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Liberation (04): More secretive peeing in the park


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Okay, I have no idea how this happened. The app I wrote the text in does not even have this font.

I did it exactly the  same way with my other stories that look fine.

As soon as I am able to use a PC I will try to fix it. On the phone I do not see how 😞

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Ok i somehow missed this and part 5 but whatever. Time to catch up:

On 8/15/2021 at 3:08 PM, Naughts said:

they quickly decided that there would be no wager except honour and kudos

Love it. Some of the best evenings started with dares for honour and kudos. 😄 
I also think you delivered on a another fantasy of many here, with your peefans love story xD. But somehow i feel its more believable to find a date on a website like peefans than in the gym. At least where i live, its very frowned upon to use the gym to chat up people ^^.  

And shifting the narrator towards pauls perspective was really clever because that way you were able to keep it about peeing in secret even tho most of them already opened up about peeing. 

Really enjoyed that part :D.

P.s. Today i learned that Radler translates to shandy. Never heard that word before. I was like "what type of fancy drink is a shandy and why would you bring something so fancy to a picnic ?" xD

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