Popular Post noel117x 37 Posted January 25, 2016 Popular Post Share Posted January 25, 2016 I posted this over at peesearch already, I thought you guys might like to see it as well. First attempt at this. I'm not a good writer by any means but It's something I've brewed in my head for a while so I thought I would write it down for once. Criticism welcome. Background: Aliyah: Age 20 living on her own in the city 5'10 Half-white/half-black light brown skin with tight curls that run down past her shoulders. Hourglass figure with c cup breasts and a round shapely ass. ---------------------------- 4 am too late by normal standards, but for a girl like Aliyah it was about the normal time. The main streets were all but deserted this time of night with the occasional car driving by every few minutes or so. "Letting all those guys buy me drinks probably wasn't the best idea." Aliyah thought, her head was spinning making her stumble slightly with every step. Suddenly that all to familiar feeling came back " Shit I've got to go NOW." Looking back Aliyah thought to a simpler time, going on camping and fishing trips with her father and older brother when she was a girl. At first they flatly refused to take her saying it was no place for a woman. Her mother had no intrest in the outdoors. But begged and pleaded until they eventually relented letting her finally come along. They insisted on warning her upfront that they reall liked to rough it. That ment no electricity, no heat and no bathrooms. Aliyah was too excited to care at the time but that decision would have lifelong implications. Three hours into the five hour trip that feeling came back. " Dad I really have to go!" She exclamed. "Sorry sweetie" her father said compassionatly we just past the last bathroom about an hour ago. Want me to pull over?" Aliyah gasped " No! I can't go outside!" " Well sometimes you just gotta do what you gotta do." Her brother said dryly clearly annoyed by his sisters whineing. So she did, in the bushes by the highway while her brother watched out. As it turns out peeing outside is't so bad... kind of liberating actually. All throughout her adolecence and into adulthood to this very night she has taken atvantage of every opportunity. Releiving herself where she saw fit weather it was worng or not. Aliyah was blessed or perhapes cursed, with a very large bladder. She could go all day without even feeling the need to use the restroom maybe even longer but, when she had to go she had go GO. Which could be very inconvient at times. The urge had really hit her during last finals of senior year of highschool. Aliyah hated math but her parents decided to sign her up for cauculus anyway her senior year. The only time in highschool you get to screw around. Unfourtunalty Senioritis had taken it's toll on her putting her in a perilous position. Get an 80 on her final or don't graduate. The night before the test Aliyah pulled an all nighter coffee, energy drinks and eraser shavings littered her desk. With only a few hours of sleep the night before She simply downed a big cup of coffee and hoped for the best. "Cauculus is going to kill me." She thought to herself. Surprisingly her studying had paid off, Aliyah wasn't stupid, lazy definatly but she knew her stuff when she applied herself. About half way through the hundred question test that feeling came back, it hit her like a train. Aliyah went from sitting normally to corssing her legs and leaning foward in an instant. All of those drinks from the night before have come back to haunt her and that big cup of coffee this mourning was the catalyst that was about to make this bomb go off. Here in the most important test in her high school carrer her annoying bladder was about to ruin everything. She looked at the board and read those words which had those terrible words etched in. NO BATHROOM BREAKS. The worst news she heard all day, but she had to try. She slowly raised the hand that wasnt on her crotch "Ma'am may I please use the restroom please?" Aliyah said pleadingly. Aliyah and her cauculus teacher wern't on good terms. Aliyah never paid attention the few times she even showed up for class and had no sympathy for girl even now. "Finish your test first unless you want a zero." The teacher said. Aliyah's heart dropped. She was about to wet her seat in front the class eighteen years old and you have no bladder control? She'd be mortified. She could just get up and leave, but that would mean failing senior year. The last thing she wanted to do was stay here another year. "I've worked too hard to give up now. Im just gonna buckle down and finish this." With newfound determination aliyah focused on her test abit more hurridly.The need of her bladder growing exponentionally with every passing moment pushing herself to new limits. Finally 30 agonizing minutes later her test was finished. After carefully (or as carefully as you can be when your about to nuclear) reviewing her test for mistakes aliyah slowly stood up afraid she would lose control any second. One foot after the other she slowly mader her way up to the teacher's desk, getting some strange looks along the way. "Here you go ma'am." Aliyah said shakily. The teacher looked at Aliyah with suspicion " Your the first one to finish are you sure you want to turn in your test this early? You don't pay attention in class so I can't assume you suddenly know all of this information." There was a dull hissing sound as aliyah momentarily lost control not loud enough for anyone exept aliyah to hear. She felt it run down her legs. " Trust me Ma'am it's I didn't cheat! I actually studied this time!" She pleaded as she danced from one foot to the other. The teacher looked between aliyah and her test for what felt like an eternity "fine then, I hope for your sake this work is up to par." she scowled. "Thanks" was all Aliyah could muster as she ran out of the classroom her bladder on the verge of meltdown. But just to her luck in her frantic pace she went left instead of right. Running out to the back stairwell instead of the restroom on the right. Realizing her mistake she hobbled back to the door but it was locked! A Student or facualty ID card was required to open the door. That calculus final was the only class she had today so all Aliyah had brought was a pencil to