The hostel girl

[localdaeru 1,131]

This is one of my first tries. Please excuse any mistakes, English isn't my native language.. i hope you enjoy the story about a slutty girl named Nina.

 

I tell you a short story about a girl who took my fantasies to a whole new level!  I would never have thought that I would experience such an event by chance! 
 
It was in Surfers Paradise on the Gold Coast of Australia.  A party town with tons of clubs, bars and pubs.  It was my first long trip with a friend.  My friend Jake and I (21) stayed a few days in a backpacker hostel on the beach.  It was a former motel, which was then converted into a hostel.  With gameroom,  a basketball field, some BBQ pits, bar and laundry room. 
 
One evening the weekly Pub Crawl took place.  An event where you go in a large group through various pubs and get drunk.  Ruthlessly.  Of course Jake and I took part in the event.  In the course of the evening we got to know many extremely hot, lightly dressed and drunk girls.  Sometime in this evening we lost ourselves in a club.  So I went to the bar alone and ordered a large beer.  At this time I wore a short jeans, T-shirt and sneakers.  No underpants.  My underwear was in the washing machine, so I had to go without it.  When I waited at the bar for my beer, an extremely drunk hot blonde staggered to the bar.  I liked her immediately!  She wore a white top, a short black skirt and flip flops.  Around her ankle she had a shell necklace.  Her toenails were pink varnished.  She was also sweaty.  Her breasts were wet and a drop of sweat was visible on them. 
 
Hey, I'm Nina.  Are you alone here? she asked.  She was definitely not sober. I was a bit surprised that she approached me, because I already had some beers.  Hey, I am Bob, yes I am alone.  I lost my friend somewhere. she smiled cheekily. there was a sparkle in her eyes. she looked satisfied.  Then she asked:  Why don't you come with me?  I live in the hostel down at the beach"!  She meant the same hostel I stayed in for two nights.  Sure, why not! 
 
We drank our last drinks at the bar and left the club, which was also on the beach.  We walked along the beach towards the hostel and got to know each other a bit better.  She was a young Canadian girl who was on a trip with a friend.  But her friend was sick and stayed in the hostel.  She held her flip flops in her hands and walked barefoot through the warm sand.  She looked like a sexy angel.  Arriving at the hostel, we sat down on a bench in the courtyard.  I briefly fetched two cold beers from my room and we drank a few sips.  Nina's skirt kept slipping upwards, she stroked her soft hands over the inside of her legs.  She knew exactly what she was doing!  Suddenly she said:  I want to show you something.  Let's get out of here.  Today I discovered a gameroom in the basement.  There is a big pool table.  Do you want to take a closer look at it?  How could I have said no!  So we sneaked quietly through the door, down the stairs and into the empty game room.  The pool table looked completely new.  Immediately we started kissing wildly.  My hand slipped up to her pussy, which was totally wet.  I lifted her on the table and lifted up her skirt.  To my joy she had no panties on!  I wanted to lick her immediately, her pussy pulled me on like a magnet.  But she pushed my head away again and said: sorry just a moment, I have to get rid of the beer again, my bladder is bursting!  I can't hold it a second longer!  Panically she looked around the room.  But there was no toilet.  Just a big fabric sofa, a TV, an armchair and the pool table.  I saw the panic in your eyes.  Shit what am I doing now?!  I have to piss! Now! 
 
My cock almost exploded.  I started a try: Never mind, just piss here fuck it!  I want you, I can't wait anymore!  Piss here and let's have fun.  Don't worry, nobody will notice anything, its just piss.  Her panic in the eyes turned into something else.  In her eyes I saw a sparkle again. a lustful sparkle. suddenly I saw a smile on her face! 
 
Sit down on the sofa and enjoy the show! she said. 
 
I obeyed and sat down on the sofa.  I couldn't imagine what was going to happen.

Are you ready? I'm gonna explode!

She leaned back on the pool table and spread her legs apart.  She was now on the pool table, under her skirt I saw her shaved beautiful teen pussy.  She spread her pussy with two fingers apart and let it run!  The hot piss splashed through the room.  She moaned loudly, almost screamed.  Oh yes! The piss squirts!  The piss splashed out of her pussy and flew into the air.  One part landed on the pool table, which soaked in immediately.  The carpet was soaked and the piss splashed even up to the sofa on which I sat.  She really gave me a golden shower!  I couldn't believe it! I felt the warm salty liquid on my lips, all over my face and my body.  I saw her lying there, her bare feet on the pool table, the cheeky little beast pissing all over the room!    It splashed through the room for a whole minute.  Everything was wet! It was a huge mess! Her beam was slowly getting smaller and then she was done. She moaned contentedly and smiled.  I couldn't believe what the 20 year old Nina just did!  She soaked the whole room without any shame!  I couldn't stop myself any more.  Immediately I jumped on her and fucked her hard.  Within a few seconds we both came and had a gigantic orgasm. breathing strongly we lay on the pool table and were totally exhausted. And soaked in her piss. You cant imagine the smell which was in this room... i'll never forget!  Nina began to laugh loudly and said: Shit, that was awesome!  You little dirty pig. You pushed me to do that! 

Nina stayed for two more nights in the same hostel.  It was not our only adventure!  The game room was closed the next two days however.  It was only a small note at the door: This room remains temporarily closed for cleaning.

[WantonLee 861]

Nice one for a first try! 😉

There is some minor critique, or rather feedback, I'd like to give, though:

I think it would be better to use quotation marks to highlight when someone is talking, like this: "Hi there", Nina said.

instead of

Hi there Nina said.

I mean, yes, you can easily guess which part is the talking, but with quotation marks it just enhances the readability.

 

Another minor thing is the way you are telling the age of the characters. Maybe put it in like this for you and your friend: "Me and Jake were 21 at that time, and it was our first time (or "not our first time", depending on what you prefer) we stayed in a hostel." Something along those lines... .

Also, telling the age of Nina like "the 20 year old nina did this and that" kinda sounds odd, but maybe it's just me. I think it works better if the story is told by a neutral observer; if you tell the story from the perspective of one of the characters, it begs the question how he knows the age of Nina, without being told in the first place.

(However, I am not quite sure who to integrate Nina's age in a casual way, especially in a story as short as this one.)

 

Again, these are minor points of critique, and I am aware that you haven't asked for critique. English is not my native language, either, but I think my points are not very much language-related.

Anyways, I am looking forward to your next ty! 😄