Writers of Pee Fiction I have a question.

[Takashi96 1,063]

Do you write non-pee stories also? Are you fiction writers that use your literary skills to get pee perverts off out of the goodness of your own hearts? Or are you pee fetishists inspired to become writers for the benefit of our hungry genitals? 

And if the answer to the first question is yes, do you struggle to keep pee scenes from finding their way into your non pee stories? Asking for a friend.

Edited August 5, 2022 by Takashi96
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[Bacardi 10,080]

I am a fiction writer both on and off the site and I am working on a novel. So idk which of your categories I fall into.

I do have some pee scenes in my off site fiction but they do not always cater to the fetish.

[Good Man 29]

I prefer to write based on my real experience

[gldenwetgoose 21,376]

I have been known to have written quite a bit of fiction on this site, and it seems to have gone down well.

It's interesting and sometimes frustrating that people are far more willing to spend time on videos or pictures than spending a few minutes on reading a work of fiction - and I say that based on page views rather than reactions.  If people don't go and read it then it's never going to really give a sense of fulfilment back to the author.

Anyway, I digress.   I don't write any other kind of fiction.  In fact this is about the only place I express this surprising and hidden talent.

My approach is generally that I'll hear an anecdote or a snippet of an experience, then later when my mind is free (maybe on a plane journey or similar) I'll slowly work out a realistic scenario around that or maybe a couple of real arisings.  Eventually in my mind I have enough of a picture that I'll sit and throw down as a story usually in one rapid typing session.

My motivation is usually if I'm honest for the feedback I get from a small number of people who I know well enough to know they'll enjoy it.   Pee is central to the story, although it can lead on to masturbation, making love etc.

Hope that helps...  

And by way of example here's one I prepared earlier:   https://peefans.com/topic/15336-sibling-rivalry/?tab=comments#comment-217755

And a little list, although it's a bit out of date now:   https://peefans.com/topic/20989-gooses-stories/?tab=comments#comment-285816

 

 

[gldenwetgoose 21,376]

55 minutes ago, MonsterKane46 said:

I'm not sure about keeping the scene in there as I don't want it to come across as just piss porn. plus in the event I got it published and was offered money for the film rights I feel like it would be cut from the movie in order to maintain a M15 (as it's called in Nz) rating. 

Sounds like a good selling point for the book to be honest...   I mean most novels rocket in sales after the movie is released - none more though than the ones where it suddenly becomes apparent there's some extra hot content that never made it as far as the film.

Sort of like the value of a rare misprinted record sleeve compared to the mass-sold corrected version if you get my drift.

[MidoriLemonade85 2,334]

Hi Takashi san.🙋‍♀️ I think a lot of us just do it to get fantasies out of our heads and into writing so they can be made into some kind of reality in the dimension of our very vivid, and very dirty imaginations. 🔥We can play with ideas and see how they make us, and others feel. My imagination and inner world is fucking huge, and it has no boundaries…..I can do whatever the hell I want there with zero consequences. It is where I can feel completely free.✨ I have only written one story so far for PF (below). I have also written some customised stories for a couple of my PF friends, because then I can tailor it for them, and what they individually like. I am a little shy, and I know that once a story is up here, it is judged by all different people (of course everyone here is super friendly, supportive and lovely), but it is still that whole anxiety thing of making an offering from a very personal space….basically to the world. I am intense, and deep, and put everything into my stories…it is a piece of me, so it is kind of a vulnerable thing to do, do you know what I mean?  One day I hope to write some more for PF…for everyone, not just my favourite people. But my biggest problem is I work, and have kids, and have very little time to myself. 😭

For me, the issue is keeping things realistic in stories too. There is only so much peeing, fucking, cumming, sucking, messing you can include before it becomes a little silly and unbelievable. For me, I don’t want to write a porn story. I want to write about reality that becomes twisted and wet. For me, what excites me is real life and real people…..all proper, tidy, decent, following rules and well mannered, descending into naughtiness, forgetting conventions, and surrendering to hedonism, free love, bliss and satisfaction. Dare I say it…..freedom. 

I am not a writer in real life. Only in my own little Midori world. I was born with a pen in my hand and have written ever since I could. It helps me make sense of things, and helps me express myself. I love reading other people’s stories and connecting to their inner world. It is such a special thing. 

 

 

[Takashi96 1,063]

13 hours ago, Good Man said:

I prefer to write based on my real experience

That's great. However, this question is about fiction.

[Takashi96 1,063]

11 hours ago, gldenwetgoose said:

I have been known to have written quite a bit of fiction on this site, and it seems to have gone down well.

It's interesting and sometimes frustrating that people are far more willing to spend time on videos or pictures than spending a few minutes on reading a work of fiction - and I say that based on page views rather than reactions.  If people don't go and read it then it's never going to really give a sense of fulfilment back to the author.

Anyway, I digress.   I don't write any other kind of fiction.  In fact this is about the only place I express this surprising and hidden talent.

