Popular Post hyde07 200 Posted May 20, 2019 Popular Post Share Posted May 20, 2019 *****quick note, i could make this into a series if it goes down well, this is my first time in a long time writing fiction so if its not the best then i apologise in advance.....also, didnt realise it was going to be this long lol****** Hi guys! My names Molly. Im 18 and im in my first year of university. I live with my 2 room mates, Poppy, whos also 18 and Sarah whos just turned 19. We have a 3 bedroom, 1 bathroom, 1 en-suite, end of terrace house (i got the en suite hehe) in a little town near our uni. We have a fair sized garden and and huge hedge between ours and the neighbours, so loads of privacy from them, and to the other side is open feilds. We really did get lucky getting this place. We can barely afford it but we make it work. We have only lived together 4 months now, but in that time we have become best friends and where we used to be all shy and keep ourselves to ourselves, we're now no longer shy about ANYTHING hehe. Infact, theres very little we havent done infront of/to each other anymore hehe. I guess it all started one night where we had been to a pretty lame party on campus (still got drunk because it was free beer) and decided to leave early and head back to ours. It was a school night after all haha. We had got in, got our own drinks out the fridge and put the tv on to settle in for a night of shit films and more drinking games. There was some american college film on (like american pie but worse) but the nudity and drinking was all there still. "I wish life was like this you know. Like these films" Poppy slurred (bless her, she was a lightweight) "everyone looks like theyre having so much more fun. Everyones naked all the time, everyones playing pranks on each other, everyone looks like theyre having the best times of their lives, and what are we doing.....sat on the sofa, watching people have fun" "Hey we're having fun! Sorta....ok it could be more fun but it could be worse, we could still be at that party" i said. "Hey to be fair, i wish i was naked right now, this bra's underwire is stabbing me badly haha" Sarah said. "Fuck it, get it off then. Look i know we have only lived together for a couple weeks now, but we're bowned to see eachother naked sooner or later, lets just get it over with!" Poppy said as she tried to get up off the sofa, "im going for a piss, those puppies had better be out when i get back!" She staggered out the room, leaving an awkward feeling in the air.. "I think shes had to much to drink haha, we barely know each other and she wants us to get naked together haha I've never seen this side of her before" i said jokingly. "She has a point though. We are going to see eachother naked sooner or later. And right now, im at that perfect level of drunk to not give a fuck" said Sarah "You cant be serious!" I said... There was more to my sentence, but it was interupted by Poppy who had come wobbling back into the room....completely naked except for her thong... "Why arent your tits out yet! I thought we was all doing it!" She laughed "fuck it i dont care, that dress is a pain in the arse to get on and off and i couldnt be bothered to get it back on" She came and slumped back down on the sofa, between Sarah and I who couldnt stop laughing/staring at her. "Look, you two can either join me being naked, or regret not having more fun in college" Poppy contiuned "Its up to you two. But as long as im in this house, im going to be naked, im fed up of getting dressed after every shower before i leave the bathroom. Im fed up of having to get undressed after work to get re dressed again to sit out here, im fed-" "Yeah we get it babe" I interupted "I fully get it. Im in, fuck it" "Yeah me too, this bras going straight in the bin" said Sarah as she stood up, took her shirt and bra off and threw it across the room. "Wooooo thats my girl, and dayumn girl, you got some nice boobies, i wish mine were that big" shouted Poppy "come on Molly, its your turn now" "Yeah i saw that coming" i said, already getting my shirt and bra off as well..."well there you go, we've all got our tits out, are you happy now?" "Sort of. I still feel like we're wearing too much but its a start haha. We can build up to being fully naked, but we all have to commit to this! From now on, if its just us 3 in the flat, no clothes are allowed! Oh, and we start a prank war. No holds barred.....obviously some, like no sleeping with each others men, nothing that causes actual harm to eachother....but apart from that everything goes!" Now this was probably the alcohol talking, but i was starting to get into the idea of all this. I had to admit, growing up watching all these "american pie" style films, university had let me down so far. "Yeah fuck it, im in" i said, reaching my hand out into the middle of us. Poppy quickly placed her hand in mine "Well it doesnt seem like ive got much of a choice now does it haha" Sarah said as she grabed both our hands too. "Wooo go us!, right first order, more drinks, and you two get your skirts off!" Sarah and i obliged and soon all three of us were getting black out drunk in our panties, laughing and joking, planning pranks, comparing tits, you get the idea. It was 4am when we decided it was time for bed. I say we, but Poppy had passed out on the sofa half an hour before. "Right im going for a piss and then im going to bed" I slurred. "Yeah i'll come with you, im desperate" said Sarah "Fine, you can come in while i piss, as part of this new life shit. But I am going first ok" i said, walking over to the bathroom. I pulled my frenchies down and left them on the floor in the hallway. Fuck it, it seemed like i wouldnt be wearing them much more anyway, and headed into the bathroom. Just as i was sitting down, Sarah barged passed me, sitting down on the toilet and unleashing a waterfall into the toilet "Im sorry" Sarah hiccuped "i couldnt hold it anymore, i was going to end up pissing on the floor!" "Well im desperate too!" I pleaded back, "are you going to be much longer!?" I debated just pissing in the shower, but i thought that might be a step too far in our new "lives".....at