hentaixt 1,580 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 We'll see how it goes from there... This is the 1st story I wrote in this genre, so be kind. It's several years old now and can be found elsewhere, so not big that I'm posting it here again. Let me know what you'll think and I may post my others. :) The amusement park was nothing special, big enough to draw visitors from nearby states in the summer months, but never overly crowded even during the busy season. Living in the same town meant that you bought a yearly pass deal and could visit almost anytime. Sabrina had just turned 14 and her present was a new cell phone. Her parent felt she was growing up enough to have one and were trying to entrust her to handle situations on her own. Her Mother had decided to drop her off at the park and secretly follow her for part of the day. It had been rather quiet... Kelly, Sabrina's Mom, had been doing a good job of staying hidden while still keeping an eye on her young daughter. It had been almost four hours of hidden following; she had decided that one more hour would be sufficient. Surveillance meant that it had also been four hours with no bathroom break... Kelly was beginning to feel the uncomfortable pressure in her bladder. Whatever had possessed her to buy that 52 Oz. free refill drink, she regretted it completely. Sabrina had just started into line for one of the coasters. Kelly knew this would give her a few minutes to dash off to the restroom. She checked her map to confirm the nearest ones, right by the food court. Doing her best not to be seen by her daughter and mask the painful urge in her bladder, she made a beeline for the bathroom. Her heart sank as she got closer. A large crowd of women were gathered around the entrance, nothing too unusual, the lines were sometimes long but moved fairly smoothly. Then she saw the signs, the bathroom was blocked! Kelly decided panic was not going to help, so checking her map she scanned for next set of facilities. Her heart sank again and panic set in anyway... it would be at least a 10 min hike to the next restroom. She began to survey her options. "Pardon, what's going on?" "It seems that a rather large woman has passed out from unknown causes. The paramedics are on the way, but they can't move her till they get here, bathroom is off limits till who knows when." Answered a woman near her, no luck there. Kelly checked her watch, then her bladder... still holding but not for the 10 minutes it would take to get to another toilet. Beyond that, if she went that far she would lose track of her daughter. She had no choice, she needed to find relief. She started slowly back the direction she had come from; her eyes had a different sight now. She was scanning for safety and seclusion. "No not there, maybe there... no too visible from the side. Uuuhhnnn...," she groaned with her need. She had almost made it back to the coaster when she saw salvation. On the side of a building was a stack of fiberglass boxes, making it look like a delivery entrance was down the alley between two buildings. She verified on the map it was a dead end. She trotted as fast she could to her makeshift heaven. The excitement and anticipation were enough to make her relax a little... a little too much! She felt the warmth spread just a bit, it had only been a squirt. Any longer would have spelt trouble. She ducked behind the boxes and fumbled with the button and zipper on her jeans, her legs were set, so in a single motion her jeans and panties were at her knees and her rear hovered from her squat to the ground. Not a moment passed; the flow was fast and golden yellow. "All that soda...," she remarked. Kelly watched as the puddle grew and trickled away. The fast flow had calmed and was now a trickle as well but she knew that it was nowhere near gone. "'Xcuse Me?" Kelly froze, her muscles clenched tight. "Terrible sorry to startle you... May I join you?" Kelly turned slowly to see a fairly athletic built British women peering around the boxes at her. "What?" Was all she could muster for an answer. "The trouble with the loo over there... Looks like we found the same spot. I'm dying for a slash. May I?" "Oh. OH!! OHSURE!" The strange woman came around and stood in front of Kelly where she was squatting. This surprised Kelly and she made to hide her muff. Kelly had been toying with the idea of shaving to surprise her husband. She also found that the amount of hair she had was sometimes uncomfortable, often getting caught in elastic of her panties and getting yanked. She had done a very modest trim job, nothing like a swimmer or porn star. Kelly watched as the Brit fought her jeans and panties, she could not help watching... it WAS right at eye level. As the woman squatted, Kelly got a good view... her embarrassment washed away. This