My approach is generally that I'll hear an anecdote or a snippet of an experience, then later when my mind is free (maybe on a plane journey or similar) I'll slowly work out a realistic scenario around that or maybe a couple of real arisings.  Eventually in my mind I have enough of a picture that I'll sit and throw down as a story usually in one rapid typing session.

My motivation is usually if I'm honest for the feedback I get from a small number of people who I know well enough to know they'll enjoy it.   Pee is central to the story, although it can lead on to masturbation, making love etc.

Hope that helps...  

And by way of example here's one I prepared earlier:   https://peefans.com/topic/15336-sibling-rivalry/?tab=comments#comment-217755

And a little list, although it's a bit out of date now:   https://peefans.com/topic/20989-gooses-stories/?tab=comments#comment-285816

 

 

Thank you. That's exactly what I was curious about.

[Takashi96 1,063]

11 hours ago, MonsterKane46 said:

I am working on a novel.... main characters are lesbians and there was originally a scene where they had sex then one of them pissed into the pool afterwards. It was originally written as she lost control of her bladder after she came in order to seem more of an accident than something catering to piss fetish readers but I did change it at one point to have her partner be accepting of it just because I've never had that acceptance in real life.

I'm not sure about keeping the scene in there as I don't want it to come across as just piss porn. plus in the event I got it published and was offered money for the film rights I feel like it would be cut from the movie in order to maintain a M15 (as it's called in Nz) rating. 

That said, though, the scene where they have sex in the build up to the discovery of the fourth body would probably also be toned down on account of the fact film makers and movie goers seem to have this attitude that it's OK to show a penis and even an erect penis is ok but if you show a woman's vulva it's like "OMG EXPLOITATION!"

Or maybe the scene would be filmed, but it would get what they call an NC-17 here in the states. Non pornographic indie films that feature porn level explicit scenes sometimes show actual pissing. Like the extended version of Nymphomaniac. 

[Takashi96 1,063]

4 hours ago, MidoriLemonade85 said:

Hi Takashi san.🙋‍♀️ I think a lot of us just do it to get fantasies out of our heads and into writing so they can be made into some kind of reality in the dimension of our very vivid, and very dirty imaginations. 🔥We can play with ideas and see how they make us, and others feel. My imagination and inner world is fucking huge, and it has no boundaries…..I can do whatever the hell I want there with zero consequences. It is where I can feel completely free.✨ I have only written one story so far for PF (below). I have also written some customised stories for a couple of my PF friends, because then I can tailor it for them, and what they individually like. I am a little shy, and I know that once a story is up here, it is judged by all different people (of course everyone here is super friendly, supportive and lovely), but it is still that whole anxiety thing of making an offering from a very personal space….basically to the world. I am intense, and deep, and put everything into my stories…it is a piece of me, so it is kind of a vulnerable thing to do, do you know what I mean?  One day I hope to write some more for PF…for everyone, not just my favourite people. But my biggest problem is I work, and have kids, and have very little time to myself. 😭

For me, the issue is keeping things realistic in stories too. There is only so much peeing, fucking, cumming, sucking, messing you can include before it becomes a little silly and unbelievable. For me, I don’t want to write a porn story. I want to write about reality that becomes twisted and wet. For me, what excites me is real life and real people…..all proper, tidy, decent, following rules and well mannered, descending into naughtiness, forgetting conventions, and surrendering to hedonism, free love, bliss and satisfaction. Dare I say it…..freedom. 

I am not a writer in real life. Only in my own little Midori world. I was born with a pen in my hand and have written ever since I could. It helps me make sense of things, and helps me express myself. I love reading other people’s stories and connecting to their inner world. It is such a special thing. 

 

 

I'm a little confused by your final paragraph. You're not a writer in real life? And yet you've been putting words on paper ever since you could hold a pen? Are you saying that you write as a means of self expression, but haven't pursued it in a professional capacity?

I appreciate the san, but I am not actually Japanese. I named myself after the rapper Takashi 69 because I overheard his name mentioned in a podcast (coming in from the next room) when I was signing up for this site. That being said, what is green lemonade?

[MidoriLemonade85 2,334]

Yes, I write for self expression. My parents always told me that writers make no money! 😭

if I could turn back time, I would pursue journalism rather than admin. 

perhaps when I am older I will write some e-books. 
 

writing makes me very happy. 
 

Midori is green liqueur I drink with lemonade. 

[Takashi96 1,063]

15 hours ago, Bacardi said:

I am a fiction writer both on and off the site and I am working on a novel. So idk which of your categories I fall into.

I do have some pee scenes in my off site fiction but they do not always cater to the fetish.

Okay, this is one of the reasons I asked the question. I read an article about creators with obvious fetishes. It mentioned Quentin Tarantino's reoccurring shots of feet. And the many pissing scenes in Stephen King stories. I'm curious about the pee scenes in your off site fiction (which I assume we'll never get to read and I'm okay with that). Do you think you are compelled to include pee scenes in your non fetish work because of our fetish? Even if there's nothing erotic about the scenes. Are they central to the plot? Could they be cut? Would you be okay with cutting them? Do you ever worry that they could give you away?

