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Broccoli

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  1. 10 hours ago, Alpian said:

    Great series! If you don't feel like continuing, it might be best to leave it at that - you should stop when it's best.

    But: I'm definitely longing for more of the same from you, maybe with different people and a new setting?

    After your kind feedback I somewhat continued the story today. Its a different story, with a different main character, but connected to part 5 and 6 of this series.

     

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  2. 1 hour ago, Lutab said:

    Good start. I look forward to them all soaking that empty room with piss 😜

    Are you a Mentalist? Because I just finished writing part two and this is exactly what is going to happen. And I swear, I had not planned it in the beginning! The whole room change was originally intended to show how fate is favoring the opposite. But I'll guess soaking the room will show some kind of fortunate fate too....

     

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