woman had three times the hair she had before trimming! The stranger let out a deep sigh and the floodgate broke. Kelly swore there had to be a fire hose in that mass of hair... then it increased in volume. "Were you done, Sis?" Kelly broke her stare and looked at the woman directly as her face went flush. "Sorry I-I didn't... I didn't mean to~" "No worries, Sis. Can't say I don't watch too." She said with a smile. Kelly relaxed and started to pee again, steady and even; her now companion gave a few small squirts and appeared to be done. She fumbled through her purse and removed a pack of tissues. Taking one she wiped twice and tossed it over her shoulder before standing and replacing her garments. "You need one?" The Brit inquired. "Huh? Oh, please." "Here, keep the pack. I got more, nev'r know when you need one again." "Thanks." Kelly replied. The woman responded, "Well I'm goin' nick off, cheers." "Bye." As the woman vanished, Kelly had finally finished. She took a tissue and wiped, but held on to it to dispose of it in a can. She checked her watch and panic returned, she would lose track of Sabrina! With fastidious movement she re-appropriated her clothes and made a dash for her hiding spot. Scanning the area there was no sign of her daughter. She held her position, with a keen eye on ride's exit... Ten minutes passed with no change. She had failed. Her emergency had cost her the mission. Kelly sat in thought, and then it struck her! If she called her daughter to check on her she could find out where she was without arousing suspicion. She dug out her phone and scrolled through the list for Sabrina's number. "Hey Mom." "Hi Hon, how's it going?" "I'M FINE, stop worrying. Besides I made a new friend. I'll introduce you to her when you pick me up." "Oh that's great, what's her name?" "Caitlen... Oh, gotta go Mom, our food's here. Later." "Bye." She was at the food court... then reality came to bear on her mind. Sabrina passed right by her while she was relieving herself in the alley! If she had been seen she would not only have been busted, but how would she explain the situation... peeing in public; with a stranger none the less! Kelly felt light-headed; it was time to call it a day. Gathering herself, she checked the map to find a route far around the food court back to the entrance. There were no further incidents and once she was safely in the car she decided she would do some shopping at the nearby mall until time to come back for Sabrina. Next time... The two girls met at the park quite often. About every other year the park would announce the destruction of a roller coaster in favor of building a new one. They would always advertise on TV for a month before the coaster's final close down. "Come enjoy ONE LAST RIDE!!! FINAL DAYS!" The ads were always the same, but it was an excuse to go. Caitlen would always call and Sabrina was always ready. "Can you believe this is where we met 4 years ago?" Caitlen inquired. "Seem so short now, doesn't it?" "Yeah... These lines are always wicked long before they close one." "I know, but I guess that just means loyalty." Sabrina replied. They continued to banter on as the line crept slowly forward. It was only mid-morning, but it was late in July and already the heat was apparent. The line moved again. "I can't wait to see-Ee what coaster they put up next." Caitlen started. Sabrina saw it, Caitlen stuttered because of a shiver. It was the tell that things were about to get wet. Caitlen was incorrigible about "doing her business" anywhere she chose. Sabrina found this out the first day they met. They had been waiting in line for the same coaster when they got to talking; they stayed together through the line, and when it came time to enter the car they sat together. They were both seated, the bar dropped, but Caitlen would not stop fidgeting. "Are you Ok?" Sabrina inquired. "Sorry I really gotta go." "Why didn't you say something we could have got out and come back?" "Nah, it's alright. I got it." Caitlen assured as a response. The ride had just started to move and Caitlen had finally stopped moving around. Sabrina had just turned away when she heard it, a splashing sound. She scanned around and gasped when she spotted the source... Caitlen had adjusted the wide leg of her shorts and was peeing on the floor of the car. She sat in stunned silence; Sabrina watched the arc shooting forward and pooling on the mat beneath. Just before the crest of the first hill the flow disappeared back to Caitlen's right leg hole. Finally able to focus her mind, Sabrina started to speak... too late; Whoosh!! As the coaster applied the air-brake approaching the station, Caitlen spoke first, "Wooo! I always love this coaster." "What were you thinking?" "Huh?" Caitlen asked quizzically. "You just 'went' in the coaster." "Oh that. I do