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I really like this story. But at the same time it's also a bit hard to read, not because of your English, but because of the punctuation. More paragraphs and some indentation after quotes would make this a lot better reading experience, please consider: https://litreactor.com/columns/talk-it-out-how-to-punctuate-dialogue-in-your-prose The most important thing I would say is that each dialogue should start a new paragraph. I really don't wan't to come across as a dick, in fact, I really like this story, and want to continue reading it, but it could use a few small changes.
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Sooooo, when will we get tread about htis pee party? Awesome chapter BTW.
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Hmmm... Looks like we are, actually.
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Contrary to my name, I am not new to this. I'm a guy from the midwest and despite being 27 I've been pretty consistent with my fetish for 8 or so years, and even a bit before that too. I love golden showers, but only if both participant are looking to be enjoying it. I especially love it when girls get their hair soaked with pee. I don't think I've seen anyone else mention having a thing for that around here? I come from a background in film and I am a stickler for video quality. You old people like that SD stuff and I just can't get into it as easily as 720p. :P I came here becaus
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Yes, let's all talk about how great our fetishes are, but shit on other peoples, because that's totally what this thread is about.
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Yeah, well, people suck. This is the world we live in, where we can't talk about sex and divulging fetishes is weird. I agree with you, obviously, but I think it's best you stop caring so much about what others think. In fact I think that's good advice for life.
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This was great, you got any more like this?
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Who's coming in now!? Is it Lucille? This is such a weird fanfic, but I like it.
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Bunch of plebs!
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Yeah! Fuck Mongolia!
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That's fucking great Wetwulf. Does Janice have a daughter too?
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You can have him.
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Guys, The Donald is one of us. I have no idea how to feel about this.
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This was great. Thank you.
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[FICTION] Be Good to your Waitress
new2this replied to miniskirtpisser's topic in Fictional Pee Stories
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Kiki is such a great influence on all these young women.
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Which is your favourite view of female peeing?
new2this replied to F.W's topic in Pee Talk & Questions
Doesn't matter as long as it's on someone. -
Wow! Cool direction for the story!
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I don't mind as long as you keep adding to it.
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Boys or Girls,which 3 famous celebrities would you like to watch pee?
new2this replied to F.W's topic in Pee Talk & Questions
Jennifer Lawrence, Ariel Winters, Evan Rachel Wood. Those are basically just my celebrity crushes. But really I'd love to watch anyone I have a crush on pee. -
I read this entire thing over this week. Great story. Would love to read more.
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This was great! I love how much sex happened in this.
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Aw, is this dead? Would love some more.
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Thanks! Yeah pee is sterile coming out but its filled with all sorts of stuff bacteria love and I would imagine that's why it smells after a while. I think just after it comes out though, it's pretty inoffensive.