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If I ever resubmit it I will edit that. But I've also had the same problem as Steve. My submission gets rejected for grammer or punctuation mistakes. I rework it, resubmit it -- and then it gets rejected with no explanation. I wonder if the Grizzly Mountain story was offensive because it took place in a lodge over a valley where the fertility spirits lived. So of course 'Billy' gets 'Ruka' pregnant -- and they REALLY want the baby! There's not just a drive to have sex there, but there are also exaggerated maternal and paternal feelings.

I just checked the forum and my thread is back. I still wonder why they rejected it when I submitted the full story. They said that it had underage sex, but there was none. The closest thing to underage sex was a "shared dream" following sex at the lodge in the spirit realm. Billy (As an adult) was with Ruka (As an adult) back at an Army base from his childhood. His mother was knocking on the bedroom door asking if he was in there with a girl. And his childhood friend, Tommy, was peeking in the window threatening to tell. It was supposed to symbolize the guilt he felt when he

Every story I have ever attempted to submit to Literotica -- a very popular porn site -- has been rejected. I try to start roleplaying threads and they are deleted. I don't believe "watersports" are prohibited since "Leakyone" has posted many stories there. My latest rejected thread was "Grizzly Mountain". I posted the same exact thread here as a roleplay. What am I writing that is so offensive? Please don't hold back, tell me what I am doing wrong.

Is this really objectionable porn? I tried starting a roleplaying thread on Literotica yesterday and this thread was "reported" and deleted. Every story I have ever submitted to Literotica has been rejected. One had nothing to do with "pee" and I would have called a romance / thriller. Leakyone posts on Literotica. Why can't I? Was this thread offensive because Ruka's English is not perfect? That was my attempt at character development. She had secretly taught herself English so she could leave Japan.

I forgot to say that this is an open "roleplaying" thread. I will play Billy. We need people to roleplay: Ruka Liz Jennifer Blonde new hire. She can be a bleached blonde. Brunette new hire. Bartender? Probably a guy since we need guys too. Security Guard? In this case it would be an extremely dangerous job because in addition to the animals there could be creatures such as Sasquatches out at night. Assorted demons, skin walkers. You name it. Probably a guy. Then any assorted tourist, visitor, and employee we could dream up.

I think I have figured out how to do this. So Grizzly Mountain is officially open for business. BILLY AND RUKA Mom, it's just a summer job..." Billy'smom exhaled, "Billy, it's like you're hiding from life. No sports…." "Mom you're the one who didn't want me playing rugby… " She sighed, "Billy, I can't believe you don't have a girlfriend. Look at you, six foot tall, broad shoulders, good looks. You take after your father.” She smiled, “He was a man's man. An Officer, a true ladies man -- and a gentleman!" "And look where it got him!" Billu caught hid bre

I should have proofread my little story part. In the original the dream scenes were in italic and made it a little clearer that they were 'dreams'. Anyway, we could change the characters, or even the storyline. But I thought that "Grizzly Mountain" would be a fun place for roleplaying.

I wrote a story called "Grizzly Mountain" on Peesearch. I rewrote it later and submitted it to Literotica. They rejected it but that's not surprising since they reject all of my stories. They claimed that my story had "underage sex". There is no underage sex in my story! All of the characters are eighteen and older! Anyway I wanted to try the story as a "roleplay". But I end up writing beginnings that are too long and detailed. So I thought that instead I would submit the story beginning as just an idea. To show where I imagined the story might go. It is kind of a supernatural fa

I love the idea of creating a story with a guy pulled out of this universe, and into an alternate universe. I started writing one on the Peesearch website that I called "The City". In my story the main character is pulled out of this world, and into the ruins of a future world. That world has gone extinct and the only people there are the people who have been pulled into that world. However in my story men never make it through alive. But the main character does. His name is Adam, and the first woman he meets is named Eve. I never finished the story. It was going to have the story

I have had a women pee on me at orgasm when having sex. It was not a turn-off to me. It was possibly the best, most intense, sex I have ever experienced.

And I prefer female "sneaky" naughty peeing -- when they get away with it without being caught. The Chinese woman peeing on the counter of the convenience store, in front of the storekeeper, was exciting but a little over-the-top for me. I would have preferred it if she had waited for him to leave, jumped up on the counter and peed, then escaped before he returned. It would have been funny if he had returned to find a puzzling puddle of pee, and a cup filled with pee, on the counter.

I suppose part of the thrill to me is the 'dangerous' aspect. The risk of getting caught doing something that is socially unacceptable in an unacceptable place -- like in a public place on carpet. Like the girl in the video who gets caught peeing in an elevator. So for me the most exciting videos are of woman peeing in carpeted elevators, hallways, stairs, libraries, and stores.

HiI got into the whole naughty fetish almost twenty years ago (2002?) when I was still single. A girl I was going to go on a date with called and backed out at the last minute. She told me that she had gotten pretty serious about another guy, and apologized for not calling me earlier. I was working nights at the time and I had taken the 'day' off from work. So I had all night, and nothing to do.I had a twelve pack of beer, and I lived near a Pizza Hut -- so I went and got some Pizza. I was randomly surfing for porn, on the internet, when I stumbled across the "Sprinkles Gold". I was