Amy's Dirty Piss Revenge

[Brutus 2,206]

Amy's Dirty Piss Revenge

Amy is a nurse in New York City. She is a very attractive 5'9'' 24 year old, brunette with an curvy athletic body. Looking to make extra money, she volunteers to be a part-time caretaker for Clyde, an 87 year old blind man paralyzed from the neck down. His wife died 6 years ago and his sons rarely visit because he has become so difficult to care for that they are seeking a caretaker for 6 months so they can focus on their business.

Amy figures it will be an easy job. Once she learns of Clyde's conditions, she is already thinking of slacking off, knowing he can't do anything about it anyway. The arrangements are made and she meets his 2 sons for an interview. She wears a low cut top bearing plenty of cleavage and plays little innocent cute girl and it works like a charm. 2 days later she arrives for work and is brought up to speed on Clyde's medications and requirements. On the first night she experiences the challenge of caring for Clyde and is instantly overwhelmed by having to do everything for him. Already stressed, after only 2 hours she is considering giving up and leaving. As her first day goes on, Clyde, consumed by anger due to his circumstances, calls her a cunt for spilling his coffee.

Infuriated at what she has gotten herself into and being insulted by an old blind cripple, she decides to stay and get revenge, although she isn't sure how she will do that yet. That night she sits in her apartment and begins thinking of how to punish him. She remembers seeing his 1969 Dodge Charger in his garage, fully restored, his pride and joy even in sickness. That car is the only thing he has left. The next day, she finds the key and goes to the garage and looks at the car. She admires the beautiful shiny blue paint and the chrome grills. She becomes excited from her devious intentions. Then she makes up her mind, this car is going to be violated. This classic car will soon be tainted by her piss. She unlocks it, climbs inside, takes her pants off, squats over the gearshift and aims her pussy at the dash board. Filled with a thrilling feeling of excitement, she catches her breath and then releases a thick stream of pee. It floods the entire dash, radio, gauges and steering wheel as she sways her body side to side to cover as much area as possible. When it finally finishes she heads back inside, leaving the car flooded and stinking of piss.

She heads back inside, smiling and proud of what she has done. Realizing how much she enjoyed her behavior, she makes it a daily routine to piss in the car upon her arrival. Weeks go by and the car had become so soaked that the custom upholstery was permanently stained yellow. The smell inside the car was now unbearable with her old rotting piss. She had also began peeing on the outside of the car and over time the paint job faded where her stream always hit it. She succeeded in her mission to destroy Clyde's classic car. Things would eventually become even more interesting for Amy when she discovered some dark secrets about the old man. One day she was looking in his drawer for clothes and noticed a letter from Clyde's late wife, Melinda. In the letter she detailed Clyde's physical abuse early in their marriage and her discovery of his 5 year affair with a much younger woman many years ago. She spoke of the stress and heartbreak speeding the spread of her cancer and how she gave up the will to fight it. Once again infuriated, Amy decided that Clyde's punishment needed a heavier hand because of his affair and abuse. The car was no longer good enough and she extends her urinary generosity to Clyde personally. She begins a morning routine of peeing in his Cheerios. She would pee in his bowl while pouring his milk to mask the sound of her pee and feed it to him. For lunch, she decided she would take her panties off and dip them in his protein shake before serving it to him. And for dinner shew would piss in the pots she cooked his food in. Then she would take the fork that she was going to feed him with and stick it in her ass. She rubbed it back and forth, up and down against her crack, making sure to get it as dirty as possible, before feeding him his piss seasoned dinner and enjoying every minute of it. He sometimes asked what that smell was on the fork. She just said that it was her special sauce, a family recipe.

Amy enjoyed knowing that no one knew what she was really up to. She looked forward to visiting Clyde every day to prepare his very special meals personally. After 6 months her job was complete and it was time to leave. Before leaving however she wanted to go out with a grand finale. She had been thinking about the ultimate dirty piss deed she could do. She took a long walk around the house with a full bladder looking for somewhere to mark her territory. After failing to find something that would interest her she finally thought of the perfect thing. She walked into Clyde's room and there it was. A large black urn containing the ashes of his father, George. It was like seeing the Charger for the first time all over again. Amy knew what she was going to do now. She picks it up and says:

Amy: Hey there, I don't think we have been properly introduced, George.

