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On 11/19/2024 at 4:13 AM, CON2H4 said:

Just a quick writing tip. You are supposed to start a new paragraph for each new speaker.

Since when is there a rule of how to write a story here?

that story was so HOT. 

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On 11/24/2024 at 4:51 AM, Spotremix said:

Since when is there a rule of how to write a story here?

I literally said it was advice, not a rule. And yes, it would be more readable if you start a new paragraph for each time the speaker changes. That's why lots of authors do it.

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And I have ADHD, and didn't. Breaking up text makes it easier for everyone to read, and understand the flow of information. I'm going to give it a close reading, but there is a reason conventions exist. Will edit this post after reading.

EDIT: It was a great story, good introduction to the characters. Few little editing niggles,  but nothing major that hasn't been pointed out yet. Great job on your first story! It gets easier and easier as you write more, and it's always interesting to see how far you've come. Thank you for posting.

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