Popular Post rochauthrowaway 407 Posted June 6, 2021 Popular Post Share Posted June 6, 2021 (edited) I wrote a fair portion of this on a phone - by no means the optimal method - so there might be some typos and such. I'll probably fix and update when I get a chance. ... This story takes place a few months after the US Army posted me to Paris. I was working at something called the Office of Defence Cooperation, which is basically the US military’s portion of the American embassy in France, and I had just started dating this American girl named Emily. A civilian at the embassy whom I’m friends with had set me up with her – said she was like her third cousin or step-cousin or something; I don’t know. First date was a movie and then dinner at some cheap-as-dirt Persian place. No sex and honestly I didn’t think it was going anywhere, but then I get a text from Emily a few days later. Says that she’s just finished her last exam for the semester and she wants to go to this EDM concert thing in the 4th arrondissement by the Hôtel de Ville. Says that one of her friends from school wants to tag along. So EDM’s not exactly my thing – I’m more of an indie rock person - but she says it’ll be fun and it’s not like I have much else going on. Emily pulls off the girl-next-door look to a tee; she’s got a bit of acne scarring and I get the impression wears pretty much whatever she happens to pull off her bedroom floor in the morning, but she’s still really fucking pretty. She’s Caucasian, twenty-one, studying political science at the American University of Paris, and abroad for as long as she can manage to be. Family’s from some tiny Ohio town but apparently they haven’t talked in something like two years, so I’m told it’s scholarship money, a side job waitressing at an expat restaurant, and microwaved ramen six times a week paying for school in Paris. She’s got messy brown hair typically pulled into a commensurately messy bun; habitually bites her lip; tell me that she cycles pretty much everywhere in Paris and I am inclined to believe her because it shows. I meet Emily at the Châtelet metro station just past noon. It’s a beautiful day early in June and Paris is just starting to swelter in the summer heat. Emily is wearing a unbuttoned sheer sky blue blouse with the sleeves rolled up overtop a racerback tank top, low-rise khaki chino short-shorts, and a weathered pair of hiking boots. The tank top accents Emily’s smallish breasts and the short-shorts draw my eyes to her pert ass. Standing beside Emily is another girl of about the same age. Emily introduces the girl as Olivia, her friend from school; says they share a political philosophy class together. Anyways, turns out that Olivia is also really pretty. Mediterranean complexion and speaks English with an accent I can’t place; shoulder-length black hair; nice breasts; big smile; I’m confident must regularly go to a gym. She’s is dressed in a floriated sundress that rides about as high up her toned legs as I figure could be pulled off in respectable company. She completes the look with a pair of gladiator-style sandals and some cheap plastic sunglasses So anyways, two hot girls, and I’m thinking cool, maybe I like EDM all of a sudden. The three of us leave the metro station and head off. Outside, the characteristically narrow streets of the 4th are packed for the event and it’s something of a struggle to move. We make slow progress but eventually manage to get into position at the periphery of a speaker-laden stage set up in front of the Hôtel de Ville. Impossible to get much closer because of the number of people. The girls are both good company. Olivia is amicable. Emily is more acerbic but has a good sense of humour and I enjoy the profanity-laced critiques she directs at anyone or anything that happens to annoy her for whatever reason. We get drinks. I’m not a huge drinker but. No idea who’s actually performing and Emily and Olivia are more into it than I am but it’s still fun. Lot of energy. Emily and Olivia each and then Olivia pulls a bottle of Svedka from her backpack and starts mixing that with some bottled lemonade. Pretty soon both girls are quite clearly buzzed. Anyways, we’re just into our third set from some Austrian artist whose exact name I couldn’t quite pick out when Olivia informs Emily and me that she - and I’m quoting here - “needs to take a quick pee.” Okay, I’m thinking, no big deal. I obviously like seeing girls peeing – that’s why I’m writing this story - but I figure Olivia’s just going to go and find a portable toilet or a McDonald’s or whatever and it isn’t going to turn into anything interesting. Still, I’m with two hot girls, and now one of them needs to pee. Whole EDM thing is growing on me. “Just wait,” Emily says. “This’ll be a short set.” “Emily,” Olivia persists. “I really need to go.” Emily sighs. “Fine,” she says. “Let’s go find a toilet somewhere.” Olivia, Emily, and I push our way out of the crowd and start searching for a toilet for Olivia to use. Despite the number of people out for the festival, none of us are immediately able to locate any toilets. Pretty obvious that either the city or the event organizers or both fucked up on that count. I suppose