Golden Hours: The Beginning - Part 1

[Gotah 2,245]

Alright everybody, a few weeks ago @Peefreak99 encouraged me a little to write a fiction story and so here I am trying to be creative!
But before I start I'd like to explain a little something on what's going to happen 'cause I got an awesome idea haha.
Since the majority of the stories here are mostly about women peeing I always had this thought that maybe female members of the forum might get a bit annoyed by that and would like to read about male desperation as well. Because of that, I decided to write a story with both, a desperate peeing man and a desperate peeing woman, so that everyone can enjoy it ... So guys, be warned haha.

I would like this to become a series of many stories ... And maaaaaybe I will also add some illustrations as this "project" progresses. However, I'll only keep writing if I notice that you enjoy the tales, otherwise I will leave it to this little anecdote.

*BACKSTORY INFORMATION*
It's about two twins, boy and girl, Milo and Ellie who are very close (in a non sexual way, let it be understood! .. this is not an incest story whatsoever) and they shamelessly share the passion for peeing with eachother. One day they decided to start a little vlog-like video series called "Golden Hours", created for people with the same passion, where they do random everyday stuff as they both get more and more desperate until bladders burst.

And this is their very first episode togehter ...

*caution: lots of dialogue ahead

The camera gets placed on the tripod, their faces are in focus and without hesitating the play button gets pressed. A bit of shyness overcomes the twins as the both stare, nervously smiling, into the camera lens. "Hi guys!", says Ellie as Milo waves at the camera. She continues: "Sooo ... Hahaha ... I' am Ellie and this is my twin brother Milo, we are both 24 and we both love to pee and having full bladders and be desperate to pee ... and yes, we really are twins!" "But we don't have sex with eachother", Milo tries to make a joke to forget about his nervousness. Ellie laughs half heartetly and goes on: "No, we don't. We sure have a more intimate relationship than most siblings, but nothing that makes us feel the need to kinda ... erm ... fuck eachother, basically." "Haha, nicely put, Ellie .... Anyway, let's explain a little bit what is going to happen right now. Ellie and I have always enjoyed peeing for, pretty much our whole life", Milo looks at his sister as she nodds. "Literally our whole life", she adds. Milo goes on: "Yeah, and we were never really ashamed to expose ourselves in front of the other to empty our bladders, it has always been very natural to us and  ... and yeah, we just share this passion with eachother and ... yeah, now we would like to share it with you." Another look at the camera with a smile from both. "We were a bit skeptical at first if we should do this for real", Ellie says "but eventually we decided to give it a try and see what happens. We said that we would like to try it once and then see what we think ... And what you think, if Milo and I should keep doing this or not." Milo nodds and continues the conversation: "Basically what we want to do is very simple, we drink alot and then film eachother, one at the time, how we get more and more desperate until we burst." "Yeah, and all this while we do stuff like ... I dunno ... cooking, shopping ... erm ... just random things basically, to keep it simple." "And for today my sister and I decided, since its our very first video and we're not confident enough, to keep it VERY simple and just do a little hike through the forest while getting ... erm ... desperate." He looks at Ellie and she smiles. She claps her hands and says: "Ok .. let's do it!"

A cut. Milo is seen drinking a huge bottle of water while being filmed by Ellie as she comments on the situation: "So here's Milo who is just about to finish his water bottle ... and I ..." She turns the camera to herself "have my bottle right here in my little backpack 'cause I am going to start drinking as soon as Milo starts to feel desperate, because we don't want to feel the need to pee at the same time, because maybe we wont be able to film as good since the camera might get a bit shaky because then we'll probably cross and uncross legs or hold our hands in our crotches to keep everything in, bounce around, you know, as you do when you need a piss ... are you done?" The camera moves back on Milo as he nodds with his mouth still full of water. "Oh ..." , Ellie puts herself into the frame again "by the way, I don't know if you already noticed earlier but we are not native english speakers, so apologies if we mess up sentences or words or whatever ... We try to speak as clear and correct as possible." "Yeah", Milo says off screen. "Alright brother, let's go for a walk!" "Let's do this."

