Relieved Myself from the Bed

[Starks2010 2,142]

Back in 2013 my girlfriend at the time and I took a trip to New York. She was a regular public pisser. Anyway we get to this motel and crash for the night. Her and I weren’t saying much to each other because her mood changed every time the wind blue it seemed like. 

During the early morning hours I had to take a piss. She was on the other side of the bed sleep, so I thought. 

Laying on my side with my back to her, I pulled my dick out from the leg of my boxers, pulled the covers back and relieved myself right on the carpeted floor, off the side of the bed. It was so arousing letting my stream fly and not knowing where it was landing. I let my stick drip after, stuffed it back up my boxer shorts leg, put the cover back over me and went to sleep. 

Later that morning when she got up she said she didn’t sleep well. First someone opened the room door in the late night hours and closed it when they realized someone was in the room, then she said she heard water running. I told her it was me pissing. She acted if she was disgusted. All the places her drunk ass had pissed. Hypocrite. 

She gets up and goes in the bathroom to piss and get cleaned up. I got up wearing just boxes, walked over to the wall outside of the occupied bathroom, pulled the front of my boxers down to get my penis out, and proceeded to take a nice, long, warm, morning piss on the carpet just in front of the wall. I shook my semi-erect penis, put it away and went to get washed up. 

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Your description of the events of that special night, is quite laconic and calm this time.
Your narrative progresses leisurely, as you report to the reader, what your sharpened senses perceive.
More than that you piss twice & sleep, basically doesn't happen at all, and yet you manage to convey an enormous spectrum of your emotions to the reader.
A really fascinating panorama of human coexistence that you develop there. 🤔