Elevator ride from Hell

[BadBoy21 591]

I wrote another fictional story for you guys.  However, I will say that my friend Justin has pissed in an elevator with me in it, several times before.  But the rest, well, one can dream I suppose...

 

Elevator Ride from Hell

I wouldn't believe if it hadn't happened to me.  It was after midnight and I had just gotten back to my apartment building.  My hands were full of plastic bags, bursting  of groceries.  I was determined to make just 1 trip so I really stuffed these three bags with as much stuff as it could manage.  I was weebling my way to the elevator, just as one of my neighbors had stepped back inside from having a cigarette. I have seen him a few times, but I don't know too much about him, except the fact that he has absolutely no problem parading around in his underwear.  I can't tell you how many times I have come home at night and seen him out front smoking, grabbing his mail, either in boxers or just a regular pair of black undies, barefoot too.  We would say hi in passing to each other, but that's it.  I don't even know his name.  Tonight was no exception. Barefoot, no shirt, black undies.  I would be lying if I didn't say that I admired such confident, I don't give a fuck behavior. He was beautiful, and I often find myself staring at his athletic build, and light brown hair.  I hold the elevator door for him.  He smiles at me as I try desperately not to gaze mesmerized at his crotch. 

"what's up man?  Seen you around here, I'm Charlie,"  

"I'm Chris," I shift my bags to extend my hand to him, just in time for him to stick his hand in his crotch to scratch, then uses same hand to shake mine.  I mean, amazing, not a care in the world.  But here's the real kicker, just as soon as the doors are closing, he walks over to the corner and instantly pulls out his dick and unleashes the loudest, fullest gush of piss I think I have ever heard or seen.  

"Sorry bro, gotta piss."  I am dumbfounded at this moment, I just stuttered a bit, but finally managed to eek out a plain "its fine."  The piss was so yellow, and so strong in smell, I actually could hardly stand it.  I hear him audibly take a whiff of the stench and laugh, both repulsed and impressed with himself.
"oh fuck that stinks bro," laughing as he looks back at his dick.  

"yeah, it really does man," I add, hoping to appeal to his sense of decorum and civility, but clearly to no avail as he just chuckles at my remark.  I found myself watching the cascading stream, trailing its way all throughout the elevator floor, washing over his bare feet, making its way to where I was standing too. It was already getting a little hard to breathe, and I remember thinking this elevator is notoriously slow.  As I stared at the growing ocean of piss, practically filling the whole elevator floor, I suddenly start to hear one of the plastic bags beginning to tear.  Oh shit.  I am thinking I need to grab the bottom of that bag to reinforce it but as I begin shifting bags around, I hear the other bag begin tearing a little too.  And then the third one.  The river has come to me, he has successfully filled the whole floor with piss, that was still coming strong, only 20 seconds into it with no signs of letting up. I start to panic now, 

"Dude, stop pissing, I think my bags are about to rip."  But he was scrolling on his phone, clearly not hearing a word I said.  30 seconds, still gushing.  I don't think I ever had peed so much at once in my life.  
 "Dude please stop, my groceries are about to fall out".  Still didn't pay me any mind.  I am afraid to swing the bag towards him to tap him and get his attention, guaranteeing my bag will bust open.  Hell maybe he just can't hear me over the sound of his piss bouncing off the metal.  "Dude, stop!" I shouted, finally getting his attention. 

"What's up bro?" He turns a little more towards me, still pissing.  

"Stop pissing please man, my bags are about to tear. Got like two hundred bucks of food here." But just as I said that, all three bags bust open at the same time. Food was cascading all over the floor in every which direction, cans, apples, bread, everything, some making their way directly under the waterfall.  
"oh shit" I hear him utter, but uttered with a sense of laughter to it, not remorse.  I see him trying to hold back laughter as I watch the herbs and vegetables get soaked as he continues pissing, still not caring that he was practically directly pissing on my food.  So I quickly got down on my knees, trying to at least salvage the fruits and veggies and other open food, filling up my arms with the piss soaked items, my pants and shirt now covered in piss.  He must have decided he wants to get a better view of me frantically trying to save my food, so he turns more towards me, though not head on but giving me a much clearer look at his dick.  And he's still going, now unable to stop himself from laughing, watching me as I pick up some items and drop some, trying to divert as much food as I can out of his direct stream,, getting my arm pissed on, some of my shoulder, back even got my neck too.  "The fuck bro, you trying to get a shower or something?," laughing as he erupts a 4 second monster belch.  

