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@Maggie_555 Yeah I find it disturbing that people get excited watching a living being of any species suffering and being killed. There is something wrong in their brain. Another thing to consider is that many women will internalize their mans behavior out of love, such as ignoring that he is doing inappropriate things to her kids because she loves him do much. I know a woman who had close friends of many races and became a racist herself and stopped talking to them because she fell in love with a white supremacist. So maybe your friend likes the snake eating live animals because her husba

Me and my friend, Justin used to spend the night at each others house sometimes when we were in middle school. His mom was was hot as hell. She was in her early 40's at the time but looked early 30's. To me, she had the perfect female figure. She was a curvy brunette, HUGE ass, big legs, small waist. Decent size breasts, probably B cup. She was half the reason I wanted to go over to his house all the time. Couldn't wait to get a look at her sexy legs and ass walking around the house in her shorts. If she had on jeans, you could tell she had some big labia, they showed through pretty nice and d

[USER=14602]@miniskirtpisser[/USER] Yeah I can do that. I'll give her 2 guys for starters. Not sure if that scenario will be in the next chapter, I have a bunch of ideas and haven't decided yet.

Urine of the Goddesses chapter 1- Empress Glendella Recap: On planet Estress, a parasite, EvePoxia X, makes women produce more urine when having sex. Men need womens pee to keep the parasite from killing them, in turn making womens urine an invaluable item. (see intro for details) Supreme Empress Glendella: I choose....this one....Jim McGash, a farmer. Hmm, only 18 years old but his record indicates he has a 9 inch penis. He will have the chance to receive my royal piss and kill the parasite. Queen Leah: As your little sister I have a duty to remind you he is 18, merely a boy. Surely h

@zorba3189 Damn...that is a very dirty thing to do to someone. And to think that her roommate was eating the urine infested herbs unknowingly. That's taking it too far. Very hateful. If she had known, she could've pressed charges, its against the law to taint someone's food.

@zorba3189 I'm sure that any woman with a pee fetish is fun in bed, especially if her partner actually shares the fetish. Poor guy just couldn't get over her, happens to the best of us. I bet he's torn up now. At least you aren't with someone who isn't fully into you anymore.

@p\=eeeeee It's really irritating how women maintain friendships while hating each other. It's so childish. But at the same time I would love to see a girlfriend do something this dirty.

@Fire2ninja Disclaimers are a good idea. The only problem is that the elements of my stories are usually integrated very tightly. So making a potentially off putting part expendable enough that readers can skip past it disrupts this integration. For my writing style I think it would be better to just leave those bits out. It doesn't bother me. I keep myself on a tight leash anyway. At first, my femulsio eta stories were extreme enough that Steve let me know I was approaching a red line and risking removal. So I pulled back considerably. I would need to find a more extreme audience elsewhere

@Fyrman Lol, well a woman with all of these qualities while also being girlfriend/wife material is rare indeed. Finding a woman with a pee fetish is hard enough. I hope I'm lucky enough find a woman who likes me watching her pee and maybe pee on me in the shower. FYI I just realized when typing your name I've been calling you fryman but its fyrman. Apologies.

@Alfresco You are correct. You would see women do all types of nasty things they really can be pigs in total privacy. See here's the thing, I used to clean the restrooms when I worked at Burger King years ago and I can tell you on multiple occasions women had literally thrown tampons on the wall and floor and left blood spatter. Shit splattered on the seat, puddles of piss on the floor, soiled tissue all over, especially if we had to serve bus loads of high school students. 30 teen girls and 2 stalls. One even shit in the sink...The womens was ready for hazmat after they left. I wrote about

@zorba3189 Good that you left him. They divorced because of the infidelity not because he didn't love her anymore. She was probably awesome at sex. Women who display cruelty usually have lower inhibition in bed, its all tied to their lack of empathy. So he was probably missing the sex with her as well. One of my friends once told me that his ex was always horny after they had been hunting and killed something, especially if she shot it. This may be why so many women that hunt seem a little too excited and sexual when photographed standing over what they just killed. Anyway, hot stories.

