Seeking input for a story--vote for your choice here...

[Carb0nBased 549]

Inspired by the "drunk peeing" thread in the last few weeks and something that was said in chat over the weekend, I have decided to write a pee story featuring laughing gas/nitrous oxide. It seems like something that hasn't been done before.

It was mentioned in chat in connection with dentistry, so my first idea was two girlfriends going to the dentist together and one has to pee while in the chair. However, of course I'm aware that at least for most people (myself included), having to have dental work done is one of the least sexy things in the known universe. And having an accident with a dentist standing there watching is likely to be awful and awkward even if you have your friend there with you (though I suppose some readers might actually like the extra embarrassment factor).

So as an alternative, I also thought of a party where nitrous balloons are being passed around. I remember some college parties where that happened. And that's the kind of environment where people are letting loose anyway. Otherwise it would be the same thing, two friends sitting together inhaling from the balloons.

So what do people think? Which version would you prefer to read?

[Lutab 1,019]

The party with balloons 

[ABBYPEEGODDESS 1,547]

41 minutes ago, Lutab said:

The party with balloons 

I like the dentist one it would be very different from other stories

[F0rester 141]

I like the dentist idea. You can get the perspectives of the patient, the friend, the dentist, and the assistant. I'm guessing at least one of them gets turned on by it and there's part two.

[Carb0nBased 549]

2 hours ago, F0rester said:

I like the dentist idea. You can get the perspectives of the patient, the friend, the dentist, and the assistant. I'm guessing at least one of them gets turned on by it and there's part two.

Well, I like to write at least somewhat realistic stories. If a patient pees herself while somewhat out of it in a dentist's chair, with stuff in her mouth, it's not like the dentist's assistant is going to start making out with and fondling her in front of the other patients, or she's going to start rubbing herself on the edge of the chair and get off while the dentist is watching! That would maybe be the plot of a really bad porno, which is definitely not my taste. It's more like the professionals are going to be embarrassed and awkward and try to help her keep her modesty as much as possible, and maybe several people are secretly turned on inside and get off to it later...

If you want a story with some actual steamy fooling around then the party is a much better idea.

[Moore007 239]

I vote for the dentist, it’s possible to make the story subtile and subtile things tend to be very kinky. For example if you can’t really determine if someone is turned on but there is something about the persons behavior, expressions, look, breathing that make you a bit uncertain and a tiny bit uncomfortable and you can really feel the tension and arousal in the room but everything is taboo and beneath the surface it’s an emotional chaos…

[ABBYPEEGODDESS 1,547]

On 4/28/2024 at 10:12 PM, Carb0nBased said:

It was mentioned in chat in connection with dentistry, so my first idea was two girlfriends going to the dentist together and one has to pee while in the chair. However, of course I'm aware that at least for most people (myself included), having to have dental work done is one of the least sexy things in the known universe. And having an accident with a dentist standing there watching is likely to be awful and awkward even if you have your friend there with you (though I suppose some readers might actually like the extra embarrassment factor).

It would also be nice to have an alternative to this where the dentist helps the patient Pee by taking their pants off/unzipping the zipper and using a a bucket or trash can to pee in