We are at 50 seconds, and I kid you not, I swear the water was rising in there.   "Man, what the fuck is wrong with you stop!" He's only half listening now, alternating between his phone and watching me panic.  I stared at disbelief at his dick still pumping out so much piss without any indication of letting up anytime soon.  It was almost surreal.  I instantly started to get paranoid about the elevator stopping because of the piss getting into the shaft and messing with the engine wet or circuits, or whatever the hell that can make an elevator malfunction.  He will make it to his floor and I will end up getting stuck in here because the elevator will stop, all my food will marinate in piss, the air so thick with ammonia that I would pass out waiting to be rescued in an hour or so later.  How can he just not care about what he was doing to me?  How is it that he just thinks he can get away with this?  I tell you he wasn't concerned in the slightest.  Every time i grabbed and tried putting one more item of food in my shirt, another two or three fell out and rolled back to the waterfall.  Not that it mattered at this point, my shirt was soaked in piss, the food I managed to bring to my corner of the elevator was sitting in a puddle of piss, and the rest was literally getting pissed on.  I just finished my pay check, I just can't throw all this away.  I was at the point of tears, and I found myself pleading on my wet piss soaked knees "Please man, stop I can't afford to throw this out. Please!"  He didn't notice me.  "Dude, I am begging you, stop man!" this time unable to fight back tears.  Now I see him looking straight at me, chuckling with this disgusted look in his face as if I was the most pathetic guy in the world. And he just kept on pissing, clearing his throat and spitting it against the wall,, the slimy deposit oozing down.  

Slowest fucking elevator in the world.  I felt like I was trying to stop a leaky faucet that was gushing water everywhere.  I was soaked from head to toe at this point.  To add insult to injury I hear him begin to whistle too, joining that pounding sound of water hitting metal.  God this is a nightmare!  Finally after an eternity, the elevator dings at the 11th floor, his stop.  Thank god!  But he doesn't stop pissing, seems that he wants to finish.
"Dude hold the door for me would ya?"  At this point I don't know what was more outrageous, the fact that he had the nerve to ask me, not being in the slightest bit bothered about ruining my food and covering me in piss, or the fact that I actually obliged and held the door with my arm, which of course made me drop some more food back into the piss.  At which point I gave up and just dropped the remaining food onto the floor, surrendering to my fate.  He turns his body more facing me and takes a few steps forward. I guess at this point whats a few more degrees, now practically head on perpendicular to me, his dick is practically 6 inches away from my face, letting me witness head on twenty more seconds of pissing, making for a grand total of 1 minute and 24 seconds. I just stared at his dick, finishing up the last little bit of piss,  His instrument of destruction I watched him swaying his hips left to right, being sure to give everything a final wash down, one item at a time like he's enjoying some target practice.  He opens his mouth a little and cocks his eye to smirk a bit as if he's teasing me with this aim and has the nerve to spray a few seconds of piss directly on my thighs as I stayed there on the ground, even splashing a bit on my chest, the biggest grimace that finished off as a satisfied humored laugh before going back to the food.  He actually just pissed on me and now is literally playing target practice with my food.  I mean at this point, that's all that was left.  He had thoroughly decimated any remaining dignity.  I simply sat there and watched him finishing it off aiming at the now soaked boxes of cereal.  

"God Dammmn bro!  That's a fucking record i think." He flicks his dick dry, right in front of me, splashing my face and lips, his dick so close I could literally kiss it.  That smirk on his face, he's really proud of himself. "You gotta admit it bro, that was a good one," he says, looking down at me, sitting on my knees in his piss before his dick. Did he actually expect me to agree with him?  The man just completely destroys my groceries,  my self esteem l, my dignity and he wants me to agree with him as if he did a good thing or something worth celebrating. At that point, I truly had no more fight in me, like I'd been through a marathon.  That was truly the final thing he could take from me, and i just decided to give it to him.  I return my gaze from face back to his dick that he's still flicking right in my face, continually returning drops left over, fighting back tears again.

