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Yes I enjoy others' short stories as well. When I try to write a short story, ideas rush into my head and I have to keep going. Total immersion is what I aim for in mine. I like creating a detailed scenario that slowly builds to an awesome pee scene. If I do it right and the readers are into the characters and context then the pee scenes mean so much more. That's IF I can get people invested in the story, which doesn't always happen but it remains my goal. But at this point most people know what to expect from me.

I am sure there are people who prefer short stories and then there are those who prefer long stories. Those that like long ones will naturally drift toward writers like me, assuming they like the material to begin with. I write for me but also try to stay mindful that others are not in my head and their minds may not go where I intend if I don't fill in most of the details. I also try to avoid stretching it out too much. I am still finding my balance but I think it gets a little better with each story. The one I'm working on now is by far the longest I've written and I'm seeing if anything cou

Fire2ninja I always welcome feedback so I know how in tune I am with readers. I doubt you will anger anyone. I think we are rather cool here given this fetish. I agree 100 percent with you that the pee parts were a little thin. The thing is I try to avoid making these too long and lose someones interest. I already removed an entire paragraph before posting. This is why I had the car peeing and the food peeing as well as the urn scene to get enough pee material overall. I dont want to sacrifice buildup story either so its basically a balancing act that I am still learning. Thanks for the eval

You know, I'm not usually into seeing women pee themselves from desperation. The whole pee dance thing and the soaking of the pants just doesn't do it for me, I like to see the pee flowing from her body. But I do like the idea of Amy being denied and peeing herself in a revenge scenario because she deserves it. I'm working on the next Goddesses story right now but Amy's payback story will happen afterward. I didn't intend to make Amy's story a recurring one, I just wanted to break away from my fictional worlds for a moment. Now I am juggling 3 story lines lol.

Hot little story. I would love to be with woman that's up for doing something like this. Your bf is lucky. Word of advice, I take it this is a true story and not fiction. This is the fictional stories area. You want to post true stuff under the experiences tab. If it is fiction I apologize.

I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite thing about this is how they innocently fall into enjoying it. Also the additional element of the camera was very well integrated and took the story to a whole new level.

You know what, you just gave me an idea right there. Like maybe Clyde's niece or granddaughter finds out what happened and ends up caring for Amy and exacting revenge. Oh yeah...definitely doing that in the near future, thanks to you, sir.

Amy's Dirty Piss Revenge Amy is a nurse in New York City. She is a very attractive 5'9'' 24 year old, brunette with an curvy athletic body. Looking to make extra money, she volunteers to be a part-time caretaker for Clyde, an 87 year old blind man paralyzed from the neck down. His wife died 6 years ago and his sons rarely visit because he has become so difficult to care for that they are seeking a caretaker for 6 months so they can focus on their business. Amy figures it will be an easy job. Once she learns of Clyde's conditions, she is already thinking of slacking off, knowing he can't

Thanks I'll check it out.

Hey everyone. I've always enjoyed voyeur pee footage. I love watching women in their natural methods, without the influence of performing for the camera. My favorite by far is the hidden cam stuff of women hovering over public toilets. Anyone know of some really good free websites? I am familiar with eropofile, notonlyporn, even pornhub has a decent selection. It would take too long to name all of them that I've checked but I was hoping someone knows sites I don't. For example I love realvoyeur but its a pay site. A lot of free sites have some of their stuff but there are always ones I cant fi

I love this. Very good visual. Nice touch with the 50 Shades of Grey and people unknowingly touching the books she soaked.

Thank you Alfresco. Glad everyone seems to enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them.

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback and encouragement. When this concept hit me I couldn't type it fast enough lol. Glad you like it. Also, I don't know if you read Femulsio part 6 but I did eliminate the unwilling sexual sadism as promised. No more lines being crossed there.

When I was 15 I went to live with my dad for the summer. Never had a really close relationship with him but my mom pushed me to try. So she drove me to his house 2 hours away. I was miserable at the idea of a summer away from my friends until I saw his new girlfriend, Monica, a tall curvy brunette. She was 34 then. She greeted us at the porch when we arrived and she was wearing just a long t-shirt with no bra and nothing covering her legs. I don't know if she had underwear on or not. Her legs were silky smooth, long and her calves were to die for, they were very thick and her tits were also re

Thanks. I figured that this new idea would be too much to stuff into the Femulsio story line so I just made an all new series. I'll add chapters to both now.

Urine of the Goddesses-Intro Introduction: 135 years after the war between women and the testervians (a female designed sex of miniature males created for labor and oral pleasure), some women, itching for new ways to conquer and control the world, decided to begin a quest to travel from Femulsio-Eta, to a newly discovered nearby planet with the intention of carrying out this plan. They named this planet Estress. They made men build 100s of ships to carry thousands of citizens to planet Estress. 1000 men and 2000 women. Testervians were not permitted to come. Days after landing men myster

This is very good. Very well thought out. The backstory here is rich and the pee scenes are really hot. I've been afraid to write stories this long fearing readers would lose interest but your story proves that's not the case at all. I feel confident to make mine longer now. Looking forward to your next one.

When I was in 12th grade I went to take my SAT for college one Saturday in the fall. One of the teachers instructing us was this hot new brunette, Mrs. Smith. I cannot put into proper words how hot she was. Mid 20's, about 5'9'' curvy, big rack, and kind of muscular because she was ex-military. Not manly bulky but ripped. She had served in Iraq. Her face looked similar to the actress Olivia Wilde. She was so attractive it was painful to be around her and impossible to focus. She was definitely an alpha female, spoke loud and clear, stood up tall and stiff, was assertive, strong handshake and j

When I was a 19 I took a job at Burger King during the summer. We had a lot of managers and employees come and go, the place had very high turnover. Most of the people working there were lowlifes. Addicts, high school dropouts etc. We hired a young girl to be a manager. She was 19 and good looking. She wore low cut pants and always had a white or pink thong visible when she bent over or sat down. Easy on the eyes. She was also a TERRIBLE manager and a terrible employee. She would invite her friends over and they would sit in a car during work hours and smoke weed and drink while I was inside

Glad I found a place to tell my stories where people are still active in the discussions. I have many stories to post. I'll start with my third grade teacher, Mrs. Robertson. This was 1997. She was very hot. Even at the young age of 8 I felt an attraction to her, perhaps not sexual but a typical 8 year old crush on her. She was white, tall, about 5'10'' very curvy, not fat but shapely. Everything on her was big. Legs, thighs, hips and her breasts were huge. We all stared at them often. She knew she was sexy because she always always wore tight clothing. Plenty of cleavage was on display and sh