Thank you very much . It's my very very first attempt ever . I wish I had read it more before posting as I was horrified at the wording . It was just typed up on a kindle and the auto spell was a nightmare. It kept changing words . The story is actually based about 90% on a real life situation . Obviously names have been changed but the main character (sarah) is based 99% on a real woman i know . She's lovely in real life ,but without doubt a natural femdom .😉 and yes she really does have a huge bladder! I hope to continue a small series , (even with her help) as and when time permits .