After placing the urn on the floor, she pulls her nurse scrubs down to her ankles and is instantly aroused by the sight of her pussy aiming directly at it. She begins rubbing herself gently, getting aroused and wet. Blood rushing to her pelvic area, she starts rubbing faster as the tension continues to build. She moans in a seductive voice, as her juices start dripping down her leg into the urn.

Amy: Oh , George you make me feel so good. Mmm you're gonna make me come any second. Oh my pussy loves you so much right now.

She lifts her shirt up and takes her breasts out. She squeezes and pinches each nipple firmly making them swell with arousal. After another minute, Amy feels herself approaching the moment of no return. The orgasm is almost ready. She quickly kicks her shorts off of her ankles to take wider stance over the urn. It intensifies. Her thighs begin shaking, her feet begin to curl up, her nipples poking straight out, fully erect. The warm tingly feelings become stronger. Her breathing quickens to rapid shallow breaths, then she closes her eyes and squeezes her ass tightly. Her clitoris begging for vigorous pressure, she rubs and caresses it rapidly and a powerful orgasm takes her hostage and explodes through her entire body. Fiercely pleasurable waves of muscle spams radiate in her body from head to toe multiple times. The spasms peak and then slowly weaken. She slows her clitoral stimulation to a gentle touch for a while and then stops. Now post orgasmic, Amy stands there and catches her breath, enjoying the euphoric sensations leaving her body.

Now having gotten herself off, Amy is focused on pissing in the urn. She leans forward, spreads her labia and pushes. Weak from the orgasm, it begins flowing only lightly and lands on the floor next to the urn. Eager to create a high power stream, she uses a trick she learned as a teen. Amy reaches around and positions her index finger on her anus and pushes it in, creating pressure on her bladder from behind. A few seconds later, a monstrous violent gush of piss blasts out of her urethra, overshooting the urn and soaking the carpet. She moves her hips to aim her pee inside the urn and enjoys the rumbling sound of it striking the inside the urn and mixing with the ashes. Her piss eventually becomes too strong to control and she pisses on the floor for the next 30 seconds, further soaking the wood floors and the carpets. The stream finally stops and Amy has never felt such relief and satisfaction together in her life. She puts her shorts back on and heads downstairs with the urn. She brings it downstairs and places it on the kitchen table in front of Clyde.

Clyde: What is that? And why do I smell pee, what's going on, Amy?

Amy: That's your dead father. And you smell pee because I just took the world's biggest fucking piss on his ashes. I've also spent my entire time here pissing in your car every morning. I piss in your cereal every day. I piss in your dinner every night. I soak my thongs in your drinks. That special sauce is me wiping my ass on your forks. And guess what, there's nothing you're going to do about it. I made you my bitch and got paid to do it. And no one will ever believe I did this, either.

Clyde: (now in tears) Amy........why........would you do this to me? To........anyone? I......

I don't understa.......why.......WHY?!! GO TO HELL, BITCH!!!

Amy: Found Melinda's letter. You're a cheater and an abuser and you called me a cunt. This is long overdue the way I see it.

Clyde says nothing as he hears Amy head out the door, start her car and drive off, never to hear from her again, left in his isolation.

Edited August 23, 2016 by Guest

[Adyguy6970 877]

I hope Amy gets her comeuppance one day. She deserves a little poetic justice. Perhaps matron will one day deny her permission for a bathroom break when she really needs one?

[Brutus 2,206]

I hope Amy gets her comeuppance one day. She deserves a little poetic justice. Perhaps matron will one day deny her permission for a bathroom break when she really needs one?

You know what, you just gave me an idea right there. Like maybe Clyde's niece or granddaughter finds out what happened and ends up caring for Amy and exacting revenge. Oh yeah...definitely doing that in the near future, thanks to you, sir.

[Adyguy6970 877]

That's certainly an idea. However I am attracted to the idea of Amy being denied permission to use the toilet by a lesbian matron who gets off on desperation and loves punishing nurses who find they can't hold it.

[GottaGoPee 124]

That was a hot story and I enjoyed it! :)

That's a good idea Adyguy6970.

I'm also attracted to the idea of Amy being denied permission to use the toilet. :)

I also like your idea Brutus. :)

[Brutus 2,206]

That was a hot story and I enjoyed it! :)

That's a good idea Adyguy6970.

