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I'm a little uncomfortable with the age of the narrator, and am sorry his family treats him so shabbily! That said, there is a lot to enjoy about your story and I am interested in reading part 2 when you publish it.

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You're right about the age. I increased it to sixteen (Age of consent in Canada.) because it doesn't change the story at all and makes things less uncomfortable. Part 2 is all ready to go I just got home so I'll put it up in a few minutes.

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