The twins are a few steps outside town as Ellie starts filming again, while talking with a bit of a whispery voice: "Alright, we just left our little hometown and are already in the woods, we are lucky enough to have a lot of beautiful nature all around us and yeah ... Milo doesn't need to pee yet, sooo ..." Camera on her face "we'll have to wait a bit more."

In the next frame they rest and Ellie presents her water bottle to the viewers. "Ok guys and girls, I just started drinking, which meeeaaaans that Milo starts to feel a bit of ... erm ... pressure." Milo poppes up with crossed legs but doesn't seem very hyperactive yet. "How you doin' Milo?" "I definetly feel some pressure ... But I can hold it." "I can see you cross your legs .. is it maybe more urgent than you say it is, hahaha?" "No, I am fine you will notice as soon as it's urgent." "Yeah I know ... It's quite crowded today, Milo. More than usual, it's difficult to film without people noticing ... you think you can pee without getting caught?" Milo laughs: "Yes I can, and you know why, because I am a man and we find a secret spot everywhere ... This is probably going to be a bigger problem for you, haha!" "Oh man, yeah ... Haha ... not looking forward to that. But right now, let's see what happens to you!" "You excited?" "I kinda am, haha .... Right guys, I'll finish my bottle and then we'll see you soon!"

The screen fades to black and a caption appears:

*20 minutes later

Ellie and Milo walk deeper into the forest along the path and he is bended over because his bladder is finally screaming for relief. "Fuck", he whispers exhausted. "What's wrong Milo?", Ellie mocks him. "I gotta pee." "Did you hear that guys? Milo is bursting haha." Her brother moans. "Hold on, Milo" "What do you mean?" "Stop for a moment." Without hesitating he stops and immediately crosses his legs. Ellie walks a few steps back because she wants to have his whole body in the frame. Milo looks at her desperately. He bounces around and starts holding his crotch. Ellie on the other hand starts to talk to him and their viewers: "You good?" "No" "Milo is desperate haha." "How about you?", he mumbles. "What?", Ellie asks. "Do you need to pee already?" "Uuuuuuh, I start to feel something but ..." Milo moans again and bends over even more. His sister starts laughing. "Can you hold it until the pond?" "Until the pond?!" "Yes" "Ugh, I can try." "Yeah let's do that. Let's go to the pond and there I let you pee." "Fine." They start walking again, Milo is in a hurry. "There's a little pond right next to the hiking path about 15 minutes from here ... Guess we'll have to let Milo suffer a bit more." In pain Milo says jokingly: "Oh you gonna pay for this afterwards." "Haha, I can already feel the pain just by looking at you."

A caption appears after the screen goes black again

*We arrive at the pond

Milo is exploding. All around the pond and it's grassy area is a fence. The twins walk along it to find the entrance. Milos hands are sealed into his crotch. "Here we are, Milo. You're about to relieve yourself, you happy about it." Milo barely pays attention to her and mumbles again: "Yes". They reach the entrance and Milo already starts to unzip his pants. "You gonna pee into the water? Haha". He doesn't answer out of pure desperation. "Oh god you really can't can't hold it, hahaha." Milo is about to pull out his penis to finally pee on the waterside as he all of a sudden turns around to Ellie and whispers: "Shit!" "What?" Ellie says. "There's a family?" "A family?" Angrily whispering he secretly points on the other side of the pond: "There's a family over there ... Fuck, I gotta pee!" 

 

 

End of part 1.

[Peefreak99 3,709]

Im not a fan of male desp myself but the way you write is very good and it's not too long either keep going man:)

[Gotah 2,245]

4 minutes ago, Peefreak99 said:

Im not a fan of male desp myself but the way you write is very good and it's not too long either keep going man:)

I know haha ... Female desperation is gonna happen in part 2

[CON2H4 594]

Just reading the introduction reminds me of a story I never got around to publishing.