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Thank you, I will definitely keep it going. I get a kick out of writing these types of stories. Hell I just like writing. Sometimes it almost seems that the stories write themselves. I'll figure out where I'm going with this and try to get it done by the end of the week. I spend a lot of time just sitting around waiting at work, so I have plenty of time to write.

Thank you. Maybe it had something to do with the size of the font.

Should I write a sequel to my terrible story? How's this for an idea to start? --------------------- "Billy!" Megan walked around the table while she watched Robert, who stood and faced the corner like he was using a urinal. "Aren't you a little late?" She grabbed a package of tissues from her purse.. "The lights just flashed. The library will close in minutes." She headed between two bookcases and placed the tissues on a low empty shelf. She turned back around and smirked. "Checkin' her out again?" "Shh! She can hear us." I said in a loud whisper. "So?" Megan unfa

Damn, sorry that happened to you. There are some dangerous people down here. You were probably in more danger than just rape. Be careful!

NOTE: I don't know why this whole story is in bold, but that's how it 'pasted', and I can't seem to change it. SEXUAL FRUSTRATION I heard a girl giggle as I climbed the last few steps to the library's fourth floor. The library's design reminded me a bit of a shopping mall with it's large open central area, and central staircase. Railing around each floor both secured and allowed a line of sight into each floor above. Bookcases extended almost to the railing. A computer on a small table -- for searching the library's collection -- sat at the end of each. On the other

Let's make this an "interactive" story. Just join in and write. In the original story I had Liz almost getting buried alive in the valley, skin walkers, demons getting into the lodge. I'll post those parts on the companion thread as ideas.

Maybe this would be better as an "interactive" story. Anybody is free to join in and write. I want to keep Billy and Ruka monogamous but if anybody wants to have sex with Jennifer, Liz, the police officer Janine, one of the women from town, or the new employees -- or create new characters -- then go for it! Let's take this story on a crazy ride.

I could resubmit it if it gets rejected again as a sexual roleplaying thread -- but I think I will let it die. It needs to be edited for brevity. The beginning is just too long. And I think my Literotica name is very good. Years ago I got a huge response to my threads whenI called myself "Beachboy" -- because I was living near the beach in San Diego California. I think the pen name somehow made my threads more appealing.

If I ever resubmit it I will edit that. But I've also had the same problem as Steve. My submission gets rejected for grammer or punctuation mistakes. I rework it, resubmit it -- and then it gets rejected with no explanation. I wonder if the Grizzly Mountain story was offensive because it took place in a lodge over a valley where the fertility spirits lived. So of course 'Billy' gets 'Ruka' pregnant -- and they REALLY want the baby! There's not just a drive to have sex there, but there are also exaggerated maternal and paternal feelings.

I just checked the forum and my thread is back. I still wonder why they rejected it when I submitted the full story. They said that it had underage sex, but there was none. The closest thing to underage sex was a "shared dream" following sex at the lodge in the spirit realm. Billy (As an adult) was with Ruka (As an adult) back at an Army base from his childhood. His mother was knocking on the bedroom door asking if he was in there with a girl. And his childhood friend, Tommy, was peeking in the window threatening to tell. It was supposed to symbolize the guilt he felt when he

Every story I have ever attempted to submit to Literotica -- a very popular porn site -- has been rejected. I try to start roleplaying threads and they are deleted. I don't believe "watersports" are prohibited since "Leakyone" has posted many stories there. My latest rejected thread was "Grizzly Mountain". I posted the same exact thread here as a roleplay. What am I writing that is so offensive? Please don't hold back, tell me what I am doing wrong.

Is this really objectionable porn? I tried starting a roleplaying thread on Literotica yesterday and this thread was "reported" and deleted. Every story I have ever submitted to Literotica has been rejected. One had nothing to do with "pee" and I would have called a romance / thriller. Leakyone posts on Literotica. Why can't I? Was this thread offensive because Ruka's English is not perfect? That was my attempt at character development. She had secretly taught herself English so she could leave Japan.

I forgot to say that this is an open "roleplaying" thread. I will play Billy. We need people to roleplay: Ruka Liz Jennifer Blonde new hire. She can be a bleached blonde. Brunette new hire. Bartender? Probably a guy since we need guys too. Security Guard? In this case it would be an extremely dangerous job because in addition to the animals there could be creatures such as Sasquatches out at night. Assorted demons, skin walkers. You name it. Probably a guy. Then any assorted tourist, visitor, and employee we could dream up.

I think I have figured out how to do this. So Grizzly Mountain is officially open for business. BILLY AND RUKA Mom, it's just a summer job..." Billy'smom exhaled, "Billy, it's like you're hiding from life. No sports…." "Mom you're the one who didn't want me playing rugby… " She sighed, "Billy, I can't believe you don't have a girlfriend. Look at you, six foot tall, broad shoulders, good looks. You take after your father.” She smiled, “He was a man's man. An Officer, a true ladies man -- and a gentleman!" "And look where it got him!" Billu caught hid bre

I should have proofread my little story part. In the original the dream scenes were in italic and made it a little clearer that they were 'dreams'. Anyway, we could change the characters, or even the storyline. But I thought that "Grizzly Mountain" would be a fun place for roleplaying.

I wrote a story called "Grizzly Mountain" on Peesearch. I rewrote it later and submitted it to Literotica. They rejected it but that's not surprising since they reject all of my stories. They claimed that my story had "underage sex". There is no underage sex in my story! All of the characters are eighteen and older! Anyway I wanted to try the story as a "roleplay". But I end up writing beginnings that are too long and detailed. So I thought that instead I would submit the story beginning as just an idea. To show where I imagined the story might go. It is kind of a supernatural fa

I love the idea of creating a story with a guy pulled out of this universe, and into an alternate universe. I started writing one on the Peesearch website that I called "The City". In my story the main character is pulled out of this world, and into the ruins of a future world. That world has gone extinct and the only people there are the people who have been pulled into that world. However in my story men never make it through alive. But the main character does. His name is Adam, and the first woman he meets is named Eve. I never finished the story. It was going to have the story

I have had a women pee on me at orgasm when having sex. It was not a turn-off to me. It was possibly the best, most intense, sex I have ever experienced.

And I prefer female "sneaky" naughty peeing -- when they get away with it without being caught. The Chinese woman peeing on the counter of the convenience store, in front of the storekeeper, was exciting but a little over-the-top for me. I would have preferred it if she had waited for him to leave, jumped up on the counter and peed, then escaped before he returned. It would have been funny if he had returned to find a puzzling puddle of pee, and a cup filled with pee, on the counter.

I suppose part of the thrill to me is the 'dangerous' aspect. The risk of getting caught doing something that is socially unacceptable in an unacceptable place -- like in a public place on carpet. Like the girl in the video who gets caught peeing in an elevator. So for me the most exciting videos are of woman peeing in carpeted elevators, hallways, stairs, libraries, and stores.

HiI got into the whole naughty fetish almost twenty years ago (2002?) when I was still single. A girl I was going to go on a date with called and backed out at the last minute. She told me that she had gotten pretty serious about another guy, and apologized for not calling me earlier. I was working nights at the time and I had taken the 'day' off from work. So I had all night, and nothing to do.I had a twelve pack of beer, and I lived near a Pizza Hut -- so I went and got some Pizza. I was randomly surfing for porn, on the internet, when I stumbled across the "Sprinkles Gold". I was