Thanks I appreciate it. You know, regardless, I like how much I have evolved since my first story. It was short and simple compared to the long complex stuff I do now. Just glad people like reading it, either way.:thumbsup:

I've noticed a trend of people not liking certain parts of my stories. There is a disconnect between me and everyone else. I often write to include descriptions of other bodily functions and not limit it to just pee and that bothers people. I think the problem is that I am intrigued by womens toilet visit behavior in general and most readers have a very specific fetish for pee in an innocent girl being naughty way like panty peeing or something. I briefy mentioned a little poop and tampon and that seems to have partially killed it for a lot of people. So I guess I'll stop adding other stuff al

Thanks Fryman, I appreciate you supporting my stories since I started. When it comes to scat I'm mostly neutral. I don't really seek it out but I'm not repulsed by it either. For me, pee is my preference but in general I like watching women voiding waste from urethra or anus. One important distinction though, I am not at all into scat playing, where women rub it all over themselves or eat it. That's just stupid gross to me personally. With Trish here, I added it for the specific purpose of showing just how hugely arrogant and disrespectful she is. Originally, when Jeremy saw her on film, she h

Thanks, glad you liked it.

I like how your stories involve an unassuming innocent woman pissing on/in something of value. There's the innocence, the secrecy, the desperation, the woman's arousal, the naughtiness, violation of something valuable and the pee detail itself. Lots of fetishes satisfied here.

Messy Piss of College Girls Jeremy is a junior in college. At the end of the summer he hugs his parents goodbye and heads to the campus 2 hours away. He arrives and moves into a nice campus apartment. As he unpacks and moves his furniture in he looks across the street and sees a very hot girl moving in that he cannot take his eyes off of. She has the face of an angel. Long curly brown hair. He walks over and says hi to her and she just says her name is Trish. She didn't seem talkative, maybe the shy type, which made him like her more. After the brief exchange he continues unpacking, periodic

Yes I enjoy others' short stories as well. When I try to write a short story, ideas rush into my head and I have to keep going. Total immersion is what I aim for in mine. I like creating a detailed scenario that slowly builds to an awesome pee scene. If I do it right and the readers are into the characters and context then the pee scenes mean so much more. That's IF I can get people invested in the story, which doesn't always happen but it remains my goal. But at this point most people know what to expect from me.

I am sure there are people who prefer short stories and then there are those who prefer long stories. Those that like long ones will naturally drift toward writers like me, assuming they like the material to begin with. I write for me but also try to stay mindful that others are not in my head and their minds may not go where I intend if I don't fill in most of the details. I also try to avoid stretching it out too much. I am still finding my balance but I think it gets a little better with each story. The one I'm working on now is by far the longest I've written and I'm seeing if anything cou

Fire2ninja I always welcome feedback so I know how in tune I am with readers. I doubt you will anger anyone. I think we are rather cool here given this fetish. I agree 100 percent with you that the pee parts were a little thin. The thing is I try to avoid making these too long and lose someones interest. I already removed an entire paragraph before posting. This is why I had the car peeing and the food peeing as well as the urn scene to get enough pee material overall. I dont want to sacrifice buildup story either so its basically a balancing act that I am still learning. Thanks for the eval

You know, I'm not usually into seeing women pee themselves from desperation. The whole pee dance thing and the soaking of the pants just doesn't do it for me, I like to see the pee flowing from her body. But I do like the idea of Amy being denied and peeing herself in a revenge scenario because she deserves it. I'm working on the next Goddesses story right now but Amy's payback story will happen afterward. I didn't intend to make Amy's story a recurring one, I just wanted to break away from my fictional worlds for a moment. Now I am juggling 3 story lines lol.

Hot little story. I would love to be with woman that's up for doing something like this. Your bf is lucky. Word of advice, I take it this is a true story and not fiction. This is the fictional stories area. You want to post true stuff under the experiences tab. If it is fiction I apologize.

I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite thing about this is how they innocently fall into enjoying it. Also the additional element of the camera was very well integrated and took the story to a whole new level.

You know what, you just gave me an idea right there. Like maybe Clyde's niece or granddaughter finds out what happened and ends up caring for Amy and exacting revenge. Oh yeah...definitely doing that in the near future, thanks to you, sir.

Amy's Dirty Piss Revenge Amy is a nurse in New York City. She is a very attractive 5'9'' 24 year old, brunette with an curvy athletic body. Looking to make extra money, she volunteers to be a part-time caretaker for Clyde, an 87 year old blind man paralyzed from the neck down. His wife died 6 years ago and his sons rarely visit because he has become so difficult to care for that they are seeking a caretaker for 6 months so they can focus on their business. Amy figures it will be an easy job. Once she learns of Clyde's conditions, she is already thinking of slacking off, knowing he can't