Liberation (02): Heidi is caught wetting

[Naughts 331]

Part 01: https://peefans.com/topic/19607-liberation-01-heidis-first-wetting/

I am very new to writing, so feedback is very much welcome!

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It has been three days since Heidi first started to wet her pants at work.
The next day she was back to the same property and had been wet the whole day, peeing in spurts every few minutes.
The day after that she was send out with Paul, a male colleague, to a garden they had worked at for a few years now. At first she wanted to not wet her pants, scared of being caught. But after a couple of hours when she was kneeling on the ground weeding, Heidi was so used to just peeing from the days before, she let out quite a big squirt and only realised she did it afterwards. After that first wetting she just didn´t care anymore and continued just like the day before. Heidi did not really try to hide it from her coworker, confident her pants would not show anything. Little did she know that Paul immediately recognised the slight scent her diluted dried pee left on her pants. After the first time smelling it he was constantly watching for signs of wetness and caught her once. He did not say anything, being too shy and scared for her reaction. But after all, Paul´s is a story for another time.

Today was Saturday and Heidi was getting ready to meet her friends in the park to have a picnic.
It was a very hot day again today, so she wore a black tanktop without a bra, her perky breasts not really needing one anyway. Heidi normally was not the kind of girl who thought about her outfit for a long time, but today she was not really sure about what to wear below. She knew she would drink some beer and with her new discovered freedom of wetting Heidi wanted to be prepared. Wearing her work pants would be weird, she thought. A skirt would make peeing in the grass easy, but  Heidi was not the kind of girl who regularly wore skirts or dresses. Everytime she had to wear one at a wedding she was uncomfortable and did not feel like herself, so she did not even own a dress or skirt that wasn´t super formal.
Standing in front of her wardrobe, nearly about to give up, she spotted her old harems pants. They where of a light flowy material that would not get too hot and had a wild swirly pattern in dark earthern tones that would hopefully not show wetness. Heidi quickly put the pants and a pair of flip flops on and was nearly jumping for joy for her find. She quickly grabbed her backpack with the drinks and snacks she had packed earlier and clipped the dogleash to her dog Blacky, a light blonde mongrel, who was already waiting at the door impatiently.

Because of Heidi´s wardrobe crisis they were a tad late but Heidi did not have the patience to ride the train in the heat with a dog, so they walked the two kilometers through the city to the Tempelhofer Feld, a huge park the group of friends had decided to meet at.
Soon Heidi was sweating from walking the dog who was more than exited to be outside and ran criss-cross all over the sidewalk, only stopping briefly to mark a lamppost or the corner of a house along the way. Heidi smiled briefly at the normality of the dog´s peeing and at how she had adapted the style to herself. She felt free and loose, her mood getting better and better as they walked.
When they were about halfway there and Blacky stopped ones more to mark a bollard, Heidi decided to be naughty. The next time the dog lifted his leg, Heidi parted her legs to about shoulder width and let her pee flow for a few seconds. When she walked on she could feel drops of hot pee quickly cooling on her legs all the way down to her ankles.
Heidi repeated her naughty fun five more times before they reached the park. By then she felt really happy and free so that she started a spontaneous race against her dog towards her friends who where busy spreading the brought snacks and drinks on the picnic blankets.

They were laughing and hugging, as they all valued their get-together a lot more after not meeting for nearly a year during the pandemic. The Group had already been friends during high school but in the six years since then they grew even tighter.
The group consisted of Anna, who had come from spain with her family in seventh grade without knowing a single German word. Their teacher had actually assigned Heidi to show Anna around the school but soon they became best friends. Anna was a beauty. She had long wavy dark hair and wore a short and quite sexy red summer dress that showed off her fit body. She danced latin partner dance competitively so she knew how to draw attention to herself and was quite used to being in the spotlight.
Next was Chris, who was non-binary and had been in a relationship with Anna for eight years. They had clicked immediately when Anna joined the class and Chris had still been in the closet about not being a girl. Nowadays you cold rarely spot one without the other, which Heidi found straining sometimes but she did really like Chris, too. Chris was not a big talker (unless they talked to Anna), but they were the best listener Heidi knew. Chris had short dark blonde hair that they kept in a rather wild hairstyle. On the skinny body they wore kneelenth dark blue swimshorts and a wide gray t-shirt with black vans sneakers.
Max wore a wide womens straw sunhat on his bald head that he must have stolen from one of the girls. He wore cutoff jeans with a lot of holes and tears in them and a band t-shirt and no shoes. Max played in a punk band that had very leftist lyrics.
Frieda was Max´ girlfriend. She had very long dreadlocks that where currently draped around her head. Frieda was naturally beautiful, she rarely wore make-up and did not shave her legs and armpits. She was wearing a flowy colorful batik dress, that was quite revealing.
The last member of the group was Lili, she was not there yet but wanted to join them later in the afternoon and bring her new boyfriend to introduce to the group.

