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Relieved Myself from the Bed


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Your description of the events of that special night, is quite laconic and calm this time.
Your narrative progresses leisurely, as you report to the reader, what your sharpened senses perceive.
More than that you piss twice & sleep, basically doesn't happen at all, and yet you manage to convey an enormous spectrum of your emotions to the reader.
A really fascinating panorama of human coexistence that you develop there. 🤔

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