least for now anyway, but as just as i had decided to do so, Sarah shook herself off, stood up off the toilet kissed me on the cheek, said "night babe!" and slapped me on the ass on the way past me. It all happened so quick it confused me. Here i was, comepletely naked, about to piss myself, and all i could think was "i cant belive she just kissed me and slapped my ass!" Yesterday we were all shy and awkward around eachother, and now this is going to be normal!? The wonders of alcohol ey? I shook myself out of it, accpeting this is what we all wanted, and sat on the toilet. I had JUST started peeing when i heard running footsteps coming down the hallway, when Poppy fell into the room, holding her mouth as if she was going to puke, panicing and jesturing me to move, but i had just got up to full flow and was not about to stop any time soon. She caughed and clamped her mouth shut, lunging towards the toilet, that i still ocupied. I instictively opened my legs as wide as i could, as Poppy dived head first, shoving her face into my crotch. I couldnt help it. I was still pissing. Poor Poppy, clearly vomiting between my legs into the toilet, while i was pissing on her....head? Face? Fuck knows but inbtween her rounds of puking she was screaming "stop pissing on me" I finished peeing, stood up and stepped over her while she still had her head in the toilet. "Im so sorry hun!, i couldnt stop!, are you ok? Do you want a drink??" I said to her (i'll admit, i was trying really hard not to laugh) "No i dont want any drink off you, ive just had one thanks" she chuckled with her head in the toilet still. (ah i was pissing in her face then) "Here i'll put the shower on for you and get out the way" i said, turning the shower on. "Stay with me! You can help wash my face off since its your fault it needs one haha" She had a point. I think the least i could do is clean her up "And besides" she added. "You could do with cleaning up too!" She pointed and my crotch. I looked down. She was right. There was puke all between my legs. Not alot, but enough to warrent showering rather than wiping it off. "You was me, i'll wash you hehe" she jumped into the shower "Erm ok......" i got in behind her. The shower was small but just big enough for two people, as long as you was practically touching. Its a good thing we was washing each other, as there was no way we would have room to wash ourselves. I soaped up my hands and started to wash her hair and her face, while she soaped up her hand...i was nervous. On one hand i didnt really want her to touch my fanny. I didnt really care, its not like she was going to finger me, but it still felt weird. On the other hand, i wanted to see if she had the bottle to follow through with her propersistion. All of this was her idea after all! "Right, spread your legs for me then, lets get you clean" Poppy said giggling I did as i was told, laughing and a little taken back. She didnt hesistate, her hand was straight in there giving me a good scrub. It almost felt....good. she asked me to spin around so she could clean my ass crack. Again, i did as i was told, the weirdness had gone now, this was just funny. "I hope you wiped your ass last time you shit haha" Poppy said as she stuck her hand into my ass crack "Its a bit late if i didnt now aint it haha" i laughed. "Whoa careful, thats my asshole" "Oops hehe" Poppy said cheekily "Right, youre all done. You just need to wash your hair now. Im going to bed, i'll see you in the morning" "Are you not going to wash mine for me!? I just did yours!" I said "Only because you pissed in it! And by the way im going to get you back for that, you watch!" Poppy said naughtily, winking at me. "Oh and one last thing" she turned round, spread her ass open, pressed her asshole into my leg and let rip the dirtiest fart ive ever smelt. "Beer makes my stomach horrific, you're lucky i didnt follow through haha. Have fun trapped in here with that" she quickly got out and shut the door behind her. "Oh god! I cant belive you!" I said gagging "and what do you mean you'll get me back, it was an accident!" "Oh i know it was an accident, but the prank wars are on now, and since you pissed on me, dont be shocked if i do something back!" She laughed, walking out the room. Butt naked. Dripping wet and still wasted. "What the fuck has happened tonight" i thought to myself as i washed my hair "what the hell have i got myself into and what the fuck is she going to do back to me for pissing on her!" 4 1 5 Link to post
spywareonya 37,962 Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 @hyde07 I loved the characters The writing style is peculiar, almost only dialogues Somebody could love it, Others will be found puzzled I personally appreciated it a lot, not exactly my standard (I use less dialogues) but great anyway!!! 1 Link to post
hyde07 200 Posted May 20, 2019 Author Share Posted May 20, 2019 13 minutes ago, spywareonya said: @hyde07 I loved the characters The writing style is peculiar, almost only dialogues Somebody could love it, Others will be found puzzled I personally appreciated it a lot, not exactly my standard (I use less dialogues) but great anyway!!! Thank you, i have always struggled writing stories. I'll try to use less dialogues next time, if i end up continuing it Link to post
gldenwetgoose 21,498 Posted May 21, 2019 Share Posted May 21, 2019 I thought it was great, and the dialogue wasn't too hard to follow - brings the characters to life. 1 Link to post
Lutab 1,054 Posted May 23, 2019 Share Posted May 23, 2019 Looking forward to more. Maybe they can pee on the floor soon. 🙂 Link to post
whiskey35 306 Posted May 25, 2019 Share Posted May 25, 2019 I'm with gldenwetgoose, thought it was great, keep it going. Link to post
Pissdrinker 874 Posted May 25, 2019 Share Posted May 25, 2019 +1 more please. I like Poppy the best 😀 I hope her character develops along the lines I am thinking Strangely, I actually know two sisters called Holly and Poppy Link to post
pee01 1,522 Posted May 25, 2019 Share Posted May 25, 2019 Nice story here. I cant wait to hear more stories from you. Link to post
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now