After the big hello they all settled down and began to catch up on news and gossip while sipping on beer or soda. Max started to fire up the portable grill
After some time Heidi had drank a beer and some cola and started to feel the need to pee. She didn´t want to become desperate but rather start peeing now in smaller quantities. This was the real test. Could she really pull this off? Could she really just pee into the grass without her friends noticing? Trying to be inconspicuous, she stretched herself and shifted her butt a bit so that she sat cross legged right next to the picnic-blanket. She peered around her friends, but nobody was looking at her. They talked about Anna being the only one who was not affected by the heat.
Heidi felt safe enough to let a spurt of hot pee flow out of her. The warmth spread from her vagina to her bottom and then into the grass. Heidi felt great. She loved the naughtiness of it and started to feel a little turned on. After the first two longer spurts she settled on a little but steady stream to avoid a hissing noise. When she was close to finishing Heidi looked up and noticed that, while everyone else was still complaining about the heat and not noticing her, Chris was directly looking at her crotch, grinning widely.
Heidi stopped her piss stream immediately and internally started to panic a little bit. Chris noticed Heidi looking at them and quickly lowered their eyes. Their cheeks became dark red as if they had done something wrong, instead of Heidi.
Heidi started to sweat. Why had she done that? What if Chris told the others and they did not want to be her friends anymore? While she was upbraiding herself she watched Chris closely. She waited for some form of disgusted telling but instead Chris lifted their head, looked right in Heidis eyes and WINKED! Heidi gaped. Winking was such an unlike Chris thing to do! And what did it even mean?
But after a few minutes Heidi was able to relax a little bit and after changing her position so that she was sitting on her feet on the blanket, she started to engage in the conversation again. They ate the grilled goods and talked about anything and everything.
After some time Anna fished up a frisbee out of her bag and Frieda and Max got up to throw it around with her.
That left only Heidi and Chris. By now, Heidi was fairly sure that Chris would not yell at her or something. But what exactly she could expect, she did not know.
Chris got up and sat down next to Heidi, facing the frisbee players. They were smiling and pointing at Anna.
„Watch her.“, they whispered.
In fact, as Heidi observed, Anna stood with her feet apart on the grass. For most people it would look like she was just ready to jump and run for the frisbee, but Heidi noticed the little stream that fell down between her legs into the grass. After a few seconds Anna stopped and started to run for the frisbee.
With eyes round by wonder Heidi turned to Chris.
But Chris only shrugged and smiled: „I love when she does that!“
Heidis eyes got even bigger. „You like it?“ she asked, incredulously but but hopeful.
„Yeah, I think it´s sexy.“
„Wow“, and then: „Me, too“
True, the wetness Heidi felt in her crotch was not only piss. She finally realised that Chris would not hate her. She breathed out heavily and relaxed. Heidi had not yet let herself think about how arousing it felt to pee her pants, she had limited her thoughts to how nice it felt and how convenient it was. But yes, she had to admit that wetting herself felt good in that sense, too, and seeing Anna peeing casually like that was indeed very sexy.
„Do you want to talk about it, or should I just forget I saw you?“, Chris asked suddenly, direct as ever.
Heidi did not really think about it, words just poured out of her. She told Chris how desperate she had been and how wonderful it felt to just let it rip and how she had just peed her pants whenever she was outside. How it was not only convenient but also so very freeing and naughty.
Chris smiled at her and did not once interrupt her talking surge.

to be continued

[MaxWasTaken 522]

Nice continuation of part one. Chris seems like a cool person and i wonder what Heidi will do now that she is no longer alone with her new "hobby". 
You asked for feedback: I found the introduction of the friend group a bit to long especially because they were of little importance to the story yet. I feel like i will have forgotten most of their description when they finally become important. I would either don't describe the less important characters in detail or i would describe them on the fly. For example: "Max tipped his straw sunhat to the girls as he left them to fire up the grill." It was just a bit much exposition at once. 

Im still a bit confused about Heidi. She is embarrassed wearing a dress/skirt but she wears no panties under her work shorts. Im really interested to learn more about her character. Oh and this story gives me real connewitz vibes (a city district of my home town Leipzig). 

[Naughts 331]

Hey @MaxWasTaken!

Thank you for the feedback! 🙂

you are probably right about the introduction of the characters. They will be more important in the future, i first thought they would have bigger roles in the second chapter and then they did´t and i did not shorten the description. I will definitly keep that in mind for the future, though.

I think Heidi is not embarassed about wearing dresses, she is simply not the most feminine woman. And the not wearing panties ... I don´t know 😄 when it is warm I mostly do not bother wearing them. It is not necessary a naughty/sexy thing but more about feeling less restricted and free.

I live in Germany but have never been to Leipzig so it is a funny coincidence 😄

[MaxWasTaken 522]

Just now, Naughts said:

Hey @MaxWasTaken!

Thank you for the feedback! 🙂

you are probably right about the introduction of the characters. They will be more important in the future, i first thought they would have bigger roles in the second chapter and then they did´t and i did not shorten the description. I will definitly keep that in mind for the future, though.

I think Heidi is not embarassed about wearing dresses, she is simply not the most feminine woman. And the not wearing panties ... I don´t know 😄 when it is warm I mostly do not bother wearing them. It is not necessary a naughty/sexy thing but more about feeling less restricted and free.

I live in Germany but have never been to Leipzig so it is a funny coincidence 😄

So the author is showing through nice to know :P. 

The only thing that could have made the story more "connewitz"-like is if Heidi would run bare foot and they all would have to drink sternburg (for those who don't know its a cheap beer) during the whole encounter. 

I eagerly await part 3 😛

[Naughts 331]

6 minutes ago, MaxWasTaken said:

So the author is showing through nice to know :P. 

The only thing that could have made the story more "connewitz"-like is if Heidi would run bare foot and they all would have to drink sternburg (for those who don't know its a cheap beer) during the whole encounter. 

I eagerly await part 3 😛

Yes, I think Heidi is a lot like me. She is not the same person but I think for my first story ever it might be easier to write from a point of view that is not completely foreign to me.

well... Max is barefoot and they all are a bit alternative I think. I will see. I do not really have the whole story mapped out and would like to see where it carries me as I write. We shall see if that is not a really bad idea 😄

I am on it, it will be a few days tough. I do not really have the privacy to write this right now

[MaxWasTaken 522]

Take your time :D. Im sure it will turn out great.