THAT a LOT. It's reeeaaallly fun." "Seriously?" Sabrina was puzzled this time. "Oh yeah, I've done it for years. I know tonna good places in the park. You gotta try it." "No, I couldn't." "Sure, we'll start you slow." Caitlen insisted. The two made a direct path for the food court, Caitlen in front dragging Sabrina in tow. Two 52 Oz. free refills were purchased and one went to each girl. "Drink up. You'll need it for your first time." Caitlen asserted. Sabrina did not argue and gulped at her straw while following along. Caitlen knew the way; they were headed for the Gravity Drop. The up-and-down drops always did a number on her bladder, she was sure it would work to up Sabrina's need. They got in line and between drinks Caitlen explained how she got her hobby. "I've been coming here by myself for some time now. I was almost 13 when my parents let me come alone for the first time." She sucked down a drink and continued. "Several times I've seen mothers sitting young daughters on the sinks when all the stalls were full. I was too old to try that, but I was jealous. It looked like such fun..." Another long drag from the cup, "I decided that I was going to make my own fun place." They left the drinks and climbed on the ride. After the typically short ride, Caitlen took the lead again. Drinks in hand, they were now headed for the Children’s Zone. It was a small town with little fake houses and themed character statues. Darting through the town, they headed for a barn/garage building in the back. There was a talking car housed inside and the barn looked much like a living room for decor. "We're here." Caitlen stated. "Right over there, if you walk under the rope and between the arm of the oversized couch and the truck you will be completely hidden from view. I used to duck back and jump out to scare my mom when I was younger. Come on." Caitlen drug Sabrina by the arm under the rope. "Wait we can't go ba-" Sabrina did not even finish before Caitlen hushed her. The area was more open than she expected, and some errant cups and paper were the only other things around. The floor had carpet on it. The carpet had several stains around the limited area. "Most of these are mine, the cups too." Caitlen said with a smile. "Well let’s get ready." In a single motion Caitlen shed her shorts and frilly undies over her shoes and laid them across her right shoulder. Directly where she was standing, near a stained spot, she squatted and leaned back using her arms for support. Sabrina stared wide-eyed and sipped at her drink unconsciously. Not even an instant passed and the gold flowed in an arch from between Caitlen's legs. Caitlen laughed and bucked her hips up and down causing the stream to change altitude and distance. Sabrina was in awe, her gaze fixed like she was burning a hole into Caitlen's tiny muff. Sabrina moved by instinct, not will, she stepped forward and knelt close by her recent friend's leg. She peeked over the thigh and moved in close enough to smell the heavy scent, still sucking the end of the soda through the straw. The scene only lasted a few more seconds; Caitlen shook a little to scatter any last drops and plopped onto the carpet below. "So, now you want to try?" "Do you think I could really do that?" Sabrina asked. "Sure, might take some practice, but it's easy. Won't know if you don't try." Sabrina removed her garment the same as Caitlen, shorts and panties resting on her left shoulder. Getting into the same position was easy, what came next was not. "I can't go, it doesn't feel right." "Just relax, it will come." "Ok." Sabrina closed her eyes as she answered. Time passed, still nothing. More time and nothing but a few drips. Caitlen spoke, "Do you trust me?" "Sure I guess." Caitlen's hand cupped Sabrina's slit, immediately a finger was probing her opening. "Oh OH God, WH-what are yyy-yyou doooiiing?" Sabrina felt electric... she started to pant huskily and feel light-headed. "I feel it, it's-it's sooo close." Sabrina shook, her body tightened, and then she burst! Her stream shot out and splashed against the fake couch and dribbled down to soak into the carpet. It only lasted ten seconds and she was spent. "That was great! I knew that would do the trick." Caitlen cheered. "Wow, that WAS fun. What did you do to me though?" "Oh, just a little massage, always loosens me up too. I'm starving and it looks like we need refills." Caitlen got up and put her panties on and then her shorts, Sabrina did the same. They walked the path back to the food court and got in line. They had just ordered and paid when Sabrina's new phone rang. "Hey Mom." "Hi Hon, how's it going?" "I'M FINE, stop worrying. Besides I made a new friend. I'll introduce you to her when you pick me up." "Oh that's great, what's her name?" "Caitlen... Oh, gotta go Mom, our food's here. Later." "Bye." Caitlen grabbed the tray as Sabrina went white. "What's wrong?" "That was my Mom, Kelly." Sabrina answered. "So?" "So if she had called 10 minutes ago we would have still been peeing. How would I have explained that to her?" "Don't be a prude, besides everything's fine." Caitlen reassured as they found a table. "Yeah, I guess you're right. So where do we 'GO' next?" The girls giggled and ate their food. amusement_park.txt 1 Link to post