that Olivia could try and step into a shop and ask to use the washroom, but I get the feeling that the upscale businesses of the 4th are not likely to be particularly accommodating of an inebriated noncustomer looking to take a piss. Olivia doesn’t even bother trying and I figure that she probably arrived at the same conclusion. After what I think must be nearly ten minutes searching, I eventually spot a lone portable toilet set up for a nearby construction site and point it out to Olivia. Surprisingly, the lineup isn’t too bad; just a handful of people. Olivia thanks me, hands her bottle of Svetka over to Emily, and then hurries off in the direction the toilet. Emily rolls her eyes and refills her plastic cup with more lemonade and more vodka. “You know,” Emily remarks from beside me, “she’s barely even drunk. She had, I don’t know, maybe like three cups of coffee before we came here. She bought a Nespresso machine in a rummage sale a week ago. Can’t stop using it.” I laugh. Ask Emily if she is also into coffee. Say I know a few good places from doing coffee runs for the embassy. Emily smiles. “Is that you looking for another date?” she says. “That’s pretty confident of you.” Emily and I stand there and chat like that for a few more minutes. Over by the portable toilet, Olivia doesn’t appear to have moved up at all in the queue. I quickly realize that the lineup hasn’t moved at all since Olivia joined it. I see the man next in line to use the toilet knock and then knock again on the door without achieving anything. Door remains closed and the little latch indicator still shows red and locked. Queue only gets longer. Fully five minutes pass before Olivia gives up. “Guys,” she says, running back to us and pressing her legs tightly together. “I really can’t wait much longer!” Olivia, Emily, and I go back to searching the streets for a toilet. By now, Olivia is obviously frantic to piss, and I’m starting to get the feeling that she might soon be forced to do something desperate. I can’t help but wonder if maybe she’s leaking just a little into her panties or is perhaps considering squatting behind a dumpster or something. Eventually, we find a collection of portable toilets set up in the middle of a boulevard, but I know immediately that it’s not going to be of much help to Olivia. One the toilets has been knocked onto its side and the few still standing are obviously overmatched by the enormous lineup of people waiting to use them. “Oh, for fuck’s sake,” Olivia mutters. “That’s a lot of people.” “Can you hold it?” Emily asks. Olivia shakes her head. “Fuck no,” she responds. “And I’m not standing in that line.” “So you’re going to do it in the street then?” Emily scoffs. Olivia doesn’t answer. Instead, she rushes off in the direction of the closest side street. Emily and I follow close behind, both of us almost running to keep pace with Olivia and having to dodge pedestrians as we move. The side street Olivia proceeds down turns out to be no less busy than the street she just turned off, and she continues on past well-attended brasserie verandas, upscale boutiques attended to by window shoppers, and a guitarist hopelessly attempting to busk above the rumbling of distant EDM music. Eventually, Olivia arrives at the far end of the block. I notice her take a deliberative look at a Morris column situated nearby, and for a moment I’m wondering if she’s going to piss right there, but then she takes notice of the number of pedestrians passing by and hurries on down the next street. Olivia only makes it halfway down this street before coming to a halt beside an insurance office. “I can’t – I can’t hold it any longer,” she says, turning to Emily and me. “I’m just gonna do it here, okay?” Olivia doesn’t give Emily or me the opportunity to talk her out of the decision. Rather, she takes a quick glance up and down the street and then rushes to the limited privacy offered by the recessed entrance to the insurance office. I take quick stock of Olivia’s situation. The weekend has the insurance office closed for business and through its glass entrance doors it appears dark and empty. The street is relatively quiet; a few pedestrians are milling about some distance down the road but I can’t see anyone anywhere nearby. Still, Olivia’s spot beside the insurance office doors is overlooked by a plethora of Haussmann apartment windows and is hardly out of the view of any potential passersby. Should someone on the far side of the street happen to look out their window or some driver or cyclist go by, they would no doubt be provided with a clear view of Olivia relieving herself right in the street. Unsure of what else to do, I stand a few feet away and do my awkward best to pretend like I’m paying no attention to the hot girl who is just about to begin pissing just a few feet away from me. Meanwhile, Emily pulls out her phone and leans back against the glass façade of the insurance office. I can’t help but note that she now has her own legs crossed tight. “Matt?” Olivia says from behind me. “Sorry to ask, but would you be able to do something to give me a bit of privacy while I do this?” Turned on as fuck but still doing my best to be courteous, I