since that's obviously the whole reason we are here!

Absolutely not. Your stories are amazing because, as Alfresco says, you dive into how the characters actions affect them. It's not just "A happened, then B happened." There's a rich interior story going on that provides so much more texture to the events.

[Alfresco 11,630]

14 hours ago, rann said:

Am I boring people with this extra stuff?" I personally like to know the little details and implications, but I've wondered if I should just have them pee and be done with it, since that's obviously the whole reason we are here!

In my view, none of the background is boring and the details of both background and the act itself are what makes the story hot.   Otherwise the story would be condensed to something like "Nina and Katie peed under a table in a cafe, then went shopping where the fitting room got flooded by Katie.  Mike couldn't pee in public so used the toilets.  Nina gate-crashed and peed on the floor.  On the way home they both peed in the elevator on the way back to the room without caring what damage was done."    OK, I know I've taken that to the extreme, but it is pretty obvious that your writing with all the details is much more enjoyable and engaging.    Also, in real life, people don't pee all the time - they have to recharge their bladders and they do things whilst their bladders are recharging.   I like the scene setting that goes along with all of that too.  So in short, keep it going exactly as you are. 

Edited June 29, 2021 by Alfresco
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[Bigjosh 9]

Excellent!

[Lutab 1,052]

I hope we get more of this one 🙂

[rann 686]

On 12/7/2021 at 3:05 PM, Lutab said:

I hope we get more of this one 🙂

Sorry, I am a slow writer, but rest assured that the vacation isn't over yet and the girls fully intend to misbehave just as badly in the next installment!

[Rudy 5]

Another fantastic story you're a good writer.