Old Friend - FICTION

[miniskirtpisser 411]

My name is Franklin. I am a teddy bear who is close friend of a little girl named Julia. Julia used to play with me everyday. However, I have not played with her after she moved out of the house when she was 18. Julia used to visit me a lot but now I stayed alone in my cubby house gathering dust. One fine day, I heard steps approaching my house. I was overjoyed that someone choose to come inside my cubby house. It was my childhood friend, Julia! She held hands with a man that I did not recognize. It is no trouble, really. Julia’s friends are my friends. I remembered how she used to bring several girls over for a tea party with me. Oh…. what a wonderful time it was. Anyway, I digress. 

 

For this particular visit, unlike in the past, Julia paid no attention to me. She instead kissed and hugged the man that she came with. Julia interrupted the kiss and said to the man, “one moment Frank, I need to…. you know.” “Oh come on Julia, we finally got some time alone,” said the man. “I think I know a perfect place,” he continued and pointed in my direction. “You are so nasty, Frank,” Julia giggled and walked to me. I was ecstatic because Julia finally recognized me. She pulled up her skirt and slowly squatted in front of me. I knew it, she could not wait to hug me. She missed me as much as I miss her. However, instead of picking me up, she scooted closer to me and parted her thighs even wider. I got direct view of Julia’s milky white thighs and her secret place between them. Even though her secret place was covered, her big, white bums were not. 

 

“Is it a good angle, Frank?,” asked Julia. “Perfect, babe,” answered Frank as he raised a rectangular device and pointed it to Julia’s direction. “All right. Get ready,” she smiled. She pulled aside the stretchy red cloth that was between her thighs. I saw something of her that I have never seen before. It was a vertical opening between her legs. Even though her thighs were creamy white, her gash was pinkish and looked glistening wet. I was worried that it was an open wound. Oh…. how I hope that my Julia is fine. 

 

“What are you doing, Julia?,” I thought to myself. Before I managed to figure out my situation, a jet of hot yellowish water sprayed out of Julia’s opening. The amber liquid created a loud hissing noise before striking my body. My big and fluffy body absorbed all of the liquid that she offered. I felt weighed down and uncomfortable but Julia does not appear to care even one bit. “I can’t believe you actually do it, Jules,” uttered Frank. “Told you that I was bursting,” answered Julia as her deluge continued to run down on me. She moved and positioned herself in such a way so that she could shower my face and my body. After 30 seconds or so, her stream slows down and tapered off. Some of her liquid that did not struck me dripped on the wooden floor. I was completely saturated and felt a bit nauseous. Whilst still in squatting position, Julia bounced her bottom up and down. She pulled my left paw and rubbed it several times on her wet slit. She then snapped her red cloth back in place and pulled down her skirt. Without saying goodbye to me, Julia went back to Frank. They continued to hug and kiss whilst I was left drenched, cold, and alone.

Edited January 12, 2020 by miniskirtpisser

[wetwulf 3,324]

A very unique perspective @miniskirtpisser. I commend you for trying something different from most of the other stories posted here. 

[miniskirtpisser 411]

2 hours ago, wetwulf said:

A very unique perspective @miniskirtpisser. I commend you for trying something different from most of the other stories posted here. 

Thank you for your compliment, @wetwulf. 

[Lutab 1,052]

Fun story. I like the different perspective 

[miniskirtpisser 411]

On 1/14/2020 at 7:53 PM, Lutab said:

Fun story. I like the different perspective 

Thank you 😊

[Brutus 2,206]

@miniskirtpisser So I'm in the process of catching up on what others have written and started with yours. What I'm going to say is not because of how much you support my writings, this is 100% real. This is some of the most beautifully heartbreaking fiction I've ever seen on the forum. The painful loneliness of Franklin being abandoned, his joy of seeing Julia return and believing it would be like old times, only for her to do something so coldly cruel to him, shattering his last hopes of happiness. You portrayed his innocence and purity perfectly by how he doesn't even know what her pussy is when he sees it, or understand the vileness of being pissed on. It's his childlike level of innocence being violated that makes the story bite really deep on an emotional level. Hot, beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time. And of course, great job with personification. It's not easy to do correctly. I absolutely loved the story.

 

Edited January 22, 2020 by Brutus

[miniskirtpisser 411]

On 1/22/2020 at 10:42 AM, Brutus said:

@miniskirtpisser So I'm in the process of catching up on what others have written and started with yours. What I'm going to say is not because of how much you support my writings, this is 100% real. This is some of the most beautifully heartbreaking fiction I've ever seen on the forum. The painful loneliness of Franklin being abandoned, his joy of seeing Julia return and believing it would be like old times, only for her to do something so coldly cruel to him, shattering his last hopes of happiness. You portrayed his innocence and purity perfectly by how he doesn't even know what her pussy is when he sees it, or understand the vileness of being pissed on. It's his childlike level of innocence being violated that makes the story bite really deep on an emotional level. Hot, beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time. And of course, great job with personification. It's not easy to do correctly. I absolutely loved the story.

 

@Brutus, thank you very much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I actually almost chose not to publish the story because I was worried that Franklin’s innocence won’t be believable. I am so happy that the story managed to be hot and heartbreaking at the same time. It was the effect that I was hoping to achieve. 

Good luck with the catching up and enjoy the stories!!

[miniskirtpisser 411]

On 1/22/2020 at 10:42 AM, Brutus said:

@miniskirtpisser So I'm in the process of catching up on what others have written and started with yours. What I'm going to say is not because of how much you support my writings, this is 100% real. This is some of the most beautifully heartbreaking fiction I've ever seen on the forum. The painful loneliness of Franklin being abandoned, his joy of seeing Julia return and believing it would be like old times, only for her to do something so coldly cruel to him, shattering his last hopes of happiness. You portrayed his innocence and purity perfectly by how he doesn't even know what her pussy is when he sees it, or understand the vileness of being pissed on. It's his childlike level of innocence being violated that makes the story bite really deep on an emotional level. Hot, beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time. And of course, great job with personification. It's not easy to do correctly. I absolutely loved the story.

 

@Brutus, thank you very much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I actually almost chose not to publish the story because I was worried that Franklin’s innocence won’t be believable. I am so happy that the story managed to be hot and heartbreaking at the same time. It was the effect that I was hoping to achieve. 

Good luck with the catching up and enjoy the stor!!

[Alfresco 11,632]

I have to agree with the other comments here - that was a great piece of writing and a superb way of recounting the innocence of the bear and the way he had been left forlorn, then hoped for the love to return, found a new part of Julia that he didn't know about and then felt used and abused by being soaked.

Loved it.

[miniskirtpisser 411]

7 hours ago, Alfresco said:

I have to agree with the other comments here - that was a great piece of writing and a superb way of recounting the innocence of the bear and the way he had been left forlorn, then hoped for the love to return, found a new part of Julia that he didn't know about and then felt used and abused by being soaked.

Loved it.

Thank you very much for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed the story and that the story managed to convey Franklin’s feeling.