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I actually read the entire story. I like that you made Ashley and Adrian less enthusiastic in general and especially with the pee parts, showing that even those not into pee can enjoy it on occasion. Have you done this yourself? The details in the story make it seem like you speak from experience, like adjusting the watch for time differences and how the approach to conversation changed in the cab ride after the first encounter. Those are very specific so if not drawing from experience that is really good attention to detail. And I see that you definitely have a lip biting fetish as well lol.

Good stuff, keep it up.

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On 4/30/2017 at 2:53 AM, Brutus said:

I actually read the entire story. I like that you made Ashley and Adrian less enthusiastic in general and especially with the pee parts, showing that even those not into pee can enjoy it on occasion. Have you done this yourself? The details in the story make it seem like you speak from experience, like adjusting the watch for time differences and how the approach to conversation changed in the cab ride after the first encounter. Those are very specific so if not drawing from experience that is really good attention to detail. And I see that you definitely have a lip biting fetish as well lol.

Good stuff, keep it up.

(I just realized I never responded to this super nice feedback--curse you, finals! Sorry it's coming two+ months late.)

Nah, this is all my very overactive imagination, but I'm glad my fixation on details came through. And now that you mention that I totally do lollll

Thanks for reading, and also for posting your own unique stories on the forum. :)

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