"Yeah...it was," I submitted, which he returns with real smug, satisfied smile. He then yawns and slowly puts his dick back into his underwear, scratches his balls and heads out the elevator, not before stepping on my bread and soggy box of cereal, ripping the box open, with his piss soaked yet most beautiful bare feet, cereal now spilled onto the floor mixing more with the piss. "Nice meeting ya bro, have a good night, catch you later." I watch him walk down the hallway, whistling again.  I still couldn't help but admire that body.  That beautiful chest, strong and tan, and the most beautiful ass I have seen, strutting through the hallway in his underwear like he owns the place, not a care in the world.  The door closes and I look down at the graveyard of groceries.  Every single item was soaked in piss.  When I got to my floor, I had to take off my shirt and used it as a makeshift bag, a wet piss soaked bag to get most of my groceries outside.  I stood blocking the elevator as I grabbed all the items out of the elevator and laid it on the floor. They were so saturated with piss it left a puddle on the ground as I laid them there.  On my hands and knees reaching in piss puddles for soaking wet food, just to place it on the dirty floor, into a separate piss puddle.  I watched the empty elevator door close, watching piss drip out the cart into the elevator shaft.  I completely reeked of piss, it was so potent I could barely handle the smell.  I got the food to my place and I washed everything a dozen times as much as I could.  I couldn't just throw away all the food.  Everything still had that smell of piss.  I swear even the sealed items I could still taste piss. I was so angry and frustrated I just cried all night, reviewing my entire life and how and why it brough me here.  I threw all my clothes in a pile on the bathroom floor, too tired to do anything to it.  I swear the smell of piss permeated throughout the entire apartment. It felt as strong as it was in the elevator.  I was having a hard time breathing. As it turned out, the smell lasted for a few days.  I guess the piss soaked into the floor or something.  Everytime I came home, I was greeted with that lingering smell, bring me back to that night.   And I couldn't shake the awful reality that whatever this stranger saw in me, he was absolutely positive that he could do this and get away with it.  He could sense that weakness within me with terrible precision,  He looked me in the eye and felt no reservation. no reason to hold back or show kindness and just did whatever the fuck he wanted. My mind just raced that night, lying in bed staring at the ceiling, dizzy from the stench of piss filling the entire apartment I cant bear to think of how much piss I ended up eating in the following weeks.  

I continued to run into Charlie.  He never made any effort or attempt to apologize, each time we ran into each other.  And we shared elevator rides since, and each time, without fail, he pissed in the corner, now chatting with me all the while like we were friends now.  I guess after that first time, he knew he was right about me and could keep doing this and that I wouldn't stop him.  Without hesitation, I mean even as we are in the hallway heading to the elevator he starts pulling his dick out and with that first step inside his dick instantly unleashes its fury, sometimes not even going to his corner but rather dead center.   Did he only piss in the elevator when I was there?  Did he actually save his piss just for the elevator? What I do know is that elevator will forever more reek of piss, no matter how much maintenance cleaned it.  After our elevator rides together, I had to always leave my shoes outside the apartment door to air out for hours before I bring them inside to stink my place up again. I made that mistake a few times, thinking I can just rinse them off, ended up sleeping with that terrible smell of piss all night. The fumes of his freshly laid piss, burning my lungs, wondering about any long term repercussions to my health.  It was like even his piss was truly mocking me.  Still, no matter the precautions I took, my place always sort of had that faint aroma of Charlie's piss.  Whenever I have friends over, I can just see it in their faces that they can smell it, even though by now I hardly notice it anymore, further proving the fact that this man has had a lasting impact on my life.  Now, as weeks have gone by, I was still unable to let that night go, the night where my life became taken over by Charlie's piss.  Finally I couldn't take it anymore, one elevator ride up, as he was pissing once again in the corner, bragging about some girl he just fucked the night before at some house party, filling the air with the most putrid piss stench known to man, I couldn't hold my peace this time and loudly interrupted him,
"Man I can't forget what you did to my food that night.  I told you to stop but you kept pissing.  Dude you pissed ON ME  Why man? "
He turned towards me, still pissing and started to laugh, with that same pitiful look that is burned well into my memory, showing me his magic wand of destruction, slowly filling the elevator floor again with yellow, putrid piss.

"Fuck yeah bro, I remember it too,   Good times bro," he sighed, aiming his piss at my feet, laughing as the elevator slowly made its way to the 11th floor

 

Edited October 10 by BadBoy21

[peeman89 46]

Come on have a little decency Charlie 😂 at least repay for the groceries 

[TylerHasFun 1,034]

Fuck yeah!  God damn bro, u a real good writer.  U remind me of a good story I got for ya, i will tell ya about later

[BadBoy21 591]

Hey everyone, So I decided to try and search through images, to find that match to the remnants of an image in my mind as to what Charlie looks like.  Then suddenly I found it, and holy shit, it is practically EVERYTHING I had in my head.  So let me introduce you to Charlie:  https://www.pinterest.com/pin/530017449888305646/

I don't know, just thought it'd be fun, maybe it gives the story a new dimension for you.  

[SVN 2]

This is sooo hot! Love it! Wanna do it too on someone's property.

Edited Wednesday at 11:57 AM by SVN

[BadBoy21 591]

On 10/16/2024 at 7:57 AM, SVN said:

This is sooo hot! Love it! Wanna do it too on someone's property.

That include the groceries as well or just the elevator?