hentaixt 1,580 Posted January 9, 2014 Author Share Posted January 9, 2014 Back to the present... The line was still barely moving. Sabrina had see Caitlen shiver, which was always the first warning for an impending wet event. "Are you going to make it?" Sabrina asked. "Sure, we'll be fine. This is just the seal break, no worries." "How you going to do it?" "Just follow my lead." Caitlen instructed. The line shifted again and the girls were nearing a bend in the path. One more shift and they were in the corner. Caitlen slid into the corner and pulled Sabrina directly in front of her. She carefully slipped her shorts and frilly panties three forth down her thighs and leaned forward into Sabrina. This allowed her to squeeze her rear even further into the corner. "Ok, we clear?" Caitlen waited for the response. Sabrina scanned right then forward before whispering, "We are GO, GO, And GO." Caitlen gave a little push and the flow had begun. Being wedged so tightly in the corner her fast flowing stream impacted the wall and produced no noise. The force was the only concern; it was splashing back and spraying her fanny with droplets. "You about done?" "Almost." "Well someone is starting to stare, and the line is about to move." Sabrina warned. "We're Cool." Caitlen was already wrapping her arms around Sabrina's waist, that was the second all clear. The girls shuffled in line and looked back to survey the damage. Sabrina gave praise, "Wow, quite impressive. Doesn't even look unusual." "Yeah, I'm impressed too... Got out at least half." "Where is the puddle?" "Ah ha-ha! There is a floor drain on the other side of that wall." "Very nicely done." Sabrina praised again. The line drug along and the girls began chatting again. Sabrina was recalling about a recent party she had attended. It had been an after graduation party at someone's house and all seniors were invited to attend. Beer was on tap even though she was not drinking anything but soda. The two bathrooms in the house had endless lines and zero privacy. As she wandered by the open door she was not too surprised to find one girl on the toilet, one in the sink, and three across the bath. What did shock her was the guy standing in front of the girl on the stool aiming his stream deftly between her legs! She surely was not going to wait in line for that, so she began searching the house for alternatives. There were people everywhere, the backyard was packed... even the garage was being used as a second dance floor. Her urge was growing quickly. The line for the restroom upstairs ran to the bottom of the steps. She squeezed past up the steps pretending she was looking for a friend. Once at the summit she heading in the opposite direction and was greeted with the closed doors of family bedrooms... instinct took over from there. Trying three doors found them to be locked, the forth yielded access. She snuck into the room and concealed her entry by closing the door behind her. Sabrina surveyed the room; clearly she had found her way into the room of a teenage boy. Strewn about the room were various items, skateboard, piles of clothes, video games, a weight set, etc. The walls were plaster with images of women in various states of scantily clad clothes or partial nudity. The pain in her bladder came back and she scanned again for the right spot to get relief. She rushed over and opened the sliding closet door, boxes packed the floor; no luck there. Turning back she decided the pile of clothes next to the bed was her best option. She hiked her short miniskirt up and removed her hip-hugger panties. She straddled the large pile and used a hand on the bed for balance. Sabrina closed her eyes and relaxed, it would take a small bit of concentration to start. She never could get over her anxiety of going in unfamiliar places. She took a couple of small depth breaths... the signal had been sent. The patter against the t-shirts and jeans allowed her to open her eyes. In the dark she could not see her flow but knew from feeling that it was there. Shifting the curtain she let in the moonlight and watched her arch dance in the light. She was close to being done when she felt something by her fingers on the bed... it was paper. Closing off her flow she lifted the mattress and found a stash of porn mags. Still squatting she thumbed through one or two, mostly women with big breasts and lesbians. At