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Liberation (03): The friends piss in the park


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  • 2 weeks later...

This was definitely the best part yet. You basically fixed everything i criticized before and i don't find anything new xD. Great work. 

Oh and Anna is definitely the best character right now. (I just like her, nothing wrong with the rest) And i love the fact that this whole story sounds so believable that it could happen in a park next to me. 

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