AirBnB pee vandalism fun

[Peejoy 128]

this story is about a naughty girl named Julia and her perverted night trashing a Airbnb , it includes pee vandalism and destruction , golden showers , and intercourse

Butterfly’s filled Julia’s  stomach as they were getting closer to the AirBnb she and this hot guy had rented for the night. Both had no intentions of sleeping there and had rented it under fake names. Julia had always been a perverted naughty girl obsessed with sex and especially peeing. Her silk shorts clenched her big round ass cheeks and her crop top allowed her perky nipples to be seen under the clothe. She clenched her pussy tight as she felt her pee needing to be released. “ I’m so ready to trash this house with you baby” she almost moaned and she jerked her dates rock hard cock as he drove. “ we will cover all of it with our urine” he replied with a smirk on his face. They pulled in to the driveway and a wave of excitement came over her knowing they were actually about to do this. They walked inside to see a cute little house with a livingroom , kitchen and two bedrooms upstairs. Julia felt herself get wet as the man grabbed her ass cheeks from behind and pulled down her shorts leaving them at the front door. She took off her top and undressed him . “ I need to go release” she said with a naughty smile “ so do I” he said “ how about the livingroom to start off?”  Julia came in and kissed him deeply grabbing his tongue with her lips and sucking on it “ let’s start destroying this house!”  She pranced over naked with her ass cheeks clapping towards the livingroom. She kicked over a plant onto the floor in the process and grabbed and ripped up a note saying “ welcome to our home”. She jumped onto the couch and spread her legs “ ahh finally she moaned” she relaxed her wet pussy and spread her labia. Golden yellow piss shot out of her urethra raining down on the unprotected couch surface And she could not care less. She wobbled her pussy and golden urine splashed all over the couch and the carpet below. She watched with glee as it started to soak into the fabric. “ that looks so much fun! “ her date said as he pushes his hard vainy cock into her mouth and started throat fucking her. He then started peeing right into her throat and pulled it out to soak more things in the house. He jumped on the wet couch and sprayed piss all over the livingroom damping the carpet to a darker colour . He then spayed all over the expensive tv coating it. They both got a smirk as we both pushed the tv off it’s pedestal and watched it crack onto the floor, we coated the broken tv with piss and then grabbed it again and threw it at the wall leaving a huge hole.  They laughed and started fucking in their piss on the floor, making out deeply as his hard cock pushed so deep into her unprotected pussy. They both still had more pee in them. Julia was in heaven she had never been this horny . She climbed on to the kitchen table as spread her ass cheeks showing her tiny pink asshole and spread her labia. Pee shot out and landed with a splash onto the table below. Her date started fucking her hard as she pissed and they knocked off plates and glasses onto the the floor were they smashed to bits. Her date open all the cabinets and pissed into all the bowls going back in forth with his dick. He stopped at the cabinet holding the most expensive ones and pushed it over . Julia’s Pussy tingled as she watched them all smash to bits and the wood crack . They fucked so more in the destruction occasionally ripping down paintings and smashing holes in the wall . Pissing their last drops onto the carpet . They finished everything with a huge cream pie in Julia’s throbbing pussy and rubbed the contents on the furniture. They grabbed some food from the fridge and breathed in the smell of there urine that the house now had. Tonight had been a great night!. 

[GoldHelix 2]

You've got potential, but you're  grammatically inconsistent with repeated switching between third person and first person along with Julia being named, but the man isn't. 

You could also stand to use paragraphs, as the way I'm seeing it on my phone it's just a long block of text. Which brings me on to the most important point, timing. It feels incredibly rushed, both in writing and in plot, as if the characters spent less time in the house than I did writing this comment, you introduced a living room, kitchen and two bedrooms upstairs, yet the bedrooms were never explored. And what was the purpose of taking the food? Eating it? Stealing it? Using it in further vandalism? 

Like I said at the beginning, you've got potential, but you need to take things slower. 

[Lutab 1,052]

I like where you are going with these. Very hot setting for this one. I do think it could be improved by more practice. Keep it up. 🙂

[Maggie_555 1,621]

Please don't be put off by any negative comments as I'm guessing any grammatical errors are possibly caused by your excitement while writing this story. The same with lack of paragraphs too I'm guessing. It's so easy, when excited, to just let the words tumble out! 

Pee vandalism is a huge turn on for me so I hope you'll continue to write stories here.

[Peejoy 128]

On 8/31/2020 at 2:25 AM, Maggie_555 said:

Please don't be put off by any negative comments as I'm guessing any grammatical errors are possibly caused by your excitement while writing this story. The same with lack of paragraphs too I'm guessing. It's so easy, when excited, to just let the words tumble out! 

Pee vandalism is a huge turn on for me so I hope you'll continue to write stories here.

Thanks for your support! I’m new to writing so I’ll definitely work more on my grammar in future stories. I love piss vandalism too and it’s so hot you’re into pissing in pools! I once went into a crowded hot tub and pissed with people right next to me it felt so naughty