the very bottom of the group one caught her eye. There was Chinese text on the cover and an Asian woman was seated on a toilet with a roll of paper in her hand. She opened to the first pages and found what she expected; it was a urine fetish magazine. Sabrina looked at this one with more intent. Women of various ages were in a wide variety of poses. Each shoot was the same; the girl would remove a bra and panties, show a spread her opening, insert a dildo, then in the final shots would be peeing in some fashion. One of the girls was going on a tile floor; several were outside... one particular set grabbed her attention. This one featured a young girl urinating on a skateboard. Perking her head up, Sabrina scanned the room for the board she had seen. Still holding back her remaining storehouse, Sabrina got up and changed her location to above the board. Continuing to flip through the book she finished her toilet by swaying her hips and spraying down the wheels and deck of the board. Once empty she grabbed an errant porn mag and wiped herself on the cover soaking part of the image. Collecting the mags she placed them back under the bed and reset her panties and skirt. Before heading back to the party, she turned the lock and took one last look around the bedroom; the occupant would have no idea a beautiful girl had relieved herself on his clothes and perused his porn collection. Sabrina smiled at the thought and slid back out the door. Back in line... Caitlen and Sabrina final rounded the last corner to the loading area. Caitlen began counting, "1... 3... 8, by my guess we are set for the front car." Sabrina replied, "Good that will be perfect." The line moved along and placed them in the front car as expected. Sabrina spoke again, "Are we ready?" The coaster moved forward on its rails. Each girl was fidgeting in her seat. "Set!" Caitlen exerted. The car stopped just outside the station preparing for the climb. "GO!" Both girls exclaimed together. Two golden flows shot forward and splashed against the mat of the car. Caitlen on the left had shifted her shorts and panties to the right, Sabrina on the right had shifted her shorts to the left. The arches matched like mirrors of each other, even color was the identical. Sabrina ebbed first, three quarters the way up. Caitlen continued almost to the top before her flow subsided. The coaster ride was the same as always. Caitlen spoke as the coaster applied the air-brake approaching the station, "Wooo! I always love this coaster." "You always say that." "Yeah, but it's always true." Sabrina just sighed as they pulled in and disembarked. Caitlen looked at her watch and was surprised that it was already 2:00, she suggested lunch be next. After lunch the girls wandered the merchandise stores to let their food settle before the next ride. Both girls were carrying the standard 52 Oz. free refill cups. Wandering here and there, the girls found themselves in a clothing shop. Both found several outfits to try and they both entered the same dressing chamber. Caitlen had no intentions of actually buying anything she had brought and Sabrina knew it. They stripped out of everything but bra and panties, Caitlen piled the cloths on the floor and squatted on the built in wood chair. She shifted her red panties and released. The piss was water clear and rained down over the merchandise. Swaying, Caitlen soaked as much of the fabric as she could before her bladder emptied. Sabrina tossed a few new items down and decided to practice her standing. She removed her blue panties and hung them on the hook next to her. Spreading her legs she adjusted her fingers on her lips and let fly. It was clear that Sabrina needed the practice, the stream sprayed in droplets mostly landing on Caitlen! "Aaaahh, hey watch your aim!" "Fine I will." Sabrina replied as she gave up on the clothes and shot directly at Caitlen breasts and tummy. The girls laughed and once Sabrina was spent Caitlen picked up a sweatshirt and toweled off. They dressed and placed the drenched clothes on the hook and hastily left the shop. The girls got refills on their drinks and rode some other coasters. They decided that it was warm enough that a log flume ride would be the perfect way to cool off. They both got soaked and of course drenched the car themselves. "Guess you shouldn't have worn a white shirt... I can see your bra." "What is your excuse then, I can see you have a red one on." Sabrina retorted. "We should go take them off and just leave the white shirts on." "Ha-ha, yeah let’s do that." They headed to the restroom for the only time all day and wasted no time getting in and out. The cool dampness was refreshing on their skin and in no time the chill made Caitlen's nipples stand up. It was getting late, the park always closed at 6:00PM this late in the year, and