class! Without her ID the normal restroom was out of the question. Aliyah's bladder was burning if you didn't know any better it would have looked like she was pregnant in her tight dress. "You know what? Fuck this." Aliyah defiantly said. Aliyah was a tight dark blue dress that ran halfway to down her thigh. She rarely wore pants, even then only leggings at the most. And wore g strings sometimes but most of the time nothing underneath.. easier acess. There was a small stain on where she had wet herself earlier. Aliyah was tired of waiting. She tried to pull her dress up but since she was half bending over it kept geting caught on her round ass. Using the last of her strength she finally moved out the way exposing her tight waxed slit. Hobbled jumped over to a corner out of view from the security camera and spread her legs and bent her knees slightly. Her narrow slit opened up instantly sending a cascade of pee nearly straight out in front of her and impacting the concrete wall. She sighed in releif as it just kept pouring out of her. She started feeling light headed and leaned her forehead aganist the wall while her torrent was still going strong running away from the wall and leaking down the stairs. Her loud hissing could be heard throughout the halls as her slit continued to spill out piss at an immense rate. But she didn't feel any better. Aliyah pushed harder, her clear fan shaped stream turned into a gyser spraying piss all over the lower half of the wall. Finally after over 2 minutes the flow started to subside slowing from a torrent to a trickle and eventually just a few drops. Her shoes were soaked but the rest of her legs had only a few droplets on them. A quarter of the stairwell was covered in pee with much it it running down the stairs already. This wasn't the first time Aliyah had used the school as her toilet so she didn't feel ashamed about what she had done. She stood up again and stuck her index and middle finger inbetween herjuicy lips and wiped the excess droplets from her folds, flicking them on to her puddle. In the outdoors sometimes you don't have any toilet paper and using any old leaf to wipe so why not just use your hand? You can always wash it later and you (mostly) know where it's been. Putting her dress back into place Aliyah took in the scope of the mess she had made. " Yeah..... I'm getting out of here." Quickly stepping over the puddle she ran down the stairs. No sooner was she out of sight then she heard the door open immediatly followed by a " WHO THE HELL DID THIS?!" Aliyah ran faster it sounded like the princepal "If he catches me I'm screwed." Soon she reached the bottom floor and burst through the emergency exit temporarily setting off the alarm. Aliyah ran to her car hopped in and drove home. Maybe the cameras caught her maybe not. She still graudated.. barely. -------------------------------------- Back to the present. Walking home from a long night drinking. She haden't used the restroom since early that mourning and the feeling had hit her again like a ton of bricks. " I need to make this quick." Aliyah said as she jumped into a back alley and ran behind an old dumpster. She lifted up her loose white dress and pulled her tiny thong to the side and assumed a half squat leaving her thong on one side. She put her hands on her knees and pushed as laser beam of clear piss shot out of her slit and hit the ground anout a foot in front of her with an audible hiss. "Man I needed tha-" "Hello there." A male voice which overtook Aliyah rampant hissing. She jumped slightly at the voice some of the pee landing on her thighs before resuming its laser fashion. "Is anyone there? Sorry I couldnt wait any longer. Do you work in this area?" "Oh no." the voice said "But I've taken a deep intrest in you." Aliyah's stream had finished up by then as she wiped her slit with her hand and put her thong back into place. "Uh im flattered but I don't even know you." Aliyah said as she moved from behind the dumbster into the alley. Where the man was standing. He looked just like a regular guy but something was off about him he seemed so... above it all in a way she had never seen before. The man smiled " I'll skip straight to the point, for the next year you will be unable enter a bathroom facility nor will you have to go number two. Do this for a year and you will be rewarded." Stunned and confused Aliyah repsonded " What are you talking about? Did you hit your head or something dude because you are talking crazy!" She took a step back ready to make a run for it. The man laughed "it will all make sense soon." Aliyah blinked her eyes and suddenly the man was less than a foot away his index finger touched her forehead and everything went black. --------------------------------------- Aliyah shot up in her bed her bladder on fire, her head felt strange. Her forehead felt warm but her abdormen felt warmer. Aliyah threw off the covers and rushed for the restroom. She had just taken a step inside when a crippling piercing pain shot through her head almost making her lose control. She yelped and jumped back into the doorway. "Was that crazy guy telling the truth? Aliyah stuck her leg through the doorway and the pain shot back as hard as even. " I guess he was the real deal..." Aliyah squatted and pissed on the floor of her hallway. "This is gonna be a long year." She relented. 5 1 Link to post
wetwulf 3,324 Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 Thanks for sharing this. I'm hoping there will be more chapters to this story? 1 Link to post
noel117x 37 Posted January 26, 2016 Author Share Posted January 26, 2016 Thanks for sharing this. I'm hoping there will be more chapters to this story? I have two more parts to upload and am currently writing the fourth. I'll wait a bit because I don't want to spam the board. Link to post
Alfresco 11,631 Posted February 2, 2016 Share Posted February 2, 2016 This could be a very interesting story developing. Thanks Noel, I will certainly be looking forward to more. Link to post
steve25805 126,023 Posted February 10, 2016 Share Posted February 10, 2016 It is great to see so many new story writers contributing to this forum. That side of things here is really picking up lately. Nice work, Noel. :thumbsup: Link to post
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