start walking further down the street and away from Olivia. I only get a few steps before Olivia calls out to me again. “No, that’s not what I meant,” she laughs. “Could you stand in front of me?” Fuck, I think. Of course I can. A moment later, I am standing in front of Olivia’s nook with her located just a few feet behind me. I can’t see anything but I still try to imagine the scene taking place right behind me and try my best to listen for the sound of Olivia pissing. Despite my best efforts, all I am able to make out is the muffled pounding of dance music from the next block over and the squall of a more distant police siren. Still, in my mind, I see Olivia desperately hiking up her dress and sliding her underwear, a pair of night-black bikini panties decorated with pink polka-dots and a little bow, just to the side of her unshaved cunt just moments before piss starts spraying out from her cunt. In another fantasy variation, Olivia has opted not wear any panties and just stands in the alcove with her skirt hiked up just a bit and her legs spread wide apart as she stands and empties her overfull bladder onto the street. But it’s all imagination. Rather than being able to see Olivia, I’m instead looking at nothing more interesting than a boarded-up jewelry store and a couple of parked mopeds. And I’m starting to figure I’m not going to be able to hear anything interesting either. I’ve resigned myself to that disappointment when I hear a slight liquid trickle coming from right behind me. I don’t know if I had convinced myself that I wasn’t going to actually hear anything or that Olivia would suddenly find that she doesn’t really need to pee, but somehow I’m more than a little shocked to realize that Olivia is actually urinating in semi-public just a couple of feet from where I am standing. The sound of Olivia’s urine trickling against the street only lasts for a couple of seconds before once again all I can hear is dance music and police sirens. A few more seconds pass and despite my best attempts to pick out the sound of Olivia peeing, I am unable to hear anything. Again, I’m a little disappointed. Olivia had looked like she was about to burst just a few moments earlier, but from what I just heard she ended up taking something like the smallest pee ever. Whatever, I think. Still awesome. And then I hear Olivia release what I’m sure must be a huge spurt of piss from right behind me. There is a brief pause and then there I hear a second spurt of piss. And then another. I look down at my feet and notice that there is suddenly a small river of urine snaking down from the door behind me and through the cracks in the sidewalk. The entire area suddenly smells of what I know is Olivia’s piss. “Matt?” Olivia calls out a moment later, voice rather casual as she releases yet another spurt of piss onto the street. “You wouldn’t happen to have any tissues? That I could use?” I answer that I think I do and, after some searching, manage to find a couple of paper napkins lodged beside my wallet. I pull them out from my pocket and hold them beside me for Olivia to grab. It occurs to me that Olivia didn’t bother to ask the same favour of Emily. I wait expectantly for Olivia to reach out and grab the napkins out from my hand, but she doesn’t. I wait a few seconds and then a few more but I still find myself standing there with a wad of napkins in my hand. “Can you pass those over?” insists Olivia from close behind me. She punctuates the question by releasing another squirt of urine that splatters particularly loudly against the ground. I turn around a bit, feeling a bit apprehensive. I’m still standing there with the napkins. I turn a little bit further and then I’m staring right at Olivia. Olivia has the hem of her sundress hiked up to around her waist and a pair of navy blue bikini panties – I note that they’re dry - lowered to just above her knees as she half-squats above a sizeable pool of urine. She gives me – and I’m pretty certain at this point that she is intentionally giving me – a completely unobstructed view of her pert twenty-something-year-old cunt. I see that she has shaved away most of her raven black pubic hair but allowed a carefully trimmed bikini line to remain. Her pinkish lips are gaping open and dripping with piss. “Merci,” smiles Olivia, making casual eye contact as she reaches out and nonchalantly picks the napkin out of my hand. I nod and tell her that it was no problem. I’m not sure exactly what else to say. Olivia responds by lowering herself into a slightly deeper squat. She is still making eye contact with me when I see her cunt quiver just slightly and see her release yet another squirt of piss. Wow, I think. I’ve known this girl for like an hour, she’s really cute, and now I’m standing in a Parisian street just a few feet away from her while she urinates. And apparently she doesn’t give a fuck if I watch. I am still looking at Olivia when Emily looks up from her phone and sees what is going on. “Fuck, Olivia,” comments Emily. “You’re really giving him quite the view, aren’t you?” I spin around as fast as I can and apologize quickly to Emily. Olivia responds to her friend by putting on a confused expression and