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Liberation (01): Heidis first wetting


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Title: Liberation
Main character: Heidi 
I was so sure that this was a story about the second world war xD. Im happy i was wrong. I especially liked how you described how she discovered that she liked wetting. Question tho: why wasn't she wearing underwear ? I got the feeling that she wasn't a very naughty person before this encounter. If this isn't a plot point in part 2 of the story (which i haven't read yet) i would suggest that you explore this part of her personality a bit more. 

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