I'm also attracted to the idea of Amy being denied permission to use the toilet. :)

I also like your idea Brutus. :)

You know, I'm not usually into seeing women pee themselves from desperation. The whole pee dance thing and the soaking of the pants just doesn't do it for me, I like to see the pee flowing from her body. But I do like the idea of Amy being denied and peeing herself in a revenge scenario because she deserves it. I'm working on the next Goddesses story right now but Amy's payback story will happen afterward. I didn't intend to make Amy's story a recurring one, I just wanted to break away from my fictional worlds for a moment. Now I am juggling 3 story lines lol.

Edited August 25, 2016 by Guest

[GottaGoPee 124]

Yes she does deserve it.

I can't wait to read your Amy's payback story! :)

[Fire2ninja 68]

Revenge pissing, territorial markings, heck, even some wettings are major turn one for me. Your story has some major potential to be great. A 5 out of 5 stars. But I sadly would give it a 3. Here is why.

The story felt a bit rushed, especially when it came down to some of the peeing parts. A few more scentences here n there would have helped fix that. The peeing scenes needed to be a bit more detailed in my opinion. It needs a bit more to make it a 5 star reading to me.

When it came down to the orgasom scene over the ashes, that was one of the hottest parts, but once again, the peeing felt rushed to wrap up the story.

I could keep giving feedback about it, but I feel I have sadly aggitated some fans of yours with this critique of your work.

Don't get me wrong. I liked the story, and can't wait to see what elts you have composed, and soon to create. I'm also sure that the Amy's payback will be a masterpiece if it has stuff that this story had in it too. :)

Edited August 26, 2016 by Guest

[Brutus 2,206]

Fire2ninja I always welcome feedback so I know how in tune I am with readers. I doubt you will anger anyone. I think we are rather cool here given this fetish. I agree 100 percent with you that the pee parts were a little thin. The thing is I try to avoid making these too long and lose someones interest. I already removed an entire paragraph before posting. This is why I had the car peeing and the food peeing as well as the urn scene to get enough pee material overall. I dont want to sacrifice buildup story either so its basically a balancing act that I am still learning. Thanks for the evaluation.

[holyknight3 159]

Do people on the forums perfer shorter stories with a smaller focus on just one scene or a larger and more detailed and varied stories? I write for me first and foremost, so I like a believable chain of events. That also makes me feel very long -winded. I think you established a decent balance with this story. Less is more in some cases, and your mind will fill in most details with what ever excites you most as long as the action flows swiftly. That is where text has the advantage over a visual medium.

TLDR, Write what excites you and trim what doesn't.

[Brutus 2,206]

Do people on the forums perfer shorter stories with a smaller focus on just one scene or a larger and more detailed and varied stories? I write for me first and foremost, so I like a believable chain of events. That also makes me feel very long -winded. I think you established a decent balance with this story. Less is more in some cases, and your mind will fill in most details with what ever excites you most as long as the action flows swiftly. That is where text has the advantage over a visual medium.

TLDR, Write what excites you and trim what doesn't.

I am sure there are people who prefer short stories and then there are those who prefer long stories. Those that like long ones will naturally drift toward writers like me, assuming they like the material to begin with. I write for me but also try to stay mindful that others are not in my head and their minds may not go where I intend if I don't fill in most of the details. I also try to avoid stretching it out too much. I am still finding my balance but I think it gets a little better with each story. The one I'm working on now is by far the longest I've written and I'm seeing if anything could be removed but there's a lot happening so I just have to trust my instincts.

Oh and what does TLDR mean?

[Alfresco 11,633]

@Brutus TLDR = Too Long, Didn't Read.

In my opinion, both types of writing have their place. Short, sharp stories state facts and give the reader basic information. Longer stories allow the reader to immerse themselves in the story, picking up on detail and can imagine being there and watching the events unfold. I like both, but I do appreciate a bit of detail.

[Brutus 2,206]

@Brutus TLDR = Too Long, Didn't Read.

In my opinion, both types of writing have their place. Short, sharp stories state facts and give the reader basic information. Longer stories allow the reader to immerse themselves in the story, picking up on detail and can imagine being there and watching the events unfold. I like both, but I do appreciate a bit of detail.

Yes I enjoy others' short stories as well. When I try to write a short story, ideas rush into my head and I have to keep going. Total immersion is what I aim for in mine. I like creating a detailed scenario that slowly builds to an awesome pee scene. If I do it right and the readers are into the characters and context then the pee scenes mean so much more. That's IF I can get people invested in the story, which doesn't always happen but it remains my goal. But at this point most people know what to expect from me.