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For your first story posted here, I think you did a wonderful job, a few places that can be improved, but I’m not that good at writing my self. One tip I can give ( just an opinion) is when it comes down to the peeing parts, ( and sexual parts) you could add a bit more detail to it. Depending on how much detail could make your story extreamly sexually hot, to entertaining for the readers.  The thought of a school that allows its students and staff to wee wherever they want freely is very enlightening to me.  I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what happens! And I hope to see you grow and adapt your own unique writing style! 

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Mmm I want to go back to school! Or apply to teach there...I'd be sleeping in the dorm too. I sure hope Samantha gets a taste soon. Too bad they can't leave their panties on though...

great story. Thanks for taking the time to share your fantasy. 

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