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Lets play a game: Part 1


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An excellent first installment.

I actually like the fact that they didn't go straight for any full on pissing on the carpet or furniture or anything like that, but started out with something more believably acceptable yet still erotically naughty, with the prospect of them getting gradually naughtier in successive installments.

Please do continue writing.

And this site does appear to be attracting some excellent new naughty peeing erotic story writers lately, including yourself. Awesome :thumbsup:

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Thanks for all the good feedback! I've been working on more installments after I wrote this one.

And steve, I felt I might make it a little more realistic and have the characters eased into it. No reason to ramp it up to 11 right off the bat.

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