Sabrina suggested they had time for one more ride before they headed home. Caitlen was studying the map. "I got it! Follow me." Sabrina acquiesced, "Alright, since you know... Take the lead." "It will be perfect." Around they went, toward the front of the park they finally arrived. The line was vacant and showed no signs of changing. The two navigated the serpentine aisles and ducked under some of the chains. They loaded immediately and the ride took off. The cart pushed through some doors and the two were greeted with the story of Cinderella. The ride effects were simple, mostly posed mannequins with outfits and some taxidermy looking animals around. "I always hated this st-Ory." Caitlen wriggled beneath the security bar. Sabrina knew that was the shiver again... Caitlen managed to snake free and hopped out of the cart. She walked along for a second then darted around the next bend. As the cart came around Sabrina saw Caitlen altering the mannequins. It was the scene where the step-sisters had wrecked Cinderella's dress; Caitlen had pulled the damaged dress down to expose the breasts on Cinderella figure, which actually had full nipples. Caitlen then lifted the skirt of the two step-sisters and made it appear that they were presenting themselves to be serviced as an insult. "There that makes this better." Caitlen walked next to the cart again for a few scenes. She ruffled the red carpets, dropped the pants on all the men at the ball including the prince, and filled the glass slipper with end of her soda. "Alright I need your help for the last part, hurry!" Sabrina was able to lie across the seat and press herself under the bar and hopped out near Caitlen. They quickly ran to the last scene of the ride. They stripped the outfit off of Cinderella and replaced the shoe with the mop bucket. "It's missing something..." Caitlen declared. "Better hurry, our cart should be coming in just a second." "Shoot, it will have to do." They sat back down in the cart as it passed and slid back under the bar. Just before the wall opened Caitlen asked, "Do you trust me?" Sabrina replied, "Sure I guess." Caitlen grabbed Sabrina; one hand under her shirt on her breast and the other on the back of the head to draw her in and kiss her. Suddenly they were back at the loading platform. The male attendant stared wide-eyed... Caitlen broke the kiss and sheepishly asked, "One more time around?" The attendant mumbled and nodded, but did not reset the security bar leaving it in the upright position. Once in the doors again, Sabrina broke free of Caitlen and they both climbed out. "Why do I ever agree when you say that?" Caitlen said mockingly, "Because you do and seldom regret it. Come on, I know what we need to do." Sabrina just smiled as she rushed around the corners to catch-up. Caitlen was already busy soaking every mannequin with her golden jet. Sabrina took up the cause and started on a dry one. They moved from scene to scene spraying everything they could. Once they were satisfied, they took turns squirting bursts into each passing car until their cart came around. They jumped back in and reappeared at the loading area. The attendant's spirits seemed to drop when he saw them sitting quietly in the car. As they disembarked Sabrina spoke, "Thanks again, honey." She grabbed Caitlen's shirt and flashed her tits to the attendant, he nearly tripped over backwards. The girls left the park and headed for the car. "Nice touch flashing the guy." Caitlen remarked. "Yeah, I had to get you back for the kiss." "We should make out more often to get stuff." Sabrina smirked, "It WAS kinda nice and the reaction was priceless." "Boys can be sooo easy sometimes...." End 2 Link to post
steve25805 125,827 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 I have of course read these and many of your other stories elsewhere. By all means post more of them here. They are just the kind of thing many of us here like to read. Like you, at the moment I am mostly lifting already existing stories from elsewhere, but sooner or later I will get around to producing new material. 1 Link to post
nopjans 1,178 Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 This is another favorite of mine. Thank you for sharing it again here. Link to post
quinny234567890 0 Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 I have of course read these and many of your other stories elsewhere. By all means post more of them here. They are just the kind of thing many of us here like to read. Like you, at the moment I am mostly lifting already existing stories from elsewhere, but sooner or later I will get around to producing new material. same Link to post
NaturesNinja 0 Posted April 23, 2014 Share Posted April 23, 2014 Great story. I hope to read more. Link to post
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