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miniskirtpisser

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  1. This is very interesting. I can’t wait to read about the training itself.
  2. My name is Franklin. I am a teddy bear who is close friend of a little girl named Julia. Julia used to play with me everyday. However, I have not played with her after she moved out of the house when she was 18. Julia used to visit me a lot but now I stayed alone in my cubby house gathering dust. One fine day, I heard steps approaching my house. I was overjoyed that someone choose to come inside my cubby house. It was my childhood friend, Julia! She held hands with a man that I did not recognize. It is no trouble, really. Julia’s friends are my friends. I remembered how she used to bring sever
  3. @Brutus and @Dr.P, thank you for the insight regarding sounds of women peeing. May I know whether it is more exciting to hear only the sound of the stream or to hear the hissing sound interspersed with some sighs and moans? I’m asking because when I pee after long time of holding, I tend to sigh and moan as well. It felt more erotic that way for me. @Brutus If you feel that you’d like me to post that other question somewhere else, please let me know. I don’t want to accidentally “hijack” the comments thread on your story. - MSP -
  4. Thank you for the two awesome stories, Brutus!! I love the changes that you made with the second one. I felt that it was much much better than the original draft that you sent to me. I love the first one as well. I never know that simply listening to a woman peeing can be that sexy. I thought you’d always need the visual aspect as well. Thanks for changing my mind 😊
  5. @Darkguy @Peefreak99 @steve25805 Thank you very much for your inputs. I will continue to work on the story then. I will post it here when it’s all done.
  6. Hey all, I am thinking of writing a story of an adult woman (older than 18) who peed on a teddy bear that she loved as a child but has now discarded. The story will be told from the point of view of the teddy bear. There will be no erotic actions done by a minor (e.g. I will not describe a child peeing on the teddy bear). However, I will mention that the teddy bear was a treasured possession of her when she is younger (e.g. I will mention that she cuddled, played house with it, took it to her bed when she was a kid). What do you think about it? Would it be considered too taboo or borderline ch
  7. Thank you for your comment. I will post some updates when I do outdoor peeing. I do outdoor peeing mostly because I was desperate and wanted to be naughty. It’s semi planned because I will actually go and do some nature walk or road trip where there is almost no toilet around. Not sure whether I’ve been caught or not. Nobody ever said anything to me directly but there was time where I peed near some parked trucks with people inside them.
  8. Thank you very much for your kind words, Brutus. I love most of your stories and I do get inspired by them. I hope you’ll write more of them 😊
  9. Thank you very much for your explanation. I am hoping that you’d write more naughty peeing stories. I love the third person narrative of the story and the bewilderment of the protagonist. Thank you also for your kind words about my writings. I am glad that you enjoyed my story. 😊
  10. Thank you!! I’m not sure if naughty wiping is a term that has been used before or not. Feel free to use and spread it though. I’d love to read more stories involving naughty wiping.
  11. Me too. I also love squatting. Shewee is reusable & quite easy to clean too. I recommend it.
  12. Thank you for your comment, pee01. I don’t think using will be my regular peeing method. I don’t really like having to really regulate my pee pressure. As I do need to ensure that I don’t pee too much and accidentally overfill the Shewee, peeing with shewee is also slower than peeing by squatting.
  13. Thank you for your comment, Alfresco. I think Shewee is really just a novelty & a last resort thing for me. Squatting outside is definitely preferable. Another downside with is that I don’t feel I can completely empty my bladder. There’s always something left behind and I don’t particularly enjoy that feeling.
  14. Thank you!! Please share your idea with me if you want.
  15. I loved this story. I enjoyed fantasizing about the thorough defilement of the fictional historic landmark. I also somewhat adored the naïveté of the protagonist of this story. It’s amazing that they still don’t know that she is about to pee when she is exposing her pussy in such a way. What else would she do 😜😜?? I am not sure if it is intentional or not but I enjoyed the fact that you keep the the protagonist’s gender ambiguous. If feels easier to relate to them. By the way, if you don’t mind, may I know whether the protagonist choose to tattle about the girl peeing to the authority or
  16. Hey Daemoniak, thank you for the constructive criticism. I agree with your comment regarding the first sentence (i.e. “Not caring one bit ...”). After re-reading the story, this sentence does seems superfluous. It feels like I am telling the reader what she feels instead of allowing the audience to make their own conclusion. Having said the above, I feel that the second sentence (i.e. If grieving family member, ....) should stay. I was inspired by @Brutus story ( ) in which I really enjoyed the description about how sad Mrs Russo was when the two girls pretty much destroy her favo
  17. Thank you very much!! I like that part as well. In addition to naughty peeing, I love naughty wiping. Peeing without wiping just doesn’t feel as comfortable for me.
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