The Essex Girls - Wanna go to Lakeside

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Chapter 1 – Denise’s Challenge

It was Denise who had suggested going shopping, a suggestion that no self-respecting Essex girl could refuse.

“I’m coming!” Said Denise’s mother Tracy.

“Me too.” Piped up her grandmother Sharon.

The three women picked up their handbags and headed for the station. They could have been sisters with their bleached hair and similar outfits rather than from three generations. Denise was eighteen and her grandmother was in her forties but all of them had maintained excellent figures.

Sharon had worn miniskirts since she moved to the new town of Basildon in the sixties and now any woman could be identified as a foreigner if she was not wearing a short skirt in the Essex town regardless of her age. Sharon was wearing a leopard print top and a white pleated tennis skirt with white stilettos. She had abandoned wearing underwear in the sixties, partly influenced by Germaine Greer and the feminist movement and partly by the practicalities of wearing short skirts, the only way she could prevent people from seeing her knickers was to leave them off.

Tracy was wearing a turquoise mini dress with a white belt to coordinate with her white stilettos. Now in her prime she felt wearing simple clothes would maximise her allure. Like Sharon she did not wear underwear but unlike Sharon she and Denise had never worn underwear in their lives, now feeling that it was their duty to follow Sharon’s example.

Denise liked to look as grown up as possible and wore a tight white top to maximise her small breasts and a black leather mini skirt with white stilettos.

At the station the three women bought their tickets from the ticket machine and waited for the train. After a few minutes Denise became a bit fidgety, which soon came to the attention of Tracy.

“Are you all right Denise? You look a bit uncomfortable.” Tracy asked.

 “I’m OK,” replied Denise. “I need to pee but I was going to go on the train.”

The women stood and chatted as Denise fidgeted for another five minutes until the train came.

When the train arrived the women trotted along, looking through the windows to find a suitable seat.

“This looks OK.” Said Tracy after passing about half of the almost empty train.

“He looks great.” Said Sharon noticing the student sat opposite the row of three empty seats that Tracy had earmarked for them.

They got on board and sat down opposite the student who was quite engrossed in his book. Denise took the window seat with Tracy in the middle and Sharon in the aisle seat.

Immediately they sat down Denise and Tracy began to wet themselves, slowly emptying their bladders in to the seat with a gentle hissing noise. As always when wetting herself Tracy became aroused, the warmth from her pee as it soaked into the seat turning her on.

Tracy whispers in Denise’s ear. “What do you reckon on bookworm over there, you think he’ll fuck you?”

“We’ll see.” Denise replied, now that her urge to pee had been alleviated she was able to enjoy the warmth, turned on by her own wetness.

Relishing the challenge that her mother had set Denise opened her knees as far as she could and started to rub her right foot up and down her left calf.

“Hi, what’s the book, I’m Denise?” She asked the student while glancing down at herself hoping that his eyes could be drawn away from his book and towards her exposed fanny.

The student looked over his book at Denise. “It’s ‘The Hobbit’, by Tolkein.” He said and returned to reading, ignoring the show that Denise was putting on for him.

After all, he had seen Essex girls before and there was nothing unusual about seeing their minge.

Tracy could see that Denise had failed to make any impact at all. Denise’s conversation had been stumped completely by her lack of knowledge of the works of Tolkein. She might have fared better had he been reading Terry Pratchet.

Tracy got up and sat next to the student leaving a dark wet patch on her seat and showing a small discoloured area on the back of her dress to Sharon.

“I liked ‘Lord of the Rings’ better.” Said Tracy as she settled down in to the adjacent seat, almost snuggling up to the student, letting her dress ride up to expose her abundant bush. Tracy ran her hands up and down over her breasts and put a hand onto the student’s knee, running it up his thigh.

While the student glanced at Tracy, clearly able to see all that she had to offer there was no sign of any arousal in his trousers. Tracy returned to her own seat, hovering and silently spurting a jet of pee to warm up the wet patch before she sat down.

Sharon had been watching intently as her offspring had failed miserably to make any impression on the student. Sharon stood in front of the student and with her legs tight together released her bladder. Letting the pee cascade down the insides of her legs and making a loud hissing noise she soon had the attention of the student. Sharon seductively lifted her skirt and ran her hand up her inner thigh and over her clitoris before curtailing her flow.

Now all three women looked in awe as the student’s trousers began bulging and he put his book down. Sharon reached down and unzipped his trousers, his dick springing to attention. Nothing was said as in silence Sharon knelt astride the student and began to ride making the student come in less than thirty seconds.

“Thank god he isn’t gay.” Sharon thought to herself as she continued to ride him, not letting his penis have any opportunity to deflate until they climaxed together, the student for the second time as Sharon began barking then howling as the orgasm overtook her and she again began to wet, this time soaking the students trousers.

“I think I’m stuck, give me a hand.” Sharon called as she tried to climb off of the student’s now flaccid penis.

Denise and Tracy came to her rescue and lifted her off as her now stiff legs straightened.

Sharon now sat back in her seat and with a smile on her face like a Cheshire cat she completely emptied her bladder in to the upholstery.

An announcement came over the loudspeaker from the driver. “The next stop will be Upminster. Change here for Lakeside and Tilbury.”

“Our stop.” Said Denise as the three women got up off of their soggy seats and made their way to the door, Sharon enjoying the double dose of sticky cum now oozing out between her legs.

The three women smiled and blew kisses to the student, now rather red faced and trying to work out what to do about his soggy predicament as they left the train.

“One up to Granny.” Said Sharon. “I don’t know how you expect to get pregnant if you don’t have sex, both your mother and I had babies at your age, you don’t want to leave it too long Denise, I’m already overdue for a great grandchild, it’s tradition now.”

