Rush Hour

[Rikki Bare 55]

Warning story includes harm to public transport and potential discomfort to others. Not something I approve of but still fantasise about.

This short story was inspired by the sensation of accidentally sitting my dry butt on a hot, piss wet, towel. I had just soaked it earlier sitting at my computer but had been called away and had to get changed into dry pants to go see someone. On returning I resumed my seat still wearing my dry clothes. It is pure fiction. 

Enjoy, Rikki

I sometimes work a day in London coming home by train in the 'rush hour'. This usually involves standing for the first twenty minutes of the journey. This evening, after the sort of hot August day when London becomes almost unbearable, was no exception and the train was already full when I boarded it. I had to stand and managed to work my way to one end of the car, I and one other guy were the only two standing passengers between this particular sets of seats.

I could see him eyeing the other passengers trying to work out who would get off soonest and I did the same. I was tired and wanted to sit down very much. Then I noticed a pretty young woman with short jet black hair in a white cotton shirt black mini skirt and black tights showing off a pair of long strong slim legs to great advantage. She shifted in her seat quite a bit, enough to make me think perhaps she needed a pee but nothing definite or out of the ordinary.

After twenty minutes she had calmed down and focussed on her book and a short while later, as we approached Croydon, she put the book away in her brief case and as the train slowed stood up. Before the other guy had a chance to move I was across the compartment and settling into her vacated seat.

As I settled into the seat I felt a sudden delicious warmth soaking into my ass, I often enjoy the retained body warmth of a recently vacated seat but this was 100 times as potent because it was WET. It was a terrific sensation and I wriggled in my place to soak up as much of the warm piss as I could.

The woman was still just in front of me facing down the carriage towards the doors the back of her neck was flushed red. I studied the back of her skirt with interest. I could just make out a wide dark stain across her butt where it was even blacker than the surrounding material. There was no doubt in my mind that she had just peed in the seat. I wriggled some more and placed my brief case across my lap to hide my raging hard on.

The train stopped and the people started to get off. Just as her way forward became clear the woman looked round with a guilty expression and I managed to catch her eye. I gave her my best smile and wriggled some more in my seat. Her eyes lit up and she returned the grin before heading for the exit.

I settled down to pretend to read as the train moved off, In reality I was almost coming in my pants and trying to summon the courage to add some of my own piss to her wet patch. Fortunately I was wearing black washable dress pants and the wetness wouldn't show. I was very nervous but during the remaining 45 minutes of my journey I managed to piss quite a bit, warming up my pants as the seat cooled, and got off the now almost empty train without anybody seeing what I had done.

Now every time I get that train I keep a look out for the young woman in the short black skirt. I will surely recognise her and am already trying to think how to start a conversation. Would anybody like to suggest how I might do this? I will incorporate the best response in a part two.

Rikki

Edited June 5, 2023 by Rikki Bare
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[Paulypeeps 4,985]

Not sure this would work in real life, but in fiction perhaps. "Hi, I saw you the other day, I would recognise that smile anywhere. Would you like to sit on my lap - I'm going to East Croydon."

[Rikki Bare 55]

Hi Paulypeeps,

Straight in there then. I'm not at home to Real life!

Idea certainly has possibilities and much better than any I've had.

Wetly

Rikki

[colette888 6,917]

I assure you that I'm not the «young woman in the short black skirt», but, reading this story, more or less fictional, my mind went back to an episode which I protagonized 4 years back on an italian train....

[Rosita 612]

12 hours ago, colette888 said:

which I protagonized 4 years back on an italian train....

👀

[colette888 6,917]

7 hours ago, Rosita said:

👀

Interested??? 😏

[Lutab 1,011]

On 6/9/2023 at 12:16 AM, colette888 said:

Interested??? 😏

Quite

 

another way for him to start the conversation would be

last time we met you had quite a warm smile and I enjoyed the warmth you left behind on the rest of my ride home.