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  1. On 3/19/2019 at 12:46 PM, spywareonya said:

    (one of them just after a marvellous black girl fingered me among the crowd, I just cummed and she smiled at me and indicated the sofas, I grabbed her hand and told her to wait, she threw this "why?" glance at me and I just smiled -while peeing- and after that I sighed while looking at her, and said "Aaaah, much better now" at which point she looked between my feet and saw a puddle all clubbers were already stepping in)

    I have to ask, how did she react? 

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  2. Not sure if this was a genuine sighting or not. My local gym has a sauna attached to the swimming pool, and I often go in there after a swimming session (bathing suit compulsory sadly). Today when I went in there were two older blokes already sat in there, talking about something or other. There's always a big puddle on the floor in this sauna -- today it seemed particularly big but that might not be anything noteworthy. Anyway, not long after I'd sat down, one of the blokes, who was sat on the lower level of seats, lifted his feet off the floor and rested them on the opposite wall. There was a very slow trickling sound, which I assumed at first was just water running out of his flip flops. But the sound lasted a long time, a good few minutes. It sounded exactly like he was pissing through his trunks and letting it run down through the bench onto the floor. But I'm not sure. He was talking to the other bloke all the time, and neither of them acted unusual. If it's true that he was peeing then I very much admire his boldness, to just casually let go in front of a stranger -- I've never known anything like that before, especially in the UK.

     

    I half wish I had joined him, and if I'd been confident that's what he was doing I might have. Instead I held my pee until I got back in the pool and let it all out there 😉

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  3. On 2/26/2019 at 7:37 AM, Admiral said:

    Hey, any news if you will be continuing with this storyline? I absolutely love it! 

    Hi! I plan to, but not for another month at least. I've ended up quite busy lately, mostly because it's the final year of the course I'm on. I've been ill recently too which hasn't helped (though feeling much better now). My course finishes next month, and after that I should have more time. I have ideas I want to do, but until this deadline passes I really doubt I'll be able to do much, sorry. Glad to hear you like the series! 

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  4. Thanks for the comments everyone -- sorry for the slow reply, I've been travelling a fair bit the past few weeks. Your comments are all lovely!

    On 5/19/2018 at 8:05 AM, new2this said:

    I really enjoyed it, but I think it could have used a sex scene.

    Yes, I had originally planned to end with something like this, but when I came to it I didn't think it fit. Also, I didn't want to end up too 'formulaic' as the two previous chapters both ended with a sex scene as well.

    On 5/24/2018 at 7:01 AM, CON2H4 said:

    I feel the cigarette ruined it for me. I hate it when beautiful people smoke.

    Otherwise excellent

    Generally I agree with you in that I'm not a big fan of smoking either. But, when I've stayed in the kind of hostel I was picturing there seem to be people sat around smoking and drinking, so that's what I was thinking of...

    On 5/24/2018 at 10:25 AM, W1ll_B said:

    Can I ask, does that name  "Kaymala" mean anything special, where that name comes?

    And can I ask, where you live, and is English your native language?
     

    Yes, it was based on the Finnish word like you said. Mostly because I find it quite hard to come up with names from nowhere. I had a vague idea in my head where I wanted the country to be (somewhere around Sweden/Finland) so I google-translated various words into Swedish and Finnish until I found one that I liked the sound of ... hope the name isn't too distracting for native Finnish speakers like yourself!

    And to the second question, I'm from the UK so English is my native language indeed.

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  5. I'm always open to comments by the way, let me know if there's anything in these stories that doesn't feel right or doesn't work for you. Always looking to improve 😉 This chapter is the one I've been least happy with so far this series ... but short of a complete rewrite I wasn't sure how to improve it. Hopefully it's enjoyable nevertheless!

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  6. On 4/16/2018 at 7:08 AM, CON2H4 said:

    Also if you pretend intersex and trans people don't exist.

    True that. My local pool as a child had unisex changing rooms with cubicles (not open plan of course!) which works a lot better imo. I almost deleted that line because it's not much to do with the story, but it's been a bugbear of mine for a while. Anyway, thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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  7. On 20/03/2018 at 12:42 PM, whiskey35 said:

    Great series of stories BeneathMyWillow, enjoyed them. :) May be you'll revisit the characters again when they start university?

    I'd certainly like to at some point, and I have a couple of ideas for that arc, but I'll probably leave them for a month or two; I have a couple other projects I'd like to work on first. 

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