glancing around for the source of her friend’s concern. After an exaggerated scan of the area, Olivia’s eyes fall on me. “Oh, Emily,” she gasps, covering her mouth with one hand in faux shock. “I had no idea he was watching.” Emily rolls her eyes and impatiently taps her foot against the ground. “Just hurry up and finish, okay?” Olivia’s only response is to release another squirt of piss. I notice that Emily now has a hand pressed against her crotch in addition to her crossed legs, and when I hear Olivia’s urine splattering one more time against the pavement, I notice that Emily holds herself particularly tightly. I realize that she needs to pee too. I hear a final, faltering squirt and an elastic snap and then Olivia reappears beside me. She flashes me a little grin and, when Emily isn’t looking, teasingly sticks her tongue out at me. “Finally,” says Emily. “What’s the hurry?” Olivia asks. “I’ve gotta go, too,” Emily answers. I ask Emily if she can hold it a bit longer until we find a public toilet that I know isn’t available or a more accommodating restaurant that I know isn’t nearby. I’m just trying to be polite - I can tell just looking at her that she isn’t going to be able to hold it. Emily shakes her head. “I can’t wait,” she responds. “I need to do it now.” From my sentry position, I watch Emily dash into the nook, hiking boots splashing through the sea of urine left by Olivia as she moves, and see her begin unfastening the skinny belt accompanying her shorts. I take in the scene for as long as I figure I can get away with before about-facing. I’m turned on as fuck at this point but I’m still trying to be at least a bit polite. “It’s fine,” Emily says to me just as I turn away. “I don’t care if you watch. Just don’t let some pervert cop ticket me for doing this, okay?” Unbelievable, I think. I stop turning, nod, and reassure her that no one is looking. I don’t know if that’s true or not – there’s no one on the street that I can see, but there is little I can do to account for the apartment windows staring down at Emily’s position across the street. I watch Emily hurriedly unbutton her fly and tug her chino shorts down to around her knees. Beneath the shorts, Emily is wearing a pair of g-string panties made from a pink lavender cotton embroidered with little images of strawberries. The panties conceal little; the contours of Emily’s cunt are clearly profiled through the thin fabric and the only thing covering her anus is a gossamer-thin strip of elastic. I’m a little shocked by Emily’s choice of panties; for whatever reason I hadn’t expected that she would choose to wear something quite so revealing. Yeah, I think. But it’s super hot. Emily hesitates before going further. I see her glance upwards to the overlooking windows of the apartment on the opposite side of the street and then up and down the road and sidewalk. She thumbs nervously at the string waistband of her panties. And then, apparently unable to hold it any longer, Emily slides her g-string down to around her knees, squats opposite the glass entrance door to the insurance office, and spreads her legs wide apart. Suddenly I’m looking at Emily’s outie cunt, bare ass, and landing strip of dark brown pubic hair. “Wow, Emily,” Olivia laughs. “And you thought I was giving him quite the view?” “Fuck off,” Emily retorts. “Rude,” Olivia giggles. A moment later, Emily releases a massive jet of piss from her cunt. Her stream hits the pavement with a telltale splashing and the sound carries across the otherwise quiet Parisian street. “Oh, fuck,” Emily gasps. “I really needed that.” I don’t doubt her; Emily pisses and pisses and pisses. At first her stream just sprays down the ground between her feet, but a moment later it begins shooting well past her boots, and a moment after that it starts splattering up the base of glass door of the insurance office situated across from her. Emily looks to be focused entirely on maintaining her balance and keeping her clothing dry and doesn’t seem to be paying any attention to where exactly she’s pissing. I’m watching Emily’s urine streak down the glass door when I realize it’s not just pooling up at the threshold as I had expected it to; rather, I notice that a fair bit of urine is seeping under the door and starting to spread across the insurance office’s tile floor. Emily, clearly unaware of the mess she’s creating, just goes on peeing. Feeling rather awkward, I tell Emily that she might want to adjust herself a bit. Emily responds to me with a confused expression. “Come again?” she says, still peeing steadily. I clarify. Explain to her that her pee is starting to go underneath the door and get into the insurance office. Emily looks towards the door. “Oh no!” she exclaims, finally realizing what she’s doing. “I didn’t mean to do that!” She hurriedly adjusts her posture, spraying urine about wildly as she moves, and eventually manages to position herself so that most of her piss stream is back ending up in the street. It’s much too late though; I can see that a sizeable portion the insurance office’s white calacatta marble tilework has already been flooded over with Emily’s excreted vodka lemonade. “Merde, Emily,” Olivia