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  • 3 months later...

Simply first-class, how you manage to build up an enormous tension in this relatively short text. A tension, that not only increases for you, due to the increasing need to piss, but also for the reader you take with you on your tour around the junkyard. At the end of the story, I was just as relieved as you must have been, that you could finally piss in the van, as you yourself described it there. Outstanding. 👍🙂

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