[Takashi96 1,063]

8 minutes ago, MidoriLemonade85 said:

Yes, I write for self expression. My parents always told me that writers make no money! 😭

if I could turn back time, I would pursue journalism rather than admin. 

perhaps when I am older I will write some e-books. 
 

writing makes me very happy. 
 

Midori is green liqueur I drink with lemonade. 

I feel a strong urge to travel time and lecture your parents about the fragility of young passionate spirits and the transient nature of money. But alas, I have yet to gain access to such a vehicle. 

I feel a tinge of heartbreak in your words, and I want you to write now, not later. A word after a word after a word equals power. Or something like that?

I'd not heard of that liqueur before. I only know midori as a color.

[Kupar 13,309]

5 hours ago, MidoriLemonade85 said:

For me, the issue is keeping things realistic in stories too. There is only so much peeing, fucking, cumming, sucking, messing you can include before it becomes a little silly and unbelievable.

Absolutely. Couldn't agree more 🙂

[Takashi96 1,063]

1 minute ago, Kupar said:

Absolutely. Couldn't agree more 🙂

To be honest, I rarely read the pee fiction. Once a story has more than one or two pee scenes my suspension of disbelief becomes compromised. But a pee scene in a non fetish story has been known to drive me wild. 

[Kupar 13,309]

I have written for most of my career, but not fiction (unless you count my forecasts for the growth of various technology markets, or the scenarios of joy that awaited you should you have bought one of my clients' products lol). 

The only fiction I have written is on this site. And many things have inspired my stories. Some have been a direct response to a request (professionally I have plenty of experience of writing to a brief); others prompted by real life experience and a 'what if' (similar to what @gldenwetgoose describes).

I'm happy to point you at the index of my PF stories if you like.

[Kupar 13,309]

12 minutes ago, Takashi96 said:

To be honest, I rarely read the pee fiction. Once a story has more than one or two pee scenes my suspension of disbelief becomes compromised. But a pee scene in a non fetish story has been known to drive me wild. 

My stories, like Goose's, are very restrained compared with some on the site. Each to his own of course.

Edited August 5, 2022 by Kupar

[Kupar 13,309]

7 minutes ago, Takashi96 said:

To be honest, I rarely read the pee fiction. Once a story has more than one or two pee scenes my suspension of disbelief becomes compromised. But a pee scene in a non fetish story has been known to drive me wild. 

There is on this site a very long list of peeing scenes in non pee literature. Have you found that?

[Takashi96 1,063]

Just now, Kupar said:

There is on this site a very long list of peeing scenes in non pee literature. Have you found that?

Yes, I have. Thank you for inquiring.

[MidoriLemonade85 2,334]

14 minutes ago, Takashi96 said:

I feel a strong urge to travel time and lecture your parents about the fragility of young passionate spirits and the transient nature of money. But alas, I have yet to gain access to such a vehicle. 

I feel a tinge of heartbreak in your words, and I want you to write now, not later. A word after a word after a word equals power. Or something like that?

I'd not heard of that liqueur before. I only know midori as a color.

Thanks Takashi, that means a lot to me. 
i will write. 
if I feel it is good enough, I will contribute it to PF.

you guys deserve the best of my words. 

[Takashi96 1,063]

9 minutes ago, Kupar said:

I have written for most of my career, but not fiction (unless you count my forecasts for the growth of various technology markets, or the scenarios of joy that awaited you should you have bought one of my clients' products lol). 

The only fiction I have written is on this site. And many things have inspired my stories. Some have been a direct response to a request (professionally I have plenty of experience of writing to a brief); others prompted by real life experience and a 'what if' (similar to what @gldenwetgoose describes).

I'm happy to point you at the index of my PF stories if you like.

That first paragraph was a wee bit painful.

Yes, please do include the index.

[Kupar 13,309]

11 minutes ago, Takashi96 said:

Yes, please do include the index.

There you go.

[Kupar 13,309]

11 minutes ago, Takashi96 said:

That first paragraph was a wee bit painful.

And sorry. It's how I am 😉 

[Takashi96 1,063]

4 minutes ago, Kupar said:

And sorry. It's how I am 😉 

It wasn't you. It was your situation. 

[Bacardi 10,080]

6 hours ago, Takashi96 said:

Do you think you are compelled to include pee scenes in your non fetish work because of our fetish? Even if there's nothing erotic about the scenes. Are they central to the plot? Could they be cut? Would you be okay with cutting them? Do you ever worry that they could give you away?

1. No because my works offer more plot than porn because that's how i prefer to write. Also i do not want to turn people away that might not like/ be turned off by the fetish.

2. They are not central to the plot and could be cut, but I prefer to add short bathroom scenes and such to add realism and to remind my audience that the characters are real people and not superhumans that hold their pee for the entire duration of the novel. I have been praised for it before. 

3. Not really. I do not include many of them. Maybe just one per work if that.