laughs. “That’s going to need a mop.” Emily just blushes and releases more piss. A few short spurts later and she’s done. She gives her ass a quick shake to throw off any urine still clinging to her body before looking down at the enormous piss puddle at her feet. She then stands and peaks into the urine-soaked insurance office. “Fuck,” Emily remarks, “I really didn’t know that was happening.” I shrug. Tell her it isn’t such a big deal. “And thanks, by the way,” Emily adds, looking at me as she pulls her g-string and shorts back up her legs. She takes her time getting the clothing back into position and seems to make a point of allowing my eyes to linger on her cunt and ass and landing strip. I shift my eyes from the view long enough just to give Emily a quizzical look. Ask her what in the world she is thanking me for. “Well,” she says, refastening her belt. “You didn’t let me get ticketed, did you?” I laugh. Tell her that I suppose that I didn’t. Nearby, Olivia is already pouring more drinks. Edited June 6, 2021 by rochauthrowaway 6 20 Link to post
Lutab 1,054 Posted June 7, 2021 Share Posted June 7, 2021 Hot story. I hope they get even more naughty in a part two after a few more drinks Link to post
nopjans 1,178 Posted June 7, 2021 Share Posted June 7, 2021 This is quality writing and very hot. I loved it when Emily pissed on the door, and the pee seeped through to stain the floor on the other side. I'm looking forward to seeing more! 1 Link to post
rochauthrowaway 407 Posted June 8, 2021 Author Share Posted June 8, 2021 10 hours ago, Lutab said: Hot story. I hope they get even more naughty in a part two after a few more drinks Thanks for the positive response. Probably won't be a part two, but I'm thinking about writing some "alternate" scenes where events unfold a little differently than they do in the original post. 9 hours ago, nopjans said: This is quality writing and very hot. I loved it when Emily pissed on the door, and the pee seeped through to stain the floor on the other side. I'm looking forward to seeing more! Thanks for the reply. As above, probably won't be much more for this story, but I'm thinking about a new story that may or may not involve the protagonist getting lost in a Halloween corn maze with a bunch of inebriated university girls. 2 1 Link to post
Lutab 1,054 Posted June 8, 2021 Share Posted June 8, 2021 Sounds like a hot alternative story 🙂 Link to post
rochauthrowaway 407 Posted June 12, 2021 Author Share Posted June 12, 2021 This alternative scene would take place right at the end of the main story. Read the main story first if you haven't already. ... “Okay, I’m done,” Emily announces, apparently finally done peeing. A moment later, she gives her ass a shake to throw off any urine still clinging to her body and pulls up her g-string panties. She lets me watch and I do my best to keep mental notes. Emily only just manages to get her panties back into position when I see her release a small spurt of urine right into them. Must have misjudged her bladder a bit. It’s not much but I watch the pink lavender fabric turn to a dark purple right where her cunt is pressed into the cotton and see a couple of the embroidered strawberries get flooded over with piss. I guess Emily wasn’t actually done after all. “Oh no!” Emily exclaims, hurriedly lowering the panties back down to around her knees and adopting a half-squat posture. I see a small dribble of piss fall from her cunt and then there’s nothing more. For my part, I’m a little bit surprised that there is anything at all left in Emily’s bladder after the diluvial amount of urine she already released, but I suppose that all that vodka lemonade had to go somewhere. “Damnit” Emily mutters, glancing down at the urine-soaked gusset of her g-string. “Well, these panties are done.” I don’t disagree with her. A moment later, Emily slips off her shorts and removes her g-string. She proceeds to discard the panties into a trash can situated just to the side of the insurance office’s piss-streaked entrance door and then pull the shorts back on again. It’s a little bit of a turn-on for me knowing that Emily’s now not wearing any panties. I also note that the shorts are just revealing enough and just loose enough so that when Emily bends even just slightly an onlooker could get a pretty good view of her lips and maybe even just a little bit of her cunt. Doesn’t seem to matter to her though. I get the feeling Emily isn’t really the type of girl to care. Nearby, Olivia is already pouring more drinks. 2 Link to post
whiskey35 306 Posted June 12, 2021 Share Posted June 12, 2021 Great story. Looking forward to whatever way you take it or the characters. Link to post
Admiral 3 Posted June 13, 2021 Share Posted June 13, 2021 Holy shit that was a brilliant story. Shame it's not going to continue. Loved every bit of it. Really well written. And I liked the alternative ending as well! Link to post
Lutab 1,054 Posted June 15, 2021 Share Posted June 15, 2021 Yeah nice alternative ending 🙂 Link to post
pee2poop 131 Posted October 11, 2023 Share Posted October 11, 2023 Interesting place chosen, story seems well written. Link to post
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