Denise grimaced at her grandmother for pressuring her to have children but accepted that it was the family tradition to continue the female line and she did not use contraception to prevent nature taking its course. Sharon had triumphed through experience and now Denise had to watch and learn if she was going to win at this game.

Denise headed for the kiosk to buy some drink followed by the others. Sharon was now enjoying the fruit of her efforts as cum continued to seep from her vagina and began to ooze down her legs. The only thing that Sharon had done differently was to pee openly in front of the student instead of normally in her seat and Denise would need to refill her bladder to repeat Sharon’s show.

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Chapter 2 – Denise tries again

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After they had detoured via the food kiosk the three women made their way to the waiting Tilbury train, drinking as they went. Again they trotted along, looking through the windows for suitable accommodation.

“This will do us.” Said Denise as she spotted a young man about her own age that she thought she might stand a better chance with.

Again they sat down in three adjacent seats opposite the young man. This time Sharon, sitting in the window seat, wet herself first, just silently releasing enough into her seat to make herself comfortable.

As she sat down in her aisle seat Tracy realised that Denise had made a mistake. The football shirt gave it all away. The only way he was going to get a hard on was if Gary Lineker boarded the train. Tracy thought that she might as well try so she twisted to face him, opened her legs and smiled.

While he glanced Tracy’s way several times and must have caught a glimpse of her bush he was unmoved.

Denise now took the initiative and stood up with her feet apart and released a spurt of pee. Instead of falling neatly between her feet as she had intended it jetted forwards soaking the man’s feet and ankles.

“You disgusting cow!” He exclaimed as he got up and shook his feet and moved round to the next bay.

“It’s always best to say hello before you pee on someone.” Said Sharon wisely.

“Unless he’s already got his dick inside you.” Added Tracy reflecting on what Sharon had done earlier.

To Tracy it seemed silly to waste time while there was a competition on so she got up walked down the carriage stepped into a bay and sat down.

As Tracy sat down in the middle seat she kept her knees apart, ensuring that the two men sitting opposite got a good view. Sharon and Denise now moved down to see what Tracy was up to sitting in the opposite bay so as not to crowd her style.

“Oooh!” Exclaimed Tracy as she noisily released a spurt of pee into her seat.

Tracy now stood up, “Oh my god I’m wetting myself” she said and with her legs together began to pee, making a gentle hissing noise as her pee trickled down her legs.

For about a minute Tracy stood letting her pee soak into her shoes and making a puddle on the floor as she twisted round to look at the wet patch on her seat and discretely at the two men’s crotches. One of the men was now shifting about uncomfortably in his seat.

Tracy stopped peeing and sat down between the two men snuggling up close to the uncomfortable one. “I’m sorry, I hope I haven’t offended you” said Tracy in a pathetic voice fishing for sympathy to the man she was snuggled up to.

“No, not at all. Accidents will happen, at least you didn’t get your ‘ankle warmers’ wet.” Said the man now smiling.

Tracy now put her hand on the man’s crotch and unzipped his fly.

“Fuck me.” Tracy whispered in his ear as she took his hand and pushed it into her own crotch.

The man stood up and Tracy slid down into her seat as he knelt before her in her puddle of pee. The man’s engorged penis was now projecting from his trousers as he thrust it inside Tracy making her gasp as it entered.

For two minutes he thrust away before they climaxed together, drawing the attention of the whole carriage as Tracy gasped and grunted in orgasm.

As the man withdrew and sat back down beside Tracy Sharon and Denise clapped. Tracy lay back and for some post coital relaxation she peed again, this time her recumbent position ensuring that the back of her dress was soaked as she peed through her skirt into the seat.

As the train approached Lakeside the three women prepared to leave. Tracy sat up in her seat and thanked the man for fucking her and apologised to the other man. “I hope I didn’t disturb you too much.” She said.

Sharon washed away the cum stains she had made on her seat with a spurt of pee and Denise released a token spurt of pee into her seat as she totted up the score in her head “Granny one, Mummy one, Me none. How am I going to get fucked in Lakeside?” she thought to herself.

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[Dicky63 22]

waiting for the next chapters hope they will be here soon

[Paulypeeps 5,287]

I think there will be a long wait. It is quite hard to write for three concurrent characters that are competing!

[Alfresco 11,632]

18 hours ago, Paulypeeps said:

I think there will be a long wait. It is quite hard to write for three concurrent characters that are competing!

Is this not a series that you wrote some long while ago?   I am sure I have read it before - at least the first chapter.  Maybe on Omorashi.org?  

Are you saying that these two chapters were as far as you got and you may not progress further?    Even if it was from a while ago and you haven't written any more, it would be great to be able to hear more of their exploits if you feel like continuing the storyline.

[Paulypeeps 5,287]

I have partially written a couple more chapters, but I am struggling. They are from a while ago.

[Alfresco 11,632]

I always find that once the initial "flow" of the writing has gone, it is very difficult to get it going again and make it fit naturally with the existing.  I have had several series that I intended to continue but then never did.

Good luck if you decide to continue - it is certainly a story worth developing.

[A_AShes 538]

So lovely!!! Pity I was for years on a wrong train... "not much wee at Maningtree..." Thank you Paulypeeps - happily smiling !

[Paulypeeps 5,287]

1 hour ago, A_AShes said:

So lovely!!! Pity I was for years on a wrong train... "not much wee at Maningtree..." Thank you Paulypeeps - happily smiling !

The wrong part of Essex...

[Adyguy6970 877]

I'm enjoying it tremendously.  Any chance of some action in Braintree?  

[Paulypeeps 5,287]

I guess they could get the wrong train home...