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An exciting and very intense fantasy that you put on paper there.
On the one hand, very pointedly, but at the same time also rich in detail, the action develops a great dynamic as it approaches the climax.
What this will look like can be predicted, but is nevertheless described excellently.
The real highlight, however, is the excellent final sentence.👍
Very nice to read. 🙂

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