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I really didn't think your writing deteriorated in the slightest....  you'd built up the tension, the waiting, the holding...  we'd joined in wondering if you were going to make it and then the ultimate climax.  Once you'd exploded it's natural to take a deep breath and start to relax - and that's where we were too. It's natural for the pace to relax and the story to reach a conclusion.

Hope the